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desilife Senior Member
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Posted: 14 April 2008 at 8:10pm | IP Logged

Mera Pehla Pehla Pyaar Hai

 

Ok, guys I would like to begin a story! I have never written before but after watching today's episode I have been inspired. I may end the story fast. I don't know let's see how it goes. If u guys don't like it I will stop writing.

 

Starts after today's episode where Nanda family arrives to play Kabadi with Chunnu in the competition.

 

Chunnu: Hey Ghanbhir! Aare you ready to get beaten up by me?

Ranbir: You wish!

Ayaan grins. Doesn't like the attitude of everyone and wonders why he is there.

Ayaan to himself "only if I had money then I would not have to do what my chachu tells me to? And this stupid Shanya is after my life. Help me God"

Ranbir snaps him out of it and they play Kabadi.

The play goes on. There is a tie. Final player is supposedly Chunnu and goes into Ran's team. Ran sees that Kanya is cheering for Chunnu so he just stares at her and out of sudden he hears scream from Kan "Hey Ranbir, what's the hell are you doing? Don't you want to win for me? Don't you want to make me feel proud?"

So then Ranbir got all the strength he had but was just hiding. And in Ranbir's team everybody's shock since they won and wondered how did Ranbir got all of his strength.

And just to make him realize he was just dreaming that Kan was cheering for him but in fact Kanya wasn't cheering for Chunnu but was just amazed at Ranbir that he was looking at her and playing and still won the competition.

 

Pammi: Jamai Raja, kya kamal ka khele te hai ap? Mein marjavan.

Malika: Well done beta, I am seeing Kanya has done jadu on you.

R: nahi mom, us ne nahi kiya, yeh competition toh mein ne aap ke liye jita hai aur meri strength ki wajah se jita hai? Us mein Kanya ne kya kiya?

M: tum bhi na? mere bahu ko sata te rehte ho

K: it's ok mummyji. I know he won this competion for you.

M: Kya huwa! Ranbir ne phir se kuch keh diya tumhe

K: Nahi mummyji, yeh toh kuch kehte nahi hai lekin baat bhi kaha karte hain

R: jootie, liar, stop lying. Tum se hi toh baat karta hoon mein.

K: Acha, toh phir mere saath chalo I have surprise for you.

R: Surprise, mujhe nahi chaiye

K: Ranbir chalo na.

M: Beta javo na. Kanya itna force kar rahi hai

R: Mom, yeh mujhe paresan karti hai. I know that there is no surprise.

K: Hain na. You just come with me.

R: Ranbir didn't move so Kanya left in anger.

 

What is the surprise?

Firstly, do you guys like it? Should I write more? I don't know. Please reply. Awaiting for your thoughts and concerns.

 

luv,

desi



Edited by desilife - 18 April 2008 at 8:12am

dilgone4u Senior Member
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Posted: 14 April 2008 at 8:14pm | IP Logged
continue soon... really good start.. i like it so far... Wink Tongue i like tis ranbir.. yeh yippiii he won ..lolz
punjabi.princes IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 14 April 2008 at 8:16pm | IP Logged
its really good..plzz continue Smile
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Posted: 14 April 2008 at 8:19pm | IP Logged
good cont soon plzz
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Posted: 14 April 2008 at 8:25pm | IP Logged
it was good plz continue soon!!!! Smile
dilkeroshni Goldie
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Posted: 14 April 2008 at 9:37pm | IP Logged
awesome start dear.. continue soon
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Posted: 14 April 2008 at 9:46pm | IP Logged
good start Clap !!!! Now even if he loses tomorrow I will have some peace. What's the surprise? (cont soon please)
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Posted: 15 April 2008 at 7:59am | IP Logged
great start... i loved it... pls continue soon

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