RN(FANFICTION) - Page 2

Very nice yaar but as per my suggestion you should have made her at least 22.

This is becoming Mr.Bajaj and Prerna pair!!!

itz realy gud but as Shaina said she shld hav been 22 n he shld hav been sum whr arund 30 to 35 dear

but gud dear,contn,



Aarthi

aweeeeeeeeesum dear.great update.thanks alot for this sweet part

guys here


n the evening



r goes to n 's desk


r- n




n- are sr aap



r- ghar nahin jana



n- ha sir



r - chalo main chor deta hu



n- ok sir



r- ok i waiting in the car




r goes



n takes her bag



r/n sits in the car




r- n



n- jee sir




r- aap ko office kaise lagte hai




n- aache



r- aap ka ghar aagaya




n- thanks sir




r smiles



n goes to her house while r goes to bar to meet naveen



in the bar




r- na




na- are raj



na- waiter two whiskey


r- nahin main nahin



na- u r refusng drinks kya baat hai


r- na u was right mujhe pyaar hogaya hai


na- kisse




r- ofcourse n se


na- aacha tune bol diya n ko



r- abhi tak toh nahin




na- toh bol de




r- par kaise bolu



na- tu ek kam kar tu n ko office main bata de


r- kya pagal ho gaya kya




na- toh




r- main n ko kal office ke bad ek aachi jaga pe le jake bolunge




na- ok ok




r- man abhi chalte hu



na- ok


after sometime r reach hs house



r- kaka bohot bhook lage hai



kaka- abhi khana lagate hu beta


r- ok kaka




r goes



n n house


ma- n tere kal result hai na




n- ha mama



d- di aap pass ho jayenge



ma- ha beta




n- mama papa kaha hai




ma- tere papa tere uncle ke ghar gaye hai



n- oh




ma- jayo ab tum dono so jayo



d- ok mama




n/d goes to sleep




next morning




n- mama main ja rahe hu



ma- thik ha




n goes to her college


h- phoolan kya hoga result main




n- pata nahin manne toh is bar thik se para bhi nahin




p- main pass ho jayunge na


principal comes



p- ok students
is bar aap logone aache parai nahin ke



p- ok let me start



p- pooja ghai



p- jee sir


p- pass with 60%



p- thank u sir



p- amardeep huda



h- jee sir




p- pass wth 70%


p- n


n- jee sr




p -pas with 78%


n- thanks


p- ali



a- pass wth 80%


p- alekh


a-




p- pass with 59%




a- thank u




p- ok u all can go




n- off



h- phoolan chalna aaj koi film dekh ke aate hai




n- thik hai



h- ok



p- mujhe aapni behen ki shaadi main jana hai



n- ok



ali- hum bhi nahin sakte



p- kyun



ali- abbu ka letter aaya hai unke pass jana hoga aaj raat ke train se


a- apun aa raha hai


h- ok


h- thik hai phoolan hum 3 jayenge main tujhe tere office se pick kar lunge




n- ok


n goes to her office


in office




r- n




n- jee sir


r- r u free today n


n- jee sir




r- ok




n goes


r- hello hotel international




receptionist- yes sir




r- iam rajveer shekhawat speking




rec- yes sir how can we help u



r- i wan 2 book ur retrurent for today's evening



rec- ok sir



r- hmm


r- oh kab sham hoge




in the evening




r- n




n- jee sir


r- mere saath aaj dinner pa chaloge




n- aaj nahin sir




r- lil aanoyed )kyun



n- mujhe aaj kuch kam hai




r- ok next time



n- ok sir




n goes



n comes out from the office




r- n come sit n the car


n- nahin sir mujhe aaj mere masi ke ghar jana hai




r- ok




r goes




n- tu kaha tha h



h- soory



n-thik ha




after sometime they reach the cinema hall




a-tum dono kitne dar kar de



h- sorry



a- chal




a/n/h enter the hall




h- woh rahe humare sit



a- chal




n- h mujhe middle sit chaheye




h- ok phollan




the film starts




after 2 hrs




n- oh kya film thi




n- h



h- kya



n- mujhe popcorn khana hai



h- no way



n- off




a- main chalta hu



h/n- bye




h- kya huya tujhe




n- kuch nahin



h- chal



h/n starts walking



h- phoolan sunna



n- mujhe nahin sunna



h- phoolan le



n- kya



h- ice cream



n- icecream tune le



h-hmm




n- oh h ( n hugs h)


suddenly r car was passing



r- driver ek min roko




d- kya huya sahab




r-( pulls down the glass) yeh toh n hai par iske saath yeh larka kon hai.oh toh yeh tumhara zaruri kam miss n




r- chalo driver




r reach house




r- kaka



kaka -jee




r- mere room main sharab ki bottle de aaye




kaka- jee




r goes to his r



r- was burning with anger) yeh tumne aacha nahin ki n



kaka- sahab



r- ha rak degeye



kaka goes



r opens the bottles ) ek gut man half bottle pi raha tha.



after sometime r slept




next day



morning




n- mama main chalte hu



mama- thk ha



n- mama papa aa gaye



mrs a- are aap aa gaye



mr a- ha


n- papa main chalte hu


n goes




in the office




n- sir may come n



r- yes



n- sir yeh fle


r- hmm



n goes




n pata sir ko kya ho gaya hai lagta ha mujhse naraz hai kal main unke saath nahin gaya na



ok guys i up ff plz comments guys


               

toooooooooooo good.....very nice..thanks for this cool update.. 😃 😃 😛

realy 2 gud dear,do contn,



Aarthi

Ah oh!!!Trouble!!!

