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ginak

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Posted: 08 April 2008 at 5:38am | IP Logged

Hello DMGians.

I had a lot of time today afternoon in my hands and the result is here for all to see.  I would like to apologize to all Hindi/Urdu lovers in advance for any mistakes I might have commited and would like to have them pointed out so I can rectify them!!

Disclaimer:  I am a great fan of AR.  I adore them and love them to bits.  Cry the recent sad track has me in tears Cry.  Only I know how difficult it is to tide over the killer weekends without AR cute scenes.  The creatives are killing us with this separation track Cry.  This is meant as a tribute to AR.  No offense to any AR fans please!!  I am sorry in advance and pls pls do reply and let me know if you liked it!Big smile

Ek tha awara baadal, joh jindagi jeeta tha zinda dilli ke saath, jahan zindagi le jaati, chala jata, haste gaate, khushiyaan barsaate, khushali baante hue.

Phir ek din hua yoon, uski nazar padi ek haseena par, seedhi saadhi, masoom si, kya honte the uske, uff woh lehrate kale, ghane baal, aankhon mein haya aur honte pe muskurahat

Uff bechara baadal, kaam se gaya. Uspe bijli giri, uske dil mein machi hulchul, andhi aur toofan hua aur bechara apni hosh kho baitha.

Deewanon ki tarah woh bepanah pyaar karne laga, uski zindagi khubsoorat lagne lagi, wadiya khil uthi. Woh apne pyaar ko paane ki koshish main juta raha. Bechara kaash use maloom hota us par kya beetne waali thi!!

Ek thi ladki, jo apne papa ki thi laadli. Dikthi thi masoom, seedhi saadhi, jhilni si, man ki achi aur sachi. Sab usko bahut mante the aur uski baat koyi nahin taalta.

Woh mashroof this apni jindagi main, apne aap se khush, apni choti si duniya ki malika.

Phir achanak uski takraar hui ek awara badaal se, jo use laga badtameez and bigda hua. Woh toh bilkul seedhi saadhi thi bechari. Joh uski aankhen dekthi usi koh sach maan baithteee, kabhi jyaada sochti nahin thi kyunki dimaag pe zor jo padta!

Bechara baadal, uski pyaar main paagal uski aage peeche ghoomta, uske man ko behlata, usey khusiyaan deta, and besabri se interzaar karta gaya us din ka jab woh bhi karegi apney pyar ka izhaar.

Bechari seedhi saadhi ladki jo tehri, usko kya pata pyaar vyaar ke bare main. Woh toh bilkul bharatiya nari ka sakshat swaroop thi, jiske liye yeh sab brasht tha. Lekin uska dil uske bas main nahin tha and usey baadal ki aur kheecha chala jaa raha tha.

Usne baadal ko sahi, galat, usoolon ke bhashan sunaye, usko ehsaas dilaya ki woh kitna nalayak hai, uska mazaaak udaya, uska dil dhukhaya. Zindagi main pehli baar koi usey itna prabhavit kar raha tha. Usko aadat nahin thi apni burayee sunne ki yah apni galtiyon ko manne ki. Pehli baar koi usey bure bhartav karne par majboor kar raha tha and woh bechari tehri seedhi saadhi!!! Use kuch samajh main nahin aaya. Uske palle kuch nahin pad raha that sevay ek baat ke ki woh us ladke se nafrat karti thi! Ab dheere dheere usey yeh bhi samajh nahin aaya ki woh nafrat tha ya pyaar.

baadal bechara gumsum sa hone laga aur jaane kis duniya main khona laga. Gham ka saaya mandrane laga uske ird gird! Hai yeh mohobbat. Bahut sahe usne sitam haseena ke hatoon. Phir bhi uski akal thikane nahi aayee. Kyar karta bechara, deewaano sa pyar jo kar baitha. Apni dimaag ki kum aur dil ki zyada sunta tha.

Phir ek din khushali aayi, sunahri dhoop khili, ladki ne pyaar ka izhaar kiya (usse karvaya gaya vaise! bechari seedhi saadhi nahin toh kaise kar paati!) , indradhanush berang ho gayye kyunki woh sareh rang humare aawara badal ne chura liya apni aur apni mashooka ki zindagi ko rangeen karney!

Lekin lekin lekin phir se dukh ke kaale badal mandaraye. Awara baadal ki khushi unse dekhi nahin gayee! Awara aur dildaar jo tehra bechara, gaya dost ki madad karne, ab use kya pata tha ki uspe aafat aane wali hai.

Seedhi saadhi ladki ko jab pata chala, woh badak uthi, garaj padi, uska dil toota, aur woh hamare aashiq se khafa hui. Phir se wahi zulum, wahi taane, nakhre. Bechara badal toot kar bikhar gaya. Uska dil sambhale nahi sambhal raha tha aur woh man hi man roya. Uski siskiyaan kisi ne nahi suni, uska dard kisi ko mehsoos nahi hua, thak gaya bechara apne pyar ko simatthe simatthe aur dukhi hoke chala gaya.

