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Idle stars_shine

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Posted: 16 April 2008 at 10:01pm | IP Logged

DO DIL...MIL RAHE HAIN...

Hi to all readers, this is my first attempt at a fan-fic...after getting inspired by other wonderful FFs (esp. Robina). Hope you like it!

Character Sketches:

1.      Robbie Sabarwal : He comes from an affluent family who owns a chain of shopping complexes. He has 2 sisters, Alaana and Divya. He is deeply attached to his father, and greatly respects him, but does not agree with his parents' decision of him joining the family business. He wants to pursue his passion, singing, and even writes his own songs. In short, a good-natured guy, but tough on the outside (kind of like a coconut, hehehe).

2.       Kasturi Chawla: belongs to a lower-middle class family, and lives with her Bauji and Maa. She has a younger sister Tanu, and an older brother Ajay, whom she calls Bhaiyyu. She is very devoted to her family and will do anything for them. She is intelligent, warm, and a simple girl. Her extended family includes the infamous Alka Chachi (couldn't resist!) and her husband, who have no children; all of whom live under the same roof.

3.      Raunak Singhania: As always, Robbie's best friend. Also belongs to a very rich family, but is a spoilt brat. He's the total opposite of Robbie, which is the reason they became such good friends. Keeps changing girlfriends like his clothes, and hardly ever cares about other people's feelings, except when it comes to Robbie, who also greatly values their friendship. He is an only child.

Other characters are pretty much the same, except for the changes in financial background, and less of the attitude that comes with it.

Few changes:

4.      Devika and Puru don't have a very strained relationship. They're almost a normal couple who love each other and their kids. Devika is still the head of their business and a very aggressive business woman. The children, including Robbie are more attached to their father seeing as their mom was always busy with work and never had time for them. But since Alaana has joined the business, Devika is a bit more chilled out and now tries to spend time with her family, too.

5.      Alaana isn't as *evil*, and is married to Nikhil, who is greedy for money, but doesn't cheat on her.

6.      Alka Chachi is still the same, except for the fact that she doesn't have much influence on the rest of the house, but still won't stop bad-mouthing Kasturi.

7.      JP bhaisaab doesn't own a saree shop, but rather works at one and dreams of opening one someday, because Kaushalya does wonderful saree work that everyone adores.

8.      Nandini and her family still live with the Sabarwals, but she isn't as cheerful. She always seems to be depressed, and seems to have some secret that her husband and her share (will reveal that later!) . She is still a good-natured wife and mother.

Ok so those were the characters. I haven't changed much in the way of how they are. But the story won't be as similar to the original one. If you like it so far, please comment and tell me if I should actually write the story out.

Thanks!

 

Edited:

Part 1 : Pg 2

Part 2: Pg 3

Part 3: Pg 4

Part 4: Pg 5

Part 5: Pg 5

Part 6: Pg 6

Part 7: Pg 7

Part 8: Pg 9

Part 9: Pg 10

Part 10: Pg 11

Part 11: Pg 13

Part 12: Pg 14

Part 13: Pg 16

Part 14: Pg 18

Part 15: Pg 21

Part 16: Pg 23

Part 17: Pg 25

Part 18: Pg 26

Part 19: Pg 28

Part 20: Pg 30

Part 21: Pg 32

Part 22: Pg 34

Part 23: Pg 36

Part 24: Pg 38

Part 25: Pg 39

Part 26: Pg 42

Part 27: Pg 45

Part 28: Pg 47

Part 29: Pg 49

 
 


Edited by stars_shine - 08 September 2008 at 7:41pm

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Posted: 16 April 2008 at 10:57pm | IP Logged

OMG star you've started i'm soo happy for you,, seriously i never thought writing could be so liberating..LOL its amazing and its soo much fun playing with the characters that we watch, and i can tell your about to have a blast with yours, i actually really like how  you've kept the characters pretty much the same, for right now the other three fanfics are totally on a different tangent so this has its own appeal..Nadini has a secret, ohhhh cant wait to find out what thats all about. Alka chachiiii is back i've missed her, so will she have a mouth on her like in teh serial??LOL

Kasturi sounds adorable adn robbie seems to be his dashing sweet self... so the playing field has been established now cant wait for you to get started and little old simple me able to inspire someone that has got to be the best most beautiful thing anyone has ever said to me.. i'm touched deeply... EmbarrassedHug

I luv the title, for isnt that roka, totally romantic...just like your title... but why didnt you write a beginning, now i'm gonna have to wait for you to update please update soonn, and pragalbha said i have to wait till friday's for hers... and jannuu hasnt updated today either...you three are killing meeeeCry

so comeone this is the best time to be on this forum finally people coming out and sharing their beautiful stories... i'm soo excited star cant wait. pleassssseee update soon, i'lll be checking periodically...

here's to wishing you all the best and hope the creative juices keep flowing...

Robina



Edited by nrasheed - 16 April 2008 at 11:03pm

Idle stars_shine

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Posted: 16 April 2008 at 11:16pm | IP Logged
Thnx so much robina...for ur encouraging words...will update soon...hv it mostly written...but will post it fast....n yes...alka chachi will b just as adorable as she is in the actual kasturi...hehehe...hopefully ill get more comments n then will post the part if everyone wants me 2..
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AGAIN, THNKZ!!! Embarrassed

Idle Zuzana

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Posted: 17 April 2008 at 12:39am | IP Logged
Yes please continue Big smile ...I hope it is a Roka ff! Embarrassed Your intro is great and wow u have amazing writing skills!
Devika is just the same! Robbie is like coconut,,,chalega! Embarrassed LOL

Continue fast dear! Embarrassed

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Posted: 17 April 2008 at 2:09am | IP Logged

Wow sound intresting Tongue..lekin yee FF Roka ki hai na ??Embarrassed..

Continue dear Big smile

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Posted: 17 April 2008 at 2:43am | IP Logged
character update kar chod diya???chalo FF bhi shuru karo hum intezar kar rahe hai

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Posted: 17 April 2008 at 3:57am | IP Logged
Clap Another FF!! Write the first part soon! Big smile

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Wow another FF Tongue .This forum is rocking Clap .Now start soon dear . We all r waiting Embarrassed

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