A-A FF:Barsaat Mein Humse Mile Tum p5pg14 - Page 7

Posted: 15 years ago
wow! okay then sorry for the bajillion posts. My computer freaked out on me! My bad! 😳
Posted: 15 years ago
Oye...will you ever continue this?

See, I hunted it down...now you HAVE TO continue this! Muahahahah! 😆
Posted: 15 years ago
lol. I will. Chillax! I have to find time. I have three FF going. Two on this forum and one on Remix forum. God knows all of my RF friends are after me with juttis and jhaarus for stopping at Ashi-Yuvi's confession scene. Then I have R-M. Then I have A-A. Kya kya karoon??? See for R-M, I get ideas faster. For this one, it takes longer because Atul and Anjali are kinda sorta hard to understand sometimes. Really need to think about the dialogues. That's how I get them to sound so similar to the actual stuff. 😉
Posted: 15 years ago
komzie so good 2 c u online

now hopefully v will get an update soon! 😳
Posted: 15 years ago
Originally posted by AshiYuvi4life


lol. I will. Chillax! I have to find time. I have three FF going. Two on this forum and one on Remix forum. God knows all of my RF friends are after me with juttis and jhaarus for stopping at Ashi-Yuvi's confession scene. Then I have R-M. Then I have A-A. Kya kya karoon??? See for R-M, I get ideas faster. For this one, it takes longer because Atul and Anjali are kinda sorta hard to understand sometimes. Really need to think about the dialogues. That's how I get them to sound so similar to the actual stuff. 😉


Teek hain, meri maa! Take ur time, darling!😆
Posted: 15 years ago
hello ji! I've finally decided that I need to continue this FF! So I'm going to continue!!! 😉
Posted: 15 years ago

Part 4

At Clear Waters!!!

Armaan- Chalo guys. Let's go grab a table!

Anjali- This place is really happening yaar! (all sit)

Armaan- Isse kehte hain party. Let's rock guys!

Anjali- Pehle kuch order karein? Bohot bhook lag rahi hai.

Atul- Haan haan. Order karo. Anjali ko bhook lag rahi hai! (they all order something)

After a while...

Atul- Anjali...

Anjali- Yeah?

Atul- Tum... tum mere saath dance karogi? Please?

Anjali- (smiles) Okay. (extends her hand)

Atul- (takes her hand and goes on dance floor) Jaggah achhi hai haina... (kind of nervous)

Anjali- Yeah it's very nice. Lekin Atul, tum itne nervous kyun lag rahe ho?

Atul- Nahi woh... main tumhe hurt nahi karna chahta Anjali.

Anjali- (laughs) Don't worry Atul. Kuch nahi hoga. (music changes to something slow)

Atul- Anjali, tum lead karogi?

Anjali- Nahi. Tum lead karo. (smiles)

Atul- (takes deep breaths and does a small prayer type thing)

Anjali- (laughs) Atul... (takes his hands and puts them on her waist and slips her hands on his shoulders) Itna karne mein tum itne nervous ho rahe ho? (laughs lightly) Lead karo.

Atul- Lead karoon? Theek hai Anjali. (leads)

Anjali- See. You're doing great Atul. (gives him a broad smile)

Atul- (smiles back) Eik baat boloon Anjali... (she smiles and nods) tum... tum smile karti ho toh... bohot achhi lagti ho.

Anjali- (smiles again) Thanks Atul. Lekin tum yehi baat mujhe roz atleast 5 baar kehte ho. (laughs)

Atul- (looks at her lovingly as she throws her head back and laughs and then he thinks to himself) Pata nahi kab bologi ki tum mujhse pyaar karti ho. (blushes and smiles) Mujhe pata hai Anjali... tum bhi mujhse bohot pyaar karti ho. (blushes and smiles)

Anjali- Kya hua?

Atul- Huh? Kuch nahi. (smiles)

Back at the table!!!