Ab seedhi saadhi ladki kya karti. Use badal ki aadat si pad gayi thi.  Us badal ki jo uske aage peeche ghoomta, uski tareefen karta, uske zulum sehta, uske taane sunta, chup chaap man hi man sab sehta hua, rishtey ko sambhalta hua. Ab woh kisse karti takraar and apne guroor ka izhaar. Toh nikal padi aware badal ka peecha karne, usey wapas lane. Pahunchi uske naye thikane par and zidd kiya. Le aayee use wapas magar magar magar aap kahin yeh mat sochna ki uske dil main pyaar tha! Nahin nahin! Pyaar karna toh bewakoof logon ka kaam hain. Seedhe saadhe log pyaar nahi karte. Woh itne saral jo hain. Unke palle yeh sab nahin padta. Woh toh sirf dosti nibhate hain!!

Kisi ne sahi kaha hai: "Aansuo ke girne ki aahat nahi hoti, Dil ke tootne ki awaaz nahi hoti, Agar hota khuda ko ehsaas dard ka, to use dard dene ki Aadat nahi hoti." (credit to the person who wrote this! got it from the net loved it and cudnt help including this!!)

 

Ab raha hamara aashiq bechara jo dono taraf se phus gaya and rahin uski deewani divayein jo bhi buri tarah se phas chuki thi and marti thi uski adaaon pe, uski muskurahat pey, uski adakari pey. Uski aawaaz sunte jhoom uthi thi and aur uske dil toottha to dard inke dil main hota. Kya hoga inka!!! Ab toh en sab ki kismet atki hain ek seedhi saadhi, masoom, sadharan si ladki ke haat main hai! Hai yeh mohobbat bhi kya rang laati hai. Kitna satati hai! Kitna rulati hai! Hai yeh mohabbat!

 

ab kya bataoon doston meri dastaan e ishq main aage kya hua, awara baadal pyaar paane main juta raha lekin us seedhi saadhi ladki ne uska woh haal kiya ki woh majnu sey devdaas aur phir devdaas pata nahin kya ban gaya.  Usney street fighting ki, ballewando kiya, zicky, vicky, billa, villa sub ko mara, ghoose khilaye, lekin ek hawa ka jhonka uski ashika ke balon ko lehrata to phir se uska dil dolna lagta, and pyaar main jhoom uthta.  Use bhi maloom nahin tha ki ab uski haalat kya hain.  Ab seedhi saadhi ladki ka man bhar gaya toh woh mohtarma chal padi alvida keh kar.  Bechara ab reh gaya hamara aashiq,awara baadal aur uski deevani divayein.  Jaisa maine bataya aapko in sab ki kismat aur khushi atki padi thi us seedhi saadhi kay haathon main, lekin mohtarma chal padi aur unchayiyon ki khoj main, taroon ke paas, apni jagah banane chali.

phir aaye ek nanhi kali, jhilni si, pyaari si, choti si.  Jab woh hasti toh duniya khil khilati and saara bagaan khil uththa.  kuch logon key man main umeed jagi, woh phir se sapne bunne lage ki aisa hoga, waise hoga, jaisa bhi hoga acha hoga.  yoon toh log kahenge, logon ka kaam hain kehna, lekin humari yeh nanhi si jaan, char chand laga degi.  lekin kintu parantu bandhu aisa hone sey raha.  us bechari koh theek sey koi mauka dey tab na.  Awaar badal toh ekdum bhatkta hua nazar aaya,  bezaar, behaal, apne aap main khoya hua, ekdum thanda aur ekdum thaka hua.  Yeh kya hua, kyoon hua, kaise hua, hai raam!

kya yehi woh awaara badal tha?? paagal deewana bhatka hua jo hume rulata tha uske sang, uske dard ka ehsaas karwata tha, use dekthe hi hum bhi uske gham main shareek ho jate the, jab wo hasta toh hum bhi kushiyaan manate, nachte, gaate, jab woh rota toh hum bhi uske saat roh padte. Kahan gaya woh baadal, uski tishnagi, uski ada, uska kamaaal. kya woh sirf ek ittefaq tha, joh ab kabhi bhi nahin dohraya jayega yah phir kya wahi aawara badal apna jadoo phir se dikhlayega aur hum sub ko yakeen dilayega ki woh toh sach main kamaal ka hai, uska jadoo lajawab hai, koi rahe ya na rahe uspe koi asar nahin padta, woh in sab batoon se para hai.

eska jawaab toh waqt hi bata sakta hai.  kaash aisa hi ho ki woh apna kamaal dikhaye aur phir se hume uski jadoo main jakad ley.  divaoon koh bhi khush kar dey taaki woh apna gham bhula dein aur phir sey pyaar, ishