RN(FANFICTION) - Page 2

Posted: 15 years ago
Very nice yaar but as per my suggestion you should have made her at least 22.

This is becoming Mr.Bajaj and Prerna pair!!!
Posted: 15 years ago
itz realy gud but as Shaina said she shld hav been 22 n he shld hav been sum whr arund 30 to 35 dear

but gud dear,contn,



Aarthi
Posted: 15 years ago
aweeeeeeeeesum dear.great update.thanks alot for this sweet part
Posted: 15 years ago
guys here


n the evening



r goes to n 's desk


r- n




n- are sr aap



r- ghar nahin jana



n- ha sir



r - chalo main chor deta hu



n- ok sir



r- ok i waiting in the car




r goes



n takes her bag



r/n sits in the car




r- n



n- jee sir




r- aap ko office kaise lagte hai




n- aache



r- aap ka ghar aagaya




n- thanks sir




r smiles



n goes to her house while r goes to bar to meet naveen



in the bar




r- na




na- are raj



na- waiter two whiskey


r- nahin main nahin



na- u r refusng drinks kya baat hai


r- na u was right mujhe pyaar hogaya hai


na- kisse




r- ofcourse n se


na- aacha tune bol diya n ko



r- abhi tak toh nahin




na- toh bol de




r- par kaise bolu



na- tu ek kam kar tu n ko office main bata de


r- kya pagal ho gaya kya




na- toh




r- main n ko kal office ke bad ek aachi jaga pe le jake bolunge




na- ok ok




r- man abhi chalte hu



na- ok


after sometime r reach hs house



r- kaka bohot bhook lage hai



kaka- abhi khana lagate hu beta


r- ok kaka




r goes



n n house


ma- n tere kal result hai na




n- ha mama



d- di aap pass ho jayenge



ma- ha beta




n- mama papa kaha hai




ma- tere papa tere uncle ke ghar gaye hai



n- oh




ma- jayo ab tum dono so jayo



d- ok mama




n/d goes to sleep




next morning




n- mama main ja rahe hu



ma- thik ha




n goes to her college


h- phoolan kya hoga result main




n- pata nahin manne toh is bar thik se para bhi nahin




p- main pass ho jayunge na


principal comes



p- ok students
is bar aap logone aache parai nahin ke



p- ok let me start



p- pooja ghai



p- jee sir


p- pass with 60%



p- thank u sir



p- amardeep huda



h- jee sir




p- pass wth 70%


p- n


n- jee sr




p -pas with 78%


n- thanks


p- ali



a- pass wth 80%


p- alekh


a-




p- pass with 59%




a- thank u




p- ok u all can go




n- off



h- phoolan chalna aaj koi film dekh ke aate hai




n- thik hai



h- ok



p- mujhe aapni behen ki shaadi main jana hai



n- ok



ali- hum bhi nahin sakte



p- kyun



ali- abbu ka letter aaya hai unke pass jana hoga aaj raat ke train se


a- apun aa raha hai


h- ok


h- thik hai phoolan hum 3 jayenge main tujhe tere office se pick kar lunge




n- ok


n goes to her office


in office




r- n




n- jee sir


r- r u free today n


n- jee sir




r- ok




n goes


r- hello hotel international




receptionist- yes sir




r- iam rajveer shekhawat speking




rec- yes sir how can we help u



r- i wan 2 book ur retrurent for today's evening



rec- ok sir



r- hmm


r- oh kab sham hoge




in the evening




r- n




n- jee sir


r- mere saath aaj dinner pa chaloge




n- aaj nahin sir




r- lil aanoyed )kyun



n- mujhe aaj kuch kam hai




r- ok next time



n- ok sir




n goes



n comes out from the office




r- n come sit n the car


n- nahin sir mujhe aaj mere masi ke ghar jana hai




r- ok




r goes




n- tu kaha tha h



h- soory



n-thik ha




after sometime they reach the cinema hall




a-tum dono kitne dar kar de



h- sorry



a- chal




a/n/h enter the hall




h- woh rahe humare sit



a- chal




n- h mujhe middle sit chaheye




h- ok phollan




the film starts




after 2 hrs




n- oh kya film thi




n- h



h- kya



n- mujhe popcorn khana hai



h- no way



n- off




a- main chalta hu



h/n- bye




h- kya huya tujhe




n- kuch nahin



h- chal



h/n starts walking



h- phoolan sunna



n- mujhe nahin sunna



h- phoolan le



n- kya



h- ice cream



n- icecream tune le



h-hmm




n- oh h ( n hugs h)


suddenly r car was passing



r- driver ek min roko




d- kya huya sahab




r-( pulls down the glass) yeh toh n hai par iske saath yeh larka kon hai.oh toh yeh tumhara zaruri kam miss n




r- chalo driver




r reach house




r- kaka



kaka -jee




r- mere room main sharab ki bottle de aaye




kaka- jee




r goes to his r



r- was burning with anger) yeh tumne aacha nahin ki n



kaka- sahab



r- ha rak degeye



kaka goes



r opens the bottles ) ek gut man half bottle pi raha tha.



after sometime r slept




next day



morning




n- mama main chalte hu



mama- thk ha



n- mama papa aa gaye



mrs a- are aap aa gaye



mr a- ha


n- papa main chalte hu


n goes




in the office




n- sir may come n



r- yes



n- sir yeh fle


r- hmm



n goes




n pata sir ko kya ho gaya hai lagta ha mujhse naraz hai kal main unke saath nahin gaya na



ok guys i up ff plz comments guys


               
Posted: 15 years ago
toooooooooooo good.....very nice..thanks for this cool update.. 😃 😃 😛
Posted: 15 years ago
realy 2 gud dear,do contn,



Aarthi
Posted: 15 years ago
Ah oh!!!Trouble!!!