Ab Raj ka misunderstanding clear karo!!!

Waise accha tha but please change the age difference...at least make Naina 23years!!!

guys here




n goes to her desk




in the evening




today r goes without asking n for lift




n goes to her house



n- mama khana do


ma- thik hai




n- papa uncle kaise hai




papa- thik hai



n- aur minu



papa- minu ne tujhe phone karne ko kaha hai


n- mama khana do na plz




d- di aap ka phone hai




n- ok




n- hello




h- hey phoolan



n- are h tu


h- phoolan kal main college nahin jayunga kya tu mere leye notes copy kar lege




n- thik hai



h- bye




ma- kiska phone tha



n- h ka



ma- oh




ma- khana kha le




n- ok mama


next day


moring


n- ma main chalte hu




ma- thik ha




in the college



n- are aaj p /a nahin aaye



alekh- nahin




n- oh mujhe aaj h ke leye notes copy karna ha




a- thik ha




n starts coping notes for h




n- oh god 11.30 baj gaye mujhe toh office jana hai



a- kya huya tujhe



n- dekh na main aaj late hogaye office jana ke leye




a- oh




n- main nikal te hu


in the offic




mr sen- sir


r- jee



mr sen -sir kapur group of industry ka file naina je ke pass hai ab main kaise jayu meeting main


r- toh n se le legeye




mr sen- n je office nahin aaye abhi tak




r- kya
thik ha aap jaye main dekhte hu


n - oh no 12.00 baj gaye


mr sen- n je aapko sir ne bulaya ha




n- jee




n- may i come sir




r- hmm




r- n aapke pass watch hai



n- jee sir



r- oh dekheye kya time hai ab



n- oh sir aaj mujhe mere friend ke leye notes copy karna tha toh main aaj late ho gaya



r- plz i dont wan to lsten any excuse from u(angely)


n- soorry sir



r- aapke pass kapur group of industry ka file ha


n- jee sir



r- thik ha


n- sir main jayu


r- hmm
and send mr sen



n- ok


n goes out




n- mr sen aapko sir ne bulaya ha




mr sen- hmm




r- yes mr sen n se fle leke meeting main chale jaye




mr sen- ok sir


mr sen- goes


in the lunch break



phone rings



n- hello




h- phoolan




n- tu kuch mat bol aaj tere baja se main office dar se aaya


h- sorry phoolan plz mujhe maff kar de




n- thik hai




h- tu mujhe notes kab dega



n- kal




h-nahin aaj



n- par kaise



h- main tere office ke bad tujhse miluga




n- ok



r -hears everything from the intercom



r- oh aaj tum us larke se miloge .


n the evening


r- n chalo




n- nahin sir main chale jayunge




r (in his mind) main janta tha tumhara yehi ans hoga




r- are chalo na




n- ok sir




n goes with r



r opens the car's door for n


n sits in the car

suddenly some 1 calls n


voice- n


n gets down from the car




n- are h tu




h- tu kaha ja rahe ha




n- ghar



h- mere notes kaha ha



n- yeh le



h- thank u phoolan


r-who watching this now cough


r- aah ahem




n- oh sir yeh ha mere




h- best friend




n- hmm




r- aacha



n- h yeh ha mere sir



h- hello sir



r- hmm




r- chale n
aur aap bhi chal sakte ha humare saath


h- ok




h sts in the car




r- starts driving



h- sir aapke car aache hai na n na



n- hmm


h- phoolan aaj college man love birds aaye the




n- nahin


h- tu kal jayege


n- hmm



h- aacha sun phoolan


n- h plz shut up now



after sometime




h again speaks



h- phoolan sunna



r- aap ka naam phoolan ha n



h- nahin sr n ko sirf main pyaar se phoolan bulate hu



r- aacha


r gets irritated with h


r- h aap ko kaha jana hai



h- oh sir bas yehi rok dijiye



r stops the car



h gets down


h- thank u sir



r- hmm



r droves ahead


r- aap ka friend bohot baate karta ha



n- soory sir oh bas aasa he ha



r- ok

bye n

n gets down from the car



r drove towards his house



ok guys i up ff plz comments .




guys u asked me to make n aleast 22-23 yrs but in my ff n is a college girl so i think n s perfect.

gr8 dear,no need 2 change Nainaz age but can u plz change RAjz age if possi 😃 ,

but realy super ud dear 👏 👏 👏 ,
in a very different style,itz gud n intrestn 2,


All the best 4 the next dear,

Aarthi

me too agree with Aarthi....update was very interesting and supercool......thanks for this suuuuuuuuuuperb update..