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ranajay_ria Senior Member

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Posted: 18 April 2008 at 1:55am | IP Logged
GUYS THIS IS MY 2nd ff on rn.

ok here

1: rajveer singh shekhawat - a famous industrilst who never cares of any1 feelng.he is 38 years old still unmarried.

2:mr nischay singh alluwalia: works in a bank .loves his family very much.have 2 daughters .

3:mrs alluwalia: a housewife

4:naina singh alluwalia:a college girl .loves her family

5:dolly singh alluwalia: yougher   sister of naina.

now the story

mrs alluwalia- naina beta ab uth jayo 7 baj gaye hai

n- oh mama bas 5 min more

mrs alluwalia(mom)- nahin beta

n- off mama

mom-beta tuhare papa tum dono ka itezar kar rahe hai

n- ok mama aap jayo main dolly ko leke aati hu

mom- thik hai beta

n's mom goes

n-uth jaa dolly

dolly- bas 5 min more di

n- nahin dolly tere school hai na

d- off di

n- chal tu uth ja main washroom hoke aati hu

d- ok di

n goes to the washroom

after sometime n comes from the washroom

n- dolly ja fresh ho ja

d- ok d

n- goes to have her breakfast

in the dinning table

n- good morning papa

papa- good morning beta

n-mama jaldi do

mom- ha lo
sreve the food

n-papa aaj mere tution fees dene hai

papa- ha bol fees kitna hai

n- RS 500

PAPA- lo


papa- oh beta

d- papa aaj mere fees dene hai

papa -bolo kitna

d- RS 600


N - chal dooly

d- hmm

n- mama/papa bye

mama- bye beta

n/d goes for there college/school


h-hey phoolan

n- are h tu

h- phoolan mujh tere notes chaheye

n- thik hai

n /h enter the class room

pooja-dekho aa gaye dono

h- he ali

ali- huda bhai baitheye

p- tere pass nahin naina ke pass

n- chup kar pooja

p- aacha thik hai

n sts beside h

p- ooooooooooooooooooo

good mornng class

every1 gets attention

p- good morning mam

mam- aaj tumhe ek surprse test dene hoge

alekh- yeh shalny mam ka har roz test

shaliny- what alekh

alekh- nothng mam

after the college

h- chalna phoolan film dekh ke aate hai

n- aaj nahin

h- thik hai

n goes to her house

n- mama

mama- n tu aa gaye

n- hmm

the door bell rings

n goes to open the door

n- papa

mama- aap aa gaye dolly jaa freash hoo jaa

d- hmm

n - goes wth d

mrs a-kya baat hai aaj aap itna chup hai

mr a- nahin toh

next day

in the dinning table

n- papa bye mujhe aaj jaldi jaana hai

papa - ok beta

n goes to her college

d- mama main bhi chalte hu

mama- ok beta

mrs a- aap ki aaj chuti hai

mr a- hmm

like ths there life was going

after few days

mrs a- aap se ek baat pucchu

mr a- ha bolo

mrs a- aap 7 din se office nahin gaye kya baat ha

mr a- woh main

mrs a- ya boleye- mere nokri chale gaye

mrs a- kyaaaaaaaaaaa

mrws a burst into tears

n- kya huya mama

mama- n n

n- ya mama

mama- tere papa ki nokri chale gaye

n- kya aap fikar mat karo ma

next day

n- ( n was searching about jobs n the news paper)

n- mama man chalte hu

mama- thk ha

n goes to shekhawat industry


n- job interview ke leye aa e hu

r- par interview toh khatttam ho gaye

n- par

r- i dont know that

n- what i wan to meet ur sir

r- u cant meet him

n goes to meet the boss

r- mam plz mam

n opens the door

now we see a handsome youngh man who is talkng with his clients he is rajveer singh shekhawat

r- yes

n- mujhe aap se baat karne hai

r- par mjhe kuch nahin sunna hai

n- aap ko sunna hoga

r- hmm

n- sir mujhe is job ke bohot zarurat hai plz sir

r- par interview ka time khatam ho gaya hai

n- plz sir

ok i up ff plz comments .