Ab Raj ka misunderstanding clear karo!!!

Waise accha tha but please change the age difference...at least make Naina 23years!!!
Posted: 15 years ago
guys here




n goes to her desk




in the evening




today r goes without asking n for lift




n goes to her house



n- mama khana do


ma- thik hai




n- papa uncle kaise hai




papa- thik hai



n- aur minu



papa- minu ne tujhe phone karne ko kaha hai


n- mama khana do na plz




d- di aap ka phone hai




n- ok




n- hello




h- hey phoolan



n- are h tu


h- phoolan kal main college nahin jayunga kya tu mere leye notes copy kar lege




n- thik hai



h- bye




ma- kiska phone tha



n- h ka



ma- oh




ma- khana kha le




n- ok mama


next day


moring


n- ma main chalte hu




ma- thik ha




in the college



n- are aaj p /a nahin aaye



alekh- nahin




n- oh mujhe aaj h ke leye notes copy karna ha




a- thik ha




n starts coping notes for h




n- oh god 11.30 baj gaye mujhe toh office jana hai



a- kya huya tujhe



n- dekh na main aaj late hogaye office jana ke leye




a- oh




n- main nikal te hu


in the offic




mr sen- sir


r- jee



mr sen -sir kapur group of industry ka file naina je ke pass hai ab main kaise jayu meeting main


r- toh n se le legeye




mr sen- n je office nahin aaye abhi tak




r- kya
thik ha aap jaye main dekhte hu


n - oh no 12.00 baj gaye


mr sen- n je aapko sir ne bulaya ha




n- jee




n- may i come sir




r- hmm




r- n aapke pass watch hai



n- jee sir



r- oh dekheye kya time hai ab



n- oh sir aaj mujhe mere friend ke leye notes copy karna tha toh main aaj late ho gaya



r- plz i dont wan to lsten any excuse from u(angely)


n- soorry sir



r- aapke pass kapur group of industry ka file ha


n- jee sir



r- thik ha


n- sir main jayu


r- hmm
and send mr sen



n- ok


n goes out




n- mr sen aapko sir ne bulaya ha




mr sen- hmm




r- yes mr sen n se fle leke meeting main chale jaye




mr sen- ok sir


mr sen- goes


in the lunch break



phone rings



n- hello




h- phoolan




n- tu kuch mat bol aaj tere baja se main office dar se aaya


h- sorry phoolan plz mujhe maff kar de




n- thik hai




h- tu mujhe notes kab dega



n- kal




h-nahin aaj



n- par kaise



h- main tere office ke bad tujhse miluga




n- ok



r -hears everything from the intercom



r- oh aaj tum us larke se miloge .


n the evening


r- n chalo




n- nahin sir main chale jayunge




r (in his mind) main janta tha tumhara yehi ans hoga




r- are chalo na




n- ok sir




n goes with r



r opens the car's door for n


n sits in the car

suddenly some 1 calls n


voice- n


n gets down from the car




n- are h tu




h- tu kaha ja rahe ha




n- ghar



h- mere notes kaha ha



n- yeh le



h- thank u phoolan


r-who watching this now cough


r- aah ahem




n- oh sir yeh ha mere




h- best friend




n- hmm




r- aacha



n- h yeh ha mere sir



h- hello sir



r- hmm




r- chale n
aur aap bhi chal sakte ha humare saath


h- ok




h sts in the car




r- starts driving



h- sir aapke car aache hai na n na



n- hmm


h- phoolan aaj college man love birds aaye the




n- nahin


h- tu kal jayege


n- hmm



h- aacha sun phoolan


n- h plz shut up now



after sometime




h again speaks



h- phoolan sunna



r- aap ka naam phoolan ha n



h- nahin sr n ko sirf main pyaar se phoolan bulate hu



r- aacha


r gets irritated with h


r- h aap ko kaha jana hai



h- oh sir bas yehi rok dijiye



r stops the car



h gets down


h- thank u sir



r- hmm



r droves ahead


r- aap ka friend bohot baate karta ha



n- soory sir oh bas aasa he ha



r- ok

bye n

n gets down from the car



r drove towards his house



ok guys i up ff plz comments .




guys u asked me to make n aleast 22-23 yrs but in my ff n is a college girl so i think n s perfect.


Posted: 15 years ago
gr8 dear,no need 2 change Nainaz age but can u plz change RAjz age if possi 😃 ,

but realy super ud dear 👏 👏 👏 ,
in a very different style,itz gud n intrestn 2,


All the best 4 the next dear,

Aarthi
Posted: 15 years ago
me too agree with Aarthi....update was very interesting and supercool......thanks for this suuuuuuuuuuperb update..

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