Armaan- Muskaan... dekh. (points to A-A)

Muskaan- Oye! Kya baat hai yaar! Dono khush lag rahe hain!

Rahul- Yeh tum dono kya kar rahe ho?

Armaan- Observation. (tells him everything)

Rahul- Idea achha hai yaar.

Muskaan- Chalo naa yaar. Dance karte hain jaake.

Armaan- Tum dono jaao... main aata hoon.

Rahul- (takes Muskaan with him on dance floor) Tujhe kya hua hai?

Muskaan- Huh?

Rahul- Itni chup kyun hai. Aage peeche bak bak karti rehti hai, aur abhi kuch bol hi nahi rahi. Koi problem hai kya?

Muskaan- Nahi. Aiwaiyee.

Rahul- Accha tu eik minute ruk main aata hoon. (goes to Armaan)

Random guy- (comes to Muskaan) Hi.

Muskaan- Hi.

Guy- Dance?

Muskaan- (smiles) Okay. (starts dancing with him)

Back at the table!!!

Rahul- Oye kis baare mein soch raha hai?

Armaan- Kuch nahi yaar. Aise hi. Tu toh Muskaan ke saath gaya tha naa. Kahaan chod ke aaya hai usko?

Rahul- (turns to point out where she is and sees her with another guy) Woh rahi... oye! Usko toh main akela chod ke gaya tha... yeh kaun hai?

Armaan- (laughs) Lagta hai Muskaan ko kisi ne pasand kar liya!

Rahul- (jealous) Isko bhi samajh nahi aata. Jaan pehchaan nahi hai aur dance karne lag gayee hai.

Armaan- Toh karne de naa. Hum toh yaheen hain. Kuch ulta seedha hua toh dekhlenge.

Rahul- Woh sab toh theek hai lekin phir bhi yaar.

Armaan- Tujhe kyun fikar ho rahi hai. Hamesha ladta rehta hai uske saath.

Rahul- Bachpan se jaanta hoon yaar. Itna toh dhyaan rakhna hi padta hai naa. Iske mummy aur papa ji mujhe nahi chodenge agar unhe pata chal gaya ke mere hote hue isse kuch hogaya. (watches her continuously without taking his eyes off of her for a second)

Armaan- (looks at him and smiles) Bohot pyaar karta hai naa uss se?

Rahul- (quickly looks at him) Kya???

Armaan- Bol kyun nahi deta usse?

Rahul- Pyaar? Aur uss chipkali se? Tera dimaag kharaab hogaya hai.

Armaan- Naatak mat kar. Main uske ghar reh ke aaya hoon. Teri aur uski shaadi pakki hogayee thi naa?

Rahul- Pakki nahi hui thi. Sirf baat chal rahi thi.

Armaan- Jo bhi ho. Lekin tu uss se pyaar karta hai. Hai naa?

Rahul- Pyaar nahi karta... lekin... kuch toh hai. Pata nahi kya...

Armaan- Nahi karta?

Rahul- Pata nahi yaar. Samajh mein nahi aata. Bachpan se jaanta hoon usse. Hamesha se hi hai aisei hai. Jhalli. Pyaar hota toh bohot pehle pata chal gaya hota. Ab kyun?

Armaan- Pyaar kabhi bataake nahi hota. Ke excuse me Dr. Rahul, tumhe ab Dr. Muskaan se main hone waala hoon.

Rahul- (rolls his eyes) Pata hai. (looks at Muskaan close dancing with the guy)

Armaan- (laughs) Jaa. Usse dekh dekh ke yahaan pe jal raha hai. Iss se achha toh yeh hai ki tu jaake usske saath dance karle. Jaa.

Rahul- Aur tu? Yahaan akela kya karega? Chal saath.

Armaan- (gets up) Chal.

Guy- (spins Muskaan and she ends up in Rahul's arms)

Muskaan- Tu?

Rahul- Chal naa. Dance karte hain.

