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ranajay_ria

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Posted: 25 April 2008 at 4:04am | IP Logged
guys here




n goes to her house


mrs a opens the door



m- tu aa gaye




n- hmm


ma- tu jake fresh ho ja




n- ok


n goes to fresh up



after sometime n comes



n- ma aaj r sir ke ghar main party ha main kya phennu samaj main nahin aa raha ha


ma- mere red saree pehen le


d- kya saree di aap plz kuch classi pehen ke jaaye ga




n- par kya


d- ek min di



d gives n a packet



n-kya ha is main


d- open it di


n opens the packet


n- yeh (makes a face) yeh toh kitna chota ha aur backless bhi nahin main isse nahn pahen sakte


d-plz d pahen legeye na aap is main bohot khobsurat lage gi




n- ma kya karu




ma- mujhe nahn pata




mrs a goes from there




n took the dress in her hand /stands infront of the mrrior




n- waise itna bura bhi nahin ha




n-wears the dress


after some time n come out from her room


d- di u r looking like ashwarya rai




n-off d


d- d ek min


n- ab kya


d - take my red bag wth this



n- ok dadima



d hugs n



n- ma main chalte hu




ma-thik ha par jaldi aa jana



n- ok ma



n goes to the party




shekhawat house is decorated beautifully guests have started coming


na- wah party ho aasi




r is sitting at the bar and drinking



na- raj tu abhi se pi raha ha




r- hmm




na- kya huya tujhe come on r aaj tera birthday ha




r- toh kya karu



na- kya huya r




r- na aaj n ne mujhe wish tak nahin ki




na- bhul gaye hoge now get up



r gets up from the bar



dadi- ladies and gentleman aaj mere pote r ka birthday ha main aap sab ko thanks kahena chahate hu ki aap sab yahaan aaye mere bete ko wsh karne. r beta plz yahaan aao




r comes to dadi




dadi- now cut the cake



r bent down to cut the cake tabhi n comes



r eyes lighten up by seeing her



dadi- kya huya beta



r- cuts the cake

everybody claps



r -give the frst piece to dadi



d smles




n is talking to mr sen




n-aap kab aaye




mr sen- bas 5 min pahele



n- oh



r comes over there




mr sen -hello sir



r- hello mr sen


r ignores n and goes from there




mr sen- n


n- hmm excuse me mr sen


n goes behind r



n- sir



sir



but r was not lisitening to n



n was fnding r but cant find him



n- sir kaha chale gaye manne toh sir ko wish bhi nahin ki




after sometime



mr sen- hum chalte hai n



n- ok



n- oh god 9:35 pm baj gaye mujhe bhi jana hoga



n- comes out from the party suddenly she sees that r is standing near a car



n- are sir


n goes to r



n- sir



r- hmm



n- happy birthday sir


r- hmm


n- yeh lejeye aap ka gift



n gift dete ha r ko



r- takes it



r- hmm

r starts going from there



n- sir aap ko kya huya ha




r- stops




n- kya mujhse koi galate ho gaye plz mujhe bataye




r- galate mujhse hue ha
I HATE U MISS NAINA SINGH ALLUWALIA JUST GO AWAY FROM MY SIGHT



n runs from there



n starts walking in the road
.tears were rolling from her eyes

n- mainne kya kiya ha




here r 's condition is same as N



after sometime n reach her house




d opens the door



d- ma di aa gaye



d- d kya huya aap ko



n -keeps silient




d- ma dekho d kuch bol nahin rahe ha




mrs a comes out from the kitchen



ma- kya huya n




n goes and sits in the floor


ma comes near her and keeps her hand on n 's shoulder


ma- kya huya tujhe n




n- starts crying ) ma ma




ma- ha bol


n-aaj sir ne bohot bure tara se mujhse baat ke


ma- kya



n-ma main aur sir ke office man kam nahn kaunge


ma- thik ha beta. tu ab chup ho ja




n hugs her mom



ok guys i up ff plz comments .thank for the comments this i wan more comments plz


shana di i haven't seen that scene which u mentioned.


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Posted: 25 April 2008 at 4:56am | IP Logged
Its ok!!!As for the update ...very good!!!!

But yaar make sure Naina does not leave the job and make Naina 22 years atleast!!!!

Waise yesterday saw an extremely emotional and sweet scene of Ranbir Nanda(Akashdeep Sehgal) in Kucch Ish Tarah.................was reminded of your story!!!Don't know why!!!!

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Posted: 25 April 2008 at 5:13am | IP Logged
nice 1.plz cont soon.........

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Posted: 25 April 2008 at 7:09am | IP Logged
ITS AWESOME MINDBLOWING Clap
PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZE CONTINUE SOON LUV ANGEL Smile

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Posted: 25 April 2008 at 9:56am | IP Logged
simply super,but RN shld alwayz be 2gether,

itz realy gud dear Clap


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Posted: 25 April 2008 at 11:17am | IP Logged
suuuuuperb update dear....very good going...thanks for this beautiful part.

