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thanks for your lovely comments.!!!loved reading them! keep on writing.
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Part 2
Recap: So Kan says she has a surprise for Ran. Ran doesn't go and stand with his mother.

M: Beta, javo na. Woh tumhe bula rahi hai
R: I know mom, muje nahi jana. She is irritating me.
M: Just go.
R: Oh my gosh! Mere ko to dono tarf blackmailers hai
M laughs and Ran leaves in the direction of Kanya.

Kanya is sitting on the bench outside but from a little distance from her house.

R: Tum yahaan pe ho? I was looking everywhere for you. Tum ko kya huwa hai. Har waqt pareshan kyon karti ho?
Kan didn't reply.
R: Kanya (cutely) mein tumse baat kar raha hu?
No reply
Ran goes near her. Puts his hand on her shoulder and shakes her. She faints.
R: Arre Kanya?!! Tumhe kya ho raha hai? Great God! (saying that he picks her up and takes her to Godbole house. Everybody is busy dancing along the tunes of DJ Sakeel. Ranbir didn't bother them and put her in the bed and got water and sprinkled it on her.
She slowly opened her eyes. She looked up and found her hubby.
R: Tumko kya ho gaya tha?
Kan little confused stares at him
R: Hello, mein tumse baat kar raha hon?
Seeing this Kanya starts crying. Meanwhile Ranbir is totally confused and does not understand why she is crying. He sits on the bed., Kanya is still sleeping on the bed.
R: Hey, Kanya, no worries. Mein hoon yahaan pe, tumhara patidev. (wipes his tears. He consoles her but doesn't really know the reason behind her crying out of sudden)
Why were you crying? I am sorry for winning the competition. Did you want Chunnu to win it! Bola na mein ne sorry aab to chup ho jav.
Kanya clutches on to his arms. Ranbir holds her from the waist and makes her sit. She sits without any hesitation.
R: Ok, Now tell me why were you crying? What happened?
Without Ranbir's knowledge she jumped into his arms. She wept in his arms. He allowed her to hug him. He put his hand around her waist and brought her more close to him. He liked to touch her. He is worried and does not know what to do but wants her in his arms safe and sound. He was puzzled by her reactions and the way she felt safe in his arms. In his arms, the guy who always made her cry and annoyed her. Why did she do this? Wondered Ranbir but didn't want to think anymore and just wanted to kiss her. Ranbir kisses her hair and says "Hey Kanya, tell me. What happened? If you won't tell me then how will I help you"
K: You will believe me
R: Yes Kanya. I will believe you. What happened?
K: Promise?
R: Promise baba, I promise.
K: I can't tell you this.
R: Tell me what?
K: I have just heard this creepy looking guy talking on his phone to someone and that he was saying that someone is out there to kill you. When I ran off from there and I angrily walked here. I am just worried Ranbir. I don't want you dead.
R: Kanya, stop joking. This can't be true. Who would want to kill me?
K: I told you you will never believe me.
R: (broke her in between) you said you don't want me dead. Why? Why Kanya? You should be happy I won't be part of your life if someone wants to kill me.
K: Just shut up. Ghande ho, is liye kuch samajh mein nahi ata tumhe?
R pulls her closer (now her hands are on his chest and he has held her tightly from her waist) and says "Toh tum samjaho na, if I am ghanda then I think it's your responsibility to teach me. Teach me Kanya. Afraid to teach me" (still close to Ranbir)
Kanya said "I don't want to teach you. Another thing I am not afraid of you"
R: Why is that?
Kanya looked confused
R: Why is that you are not afraid of me. I thought you are supposed to be scared of saand and ghende right?
K: Haan, mein scared hoon. That's why I am telling you find out who wants to kill you.
R: Accha, toh tum mujh se nahi darr ti ho, but tum meri death se darrti ho?
K realized that she was so close to Ranbir so she moved away a little and got up. She stood there and didn't reply to Ranbir.
R: Tell me.
K: What Ranbir? Tell you what?
R: You are sacred of my death.
K: Haan, Ranbir I am sacred to see you dead before me.
R: So you want to die before me
K: I don't want to die.
R: When did I say you die first.
K: Just shut up. I told you. you will never understand me. You just think I am fooling with you.
R: That you are. Ok forget about me and that someone is after me. What is the surprise?
K: I don't remember.
R: Not fair, you are so evil
K: Fine, I am evil
R: ok fine, I will leave now.
Ranbir got up from the bed and started to walk away from Kanya.
K yelled: Ranbir stop at the instance or else?
R: Hey Chipkali, you think you could rule over me.
