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arre yaar kitna time leti ho tum???? hurry up girl?!!!!
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Part 4

Scene fades away.
Godbole house. Kanya's bedroom.

R: why are being pain in ass for? (talking to Kanya)
K: Excuse me you are the one who is after me.
R: I said I want a clear cut answer from you that if you are going to live with me or not.
K: I need time to think about
R: What time? You need time to think of something that you agreed to do.
K: well, it's complicated.
R: tell me what's the complication all about?
K: you will never understand
R: stupid girl, if you don't tell me how am I to understand.
K: Forget it.

{Kan got up from the bed she was sitting in and tried to leave the room}

R pulled her near him.
R: Don't make me do this to you! you are so stupid. You don't understand my feelings.
K: Excuse me. I don't understand your feelings or you don't understand
R: what do you mean?
K: Oh you want me to stay with you because I spent the night with you. You are not in love with you.
R: So? As if you are in love with me
K: Yeah. I am.
R: What? Come clean
K: See, I told you. You wouldn't understand.
R: You love me.
K: Duffer, yeah! Why do you think I …. (didn't finish her sentence.)
After a pause
R: oh my gosh, you fell in love with me. The hate guru.
K: You are not a hate guru. You are confused about your relationships. Plus, you are not bad from your heart. You are sweet, caring and a simple hearted good guy who every girl would want to be with.
R: Then why can't you live with me for rest of your life?
K: Because you don't feel the same for me. You don't love me.
R: Then what was that we did yesterday. Isn't it called love?
K: Yeah, but see you need to confess that you love me.
R: You are weird. First you say you allowed me to touch you because you love me and then say you don't want live with me.
K: I never said I don't want to live with you. I said I need time to think about. Ok so tell me one thing.
R: what?
K: Why did you kiss me yesterday?
R: Because… I don't know.. may be because I feel attracted to you.
K: That's it.
R: Well, you are irresistible.
K: That's it.
R: You make my world spin around like a carousel.
K: Why?
R: May be because you are always with me. And that you are a girl
K: What?
R: I like being around you.
K: Why?
R: Because you are center of my world.
K: Why?
R: Because I got habit of you now.
K: Why?
R: I don't know.
K: You care for me?
R: Yeah, I guess so. Don't ask me hard questions.
K: That's what I am saying. You don't understand your feelings and relationships.
R: Yes, I do.
{Kan was still too near him which made me go crazy. He could not help but shut her off because she was asking so many question} So he pulled her closer to him. Her hands laid on his chest. She looked into his eyes and said "Ranbir, what are you doing?"
R: If I am addicted you and want you everywhere I go if that is called love then yeah I am in love. If that Chunnu is around you I get jealous when he touches you if that is called love than I love you. If I get tempted to kiss you and make you blush if that is called love then I am in love. If you cry and I don't like if that is called love then I am in love. If I want to spend rest of my life with you because I love you. Kanya say that you are staying with me otherwise I am not letting you from my arms today. And trust me when I say I won't I won't. Trust me, I am very stubborn guy.
Kanya gave him peck on his lips.
K: Tell me about it, if I don't know how stubborn you are then who else could know better then me. Plus, I don't mind spending time in your arms.
R: You are so naughty. But back to my question, are you willing to live the rest of your life with me
K: Are you demanding me?
R: Something like that
K: Yeah.
R: I didn't hear you. Say it again
K: yes Ranbir.
She just hugged him. She grabbed on him and he pulled her more closer and closer. Tears fell from her eyes. Ranbir felt hot tears onto his shoulder.
R: hey chipkali, roh kyon rahi ho?
K: I can't believe I am successful in making you confess that you love me,
R: What? So you don't love me
K: Buddhu, duffer. Malika mom told me that he has never said I love you to me and I said you did but she wouldn't believe me so she bet that I have to make you confess your love for me . and that's what I did.
R: Are you happy? Are you happy after playing with me?
K: Come on, Ranbir. I am not playing with you. I am tell you the truth that I love you and that I would spend my life with you.
R: I hope you are not joking with me or else
K: I know I know whatever Ranbir Nanda.
R: I am Ranbir Nanda. And now you are officially Kanya Nanda. My sweetheart.
K: oh Ranbir I am so much in love with you.
R: me too. Can you believe I am in love with chipkali.
K: I know. How stupid? You couldn't find anyone else
R: Kya kare? Tumhi joh mili muje.
K: You better not go find someone else!
R: Why? I think I should now that you gave me permission.
K: Don't you dare do such thing aur else I will eat you alive.
R: My pleasure. Abhi kyon nahi karti yeh kaam?
K: Ranbir. (angry tone)
R: Yes, Kanya
K: I swear I will eat you if you don't stop teasing me.
R: I am all yours.
Since Ranbir wouldn't shut up this time, Kanya pushed him onto the bed and gave him one of the most passionate kiss that would drive them both crazy into the lalala land.

Ok, guys!!! THE END to Mera Pehla Pehla Pyaar.
I hope you like it.
If I get any ideas to continue this story I will.
And yeah chunnu is got of the picture. He went back to U.S.A. Shanta now lives with Kanya and Ranbir and gets along with Ranbir. She still teases Reva and Shanaya. Pammi and Anada are happy and now worried about getting Pooja married. (hey may be I could continue with Pooja's story and the have Ranbir and Kanya get children. I probably do that. But I need to get struck with the idea. ) Leave your comments….


Edited by desilife - 18 April 2008 at 8:11am
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Posted: 18 April 2008 at 8:16am | IP Logged

awwww that was such a cute fight!! goodjob!! hope you write more stories soon!



Edited by Perfangel5655 - 18 April 2008 at 8:22am
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Posted: 18 April 2008 at 8:21am | IP Logged
good ending... well done...
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Posted: 18 April 2008 at 9:29am | IP Logged
i luv dis story really good !!
do more stories yaar luv ur imagination!!!
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Posted: 18 April 2008 at 9:56am | IP Logged
agree... it's nice
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Posted: 18 April 2008 at 12:12pm | IP Logged
ooooo ended? Angry
Anyways wonderful story! Clap Clap
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Posted: 18 April 2008 at 12:40pm | IP Logged
i just read the whole thing and omg that was sooo beautiful.. i love it.. awesome job hehehe it was short but nonetheless brilliant Clap

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