Muskaan- Main wohi kar rahi thi. Hatt!

Rahul- (pulls her back) Mera matlab hai mere saath. (starts dancing with her)

Armaan- (whispers to Rahul) Uska kya kiya?

Rahul- Kiska?

Armaan- woh jo iske saath...

Rahul- Khud chala gaya. (louder) Tu bhi dance kar naa hamaare saath. Kyn Muskaan? (Atul-Anjali join them)

Atul- Hi guys! Chalo sab saath mein dance karte hain. (all dancing together)

Anjali- (after 2-3 hours) Guys. Chalo. I think hume ab chalna chahiye. After all, kal duty bhi hai.

Atul- Haan haan. Anjali bilkul theek bol rahi hai. Chalo chalte hain.

Outside!!!

Armaan- Chal Champ. Main tujhe aur Muskaan ko ghar chod doonga.

Rahul- Armaan. Muskaan ko main chod doonga.

Muskaan- (surprised) Kyun? Main Hero ke saath chali jaaoongi.

Rahul- Bohot der hogayee hai. Usse ghar jaane de. Tujhe main chod doonga. Tera ghar raste mein hi aata hai.

Muskaan- (thinks about it) Theek hai. Chal. Eik minute eik minute! Meri Dhanno!

Rahul- Teri Dhanno ko trunk mein daal dete hain. Chal.

Anjali- Okay guys. See you tomorrow.

Atul- Anjali...

Anjali- (smiles expectantly and turns) Yes Atul?

Atul- Woh...

Anjali- Let me guess. Tumhe mujhe goodnight kehna tha. Right?

Atul- Nahi. Mera matlab haan. Woh bhi kehna tha lekin kuch aur bhi kehna tha.

Anjali- (seems surprised) Bolo. But... tumse pehle mujhe kuch kehna hai.

Atul- Bolo naa Anjali.

Anjali- Tumne aaj bohot achha dance kiya. I had a great time. (smiles and pats him on the arm)

Atul- (beaming) Thanks Anjali!

Anjali- Tumhe kuch kehna tha naa.

Atul- Haan. Woh... sweet dreams. (smiles sweetly and blushes) Goodnight.

Anjali- (laughs lightly) Goodnight Atul. (to the others) Goodnight guys! 

All- Bye Anjali!

Armaan- Chalein Champ?

Atul- (still smiling his silly smile) Haan chal yaar!

Armaan- Seey ou Rahul. Bye Muskaan.

Rahul-Muskaan- Bye. Bye Atul.

Atul- (still lost in Anjali land) Huh? Bye! (all leave)

 

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Posted: 15 years ago
AWWWW! Cuteness, cuteness, cuteness!
That's all I can say right now! 😆 😳 😳

Atul just becomes more and more adorable, whether it's in this FF or the RM one! 😃 His "sweet dreams" at the end was so so sweet, I'm sure Anjali will have wonderful dreams!

And great Armaan-Rahul friendship! These two are so awesome together, I'm glad that Armaan's giving Rahul that little nudge...Very nice seeing them as buddies, yaar!

Keep it coming, darling! Will be waiting for the next part! 👏 👏 👏
Posted: 15 years ago
hey nice ff
keep writing



Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by SRK-Kads4ever


AWWWW! Cuteness, cuteness, cuteness!
That's all I can say right now! 😆 😳 😳

Atul just becomes more and more adorable, whether it's in this FF or the RM one! 😃 His "sweet dreams" at the end was so so sweet, I'm sure Anjali will have wonderful dreams!

And great Armaan-Rahul friendship! These two are so awesome together, I'm glad that Armaan's giving Rahul that little nudge...Very nice seeing them as buddies, yaar!

Keep it coming, darling! Will be waiting for the next part! 👏 👏 👏

Thank you sweetheart! I know it's been forever since I continued! I was meaning to and Tam-Tam was annoying me about it for a while so I thought why neglect this one? I'll update regularly now!😉

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