K: Yes (walked toward him) I can rule over you. Now, you are doing something about the killer who is after you or else I will (Kan held his collar and pulled him closer to her face.)
R: What do you think? You know I am much stronger than you. I could just walk away like this.
K: But you would not do that.
R: what makes you think that? If you don't listen to me then why should I listen to you.
K: I always listen to you.
R: Yeah right?
K: Ok so tell me when did I not listen to you.
R: Forget it Kanya. Let me go or else I will have to hurt you.
K: OK fine, you hurt me at least that would make you shut up and then you will have to take me to hospital.
R: What makes you think that I will take to you to hospital?
K: Because I just know. Stop playing and stay in this room.
R: What if I didn't?
K: then I won't give you the surprise.
R: Blackmail kar rahi ho. Aur tum baat toh aise kar rahi ho jaise ki woh killer door ke paas khada hai aur muje shoot kar dega.
K: Haan I am blackmailing you, is it working?
R: what do you think?
K: I think it is working.
R: You are right, it is working.
Kanya leaves his collar and Ranbir goes and sits on the bed.
R: ok so what is the surprise?
K: Gives him golden chain.
R: what is this?
K: I bought it with my money
R: when did you go work
K: From my savings.
R: Oyee hoye, itna pyaar aur woh bhi muje se
K: Hey mister, tumse nahi, yeh toh mere maa ka kaamal hai jinho ne muje force kiya.
R: Ok then I don't want it.
K: Why?
R: Because you didn't bring it with love but just for sake of it.
Ranbir tries to get up but she grabs his hand and takes him in front of the dressing table mirror chair and suggests that he sit there. Without any hesitant he sits.
He just stares and looks at her innocence.
She opens the golden chain and puts it around his neck and closes. Looks at him in the mirror and says "Happy… with love"
R: Just stared at her.
K: Happy?
R: Yeah. I have a gift for you in return.
K: What? You don't have to bring me anything. It's ok.
Ran gets up and stands in front of her. Kanya stares at him and wonder what the gift could be. Ranbir touches her face and holds it and tilts her chin a little facing him. He places kiss on her forehead. Just then there was a knock on the door. Ran Kan came back to reality and saw that they were interpreted by none other than Malika.
M: Aree Ranbir mein tumko kab ka khoj rahi thi
R: Woh mom, mein yahaan pet ha. Kanya ki tabiyat kuch tik nahi thi.
M; Kya huwa beta? Everthing ok.
R: Yeah, everything fine. I am here. It was just that she takes lots of stress.
M comes near to Kanya who was close to Ranbir.
M: Are you ok beta? Kya huwa tha?
K: (wanted to say that there was someone out there to get his son) woh mein darr gayi thi (looks over to Ranbir who is just staring at her)
M: Kisa daar?
K: Nahi Mummiji woh mein stress thi toh aise hi chakkar
M: You don't take good care of my bahu Ranbir
R: Mom
K: Nahi, Ranbir is the one who brought me here.
M: Haiye, mera beta sincere hota jaa raha hai. Ok beta I am going to leave now.
R: Ok mom, bye. [hugs his mother]
Kanya hugs Malika for the first time.
Malika left.
R: Kanya
Kanya turned around to face Ranbir.
R: Thanks for the gift. It's lovely.
K: No problem [she wanted to say thank for your gift but she just blushed instead and just stared at him] Listen Ranbir. I am so worried. Do something about it?
R: Aab kya huwa?
K: Promise me that you will hire body guards aur something
R: Oyee Kanya, kyon chinta karti ho? Tumko pata hai mere paas black belt hai. I am a champion aur phir meri body dekh kar bolo ki joh mujse takkar lega woh bacha paye ga.
K didn't say anthing.
R: Oyee meri Chipkali, muje pe bharosa nahi hai?
K nodded.

Scene fades away!!!
Did you guys liked it? I would prefer good feedback and your thoughts on the story and the script. Do you guys like it? Be frank with me.. honest response.

Edited by desilife - 15 April 2008 at 5:10pm
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aww that was sooo cute plz write more sooon =)
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Posted: 15 April 2008 at 6:34pm | IP Logged
bravo .. one amazing update... continue soon......
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Posted: 15 April 2008 at 7:25pm | IP Logged
so cute Embarrassed plz continue
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Posted: 15 April 2008 at 8:23pm | IP Logged
great update..really cute
please continue soon Smile
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Posted: 15 April 2008 at 8:46pm | IP Logged
just started reading
cont soon!!!!!!!!!! Wink

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