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super updt Clap Clap

ranajay_ria

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Posted: 26 April 2008 at 2:00am | IP Logged
ok here


next day



n wakes up as usuall and goes to get ready for her college




n the dinning



ma-tu uth gaye



n- hmm



ma- d zara bread ko table par rak toh



d- jee ma



n- ma papa kaha ha



ma- tere papa toh subha subha he tere uncle se milne gaye ha


n- kyun



ma- bas kuch kam tha



na- main ab nikal ti hu



ma- thik ha




in r's house



r abh bhi so raha ha kyunki usni kal raat kuch zaida he drink kar leya tha




dadi- ramu


kaka-jee dadi




dadi- r abhi tak nahin utha




kaka- nahin dadi


dadi- pata nahin is larke ka ka hoga




kaka- main sahab ko bulale late hu




dadi- hmm



kaka goes to wake up r




kaka- sahab ab uth jaye



r- hmm



kaka- sahab 9:00 baj gaye ha




r wakes up n a hurry)- kyaaaaaaaa




kaka goes




r- kittni dar ho gaye



r goes to the washroom to get ready




after sometime r comes downstairs




dadi- th gaye




r- woh dadi




dadi- ab breakfast kar le




r- kaka man office main kuch kha lunga


r- bye dadi



r goes to the office


here n is very sad bcoz of yesterday's incident




ali- kya n aapko




n- kuch nahin



p- tere haath main kya ha




n- woh newspapper




p- par kun




n- mujhe aaj ek interview ke leya jana ha




p- par tujhe job mil gae




n- main ne woh job chor de




h- par kun phoolan



n- mujhe kuch prob ho rahe thi us job main


p- oh




n- thik ha main chalte hu


n goes for an interiew


receotionist- yes how can i help u


n- i came here for an interview




r- ok just a min



r-hello sir ek lady aae ha interview ke leye



r- ok sir




n- ka hua



r- mam sir ne kaha koi vacancy nahn ha




n- ok



n goes from there




n- ab kya karu




n goes to her house




mrs a opens the door


ma- n tu aa gaye




n- hmm




ma- thk ha man khana lagate hu


n- hmm




n goes to fresh up



after few days


n the office


r- rosa meheta group ki file kaha ha



r- sir woh toh n ki pass ha




r- ok n ko kaho file leke mere cabin aaye


r- par sir n toh 4 dn se office nahn aaye ha




r- ky n office nahin aaye thik ha tum uske ghar main phone karo aur office main bulao




r- ok sir




rosa calls in n's house




r- hello kya main n singh se baat kar sakte hu




mrs a- jee aap kon



r- main shekhawat industry se bol rahe hu




mrs a- n ab aap ke office main kam nahin karege



mrs a keeps the phone




rosa- goes to r 's cabn




r- tumne n ke ghar main phone kiya




r- jee sir par




r- kya bolo jaldi




r- sir n ab is office man kam nahin karege


r- kya




r- ok sir


rosa goes out



r-(gets angry) tum samajte kya ho aapke aap ko miss n



next day



morning


d- di aap mere saath chalo na mere school


n- main kyun jayu tere saath




d- woh aaj mere school main hum sab class 12 ke students ek dance karke bale ha plz aap chalo na


ma- n chale ja




n- thik ha


n/ d goes for school



n/d r waiting for bus




d- bus kyun nahin aaye abhi tak




n- off d aa jaye ge




suddenly a car stops beside them
it was r's car

r(pulls down the glass)- are n tum kya kar rahe ho yahhan




n- just ignors him




n- d chal yahaan se



now r gets down from the car



r- n kya huya?



n- kuch nahin aap jayena




r- thk ha aap log kahin ja rahe ha main chordu




n- koi zarurat nahin ha


d- di chaleye na woh hume chor denge school tak




n- d just shut up



d- thik ha di aapko agar nahn jana toh main chalte hu unke saath



n- d d rok



d gets into the car



n have no choice


so n sits in the car



r- aap log kaha ja rahe ha




n-keeps silient



d- woh hum school ja rahe ha



r- school ok



r- aap konse class main parte ha




d- class 12 main




r- ok



d- ok sir mera school aa gaya chale di



n- hmm



d- bye sir


r- ek min mujhe aapke di se kuch imp baat karne ha so if u have no problem then i wan to take her with me




n- mujhe nahin jana




d- di chal jaye na



n- d sunna



but d goes from there



r- chale n




n- aap kya samajte ha aapne aapko


r-kun




n- ab aap plz yeh innocent behave karna bad kareye




r- stops the car



r- kya hua ha tumhe n



n- mujhe kya huya ha
aap ke party main aap mere saath ks tara se baat ke th sayed aap bhul gaye ha par man nahin bhule.




n- gets down from the car




r- ek mn n ruk jayo



n-ab kya ha main ab aapki employee nahin hu


r-ok let me clear u miss n aap mere office aasi nahn chor sakte mere office main ek rule hai ki agar koi employee job chorna chahate ha toh usse ek month pahele office ko inform karna hote ha .aur agar koi inform na kie job chorta ha toh main usse court main sue karta hu agar aap aasa nahin chahate ha k toh kal se offce zarur join kar lena



n was shocked


ok guys i up ff plz comments.


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