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quietrajpri1623 Goldie

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Posted: 18 April 2008 at 2:29am | IP Logged
hey please continue dear.concept is beautiful Clap .update was too good.thanks for this new ff.
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Posted: 18 April 2008 at 3:02am | IP Logged
awesome start...............sounds interesting....updt soon
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Posted: 18 April 2008 at 3:06am | IP Logged
conceptz soundz gud n intrestn n plz continue wit it sweety,

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Posted: 18 April 2008 at 8:39am | IP Logged
nice pleeeeee update
Shaina_b IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 18 April 2008 at 12:06pm | IP Logged
He is 38...isn't that too old.Have you gotten inspired on this from Ranbir Nanda of Kucch Ish Tarah.

And Naina must be 22 or 23.

That is a lot of difference...any other time I would have said Bajaj and Prerna but now this is reminding me of Ranbir-Kanya.

Waise it was nice!!!!
ranajay_ria Senior Member

Joined: 04 June 2007
Posts: 298

Posted: 19 April 2008 at 2:50am | IP Logged
guys here

r- u can leave

n goes from there

after sometime she reach her house

ma- beta tujhe job mile

n- nahin mama

ma- thik ha

in the evening

n is preparing for test when the door rings

n- are d tu aa gaye

d- hmm

n- tu muh haath dho le main khana lagate hu

d- hmm

after sometime mrs/mr a comes from bima masi

ma- beta tumne khana khaya

n- jee ma

ma- thik hai so jayo

next day


n-mama main chalte hu

ma- hmm

n goes to the sha industry for a job

n- sir may i come in

mr sha- yes

n- sir i am naina singh alluwalia. i came here for interview

mr sha- ok but there is no vacancy

n-ok sir

n goes out from the office
n -pata nahin kya hoga

suddenly n collieds with some1
n- sorry

the man turns- its ok(ie r)

n goes

r - main toh is larki ko jaante hu .ha yeh wohi larki hai jo kal mere office main interview ke leye aa thi .par yeh kya kar rahe thi is office main lagta hai interview ke leye aa thi .

d- sir car aa gaye

r- hmm

r sits in the car

after sometime he reach his office

rosa- good morning sir

r- hmm

r goes to his cabin .

r- rosa mere cabin main aao

rosa- yes sir

rosa comes to r's cabin

rosa- yes sr

r- kal jo larki aaye thi uske ghar man phone karke mujhse milne bulao

rosa- ok sir

rosa calls at alluwalia house

rosa- hello kya main naina singh alluwalia se baat kar sakte hu

mrs a- aap kyun hai

rosa- main shekhawat industry se bol rahe hu

mrs a-woh ghar main nahin hai

rosa- ok toh aap unse kahena ki humare sir milna chahate ha

mrs a- ok

in the evenng n comes

ma- beta tere leye aaj shekhawat industry se phone aaya tha

n- kya

ma- tujhe milne bulaya hai

n- thik hai mama

next day

n- ma main chalte hu

ma- thik hai

n goes to shekhawat industry

knocks at the door

n- may i come in sir

r- yes

r - plz sit down

n- sits on the chair


n- jee sir

r- show me ur certificates

n shows her certificates

r- toh aap ne graduation complete nahin ke

n- nahin i am still in college

r- toh aap job kaise kar payege

n- sir i have morning college mujhe koi problem nahin hoge

r- ok then u can join from tomorrow

n - thanks sir

r- ok

n goes to her house today she is very happy .


ma- kya baat hai beta

n- mujhe job mil gaye

ma- kya (hugs n)

n- kal se mujhe join karna hoga

next day
n goes to her college

n- alekh

alekh- kya huya

n- mujh job mil gaye

p- party kab de rahe hai

n- abhi nahin

ali- thik hai

after college n goes for her job

in the offce

n-sir may i come in

r- yes n

n- sir

r -rosa plz come in

rosa- yes sir

r-n ko meheta group ke file de do

rosa- ok

rosa - n come with me

n goes with rosa

rosa - this ur file

n- thanks

n starts working .

after few days

in the office

n is working m the computer

r- n time kya huya hai

n- jee

n looks at her watch

n- oh god its 9 pm

r- aap ko ghar nahin jana hai

n- woh sr yeh file complete karne thi

r- kal kar lena

n- ok sir

n packs her bag

r-n- ok sir bye

r man aap ko ghar chor do

n- ok sir

n sts in r's car

ok guys i up ff plz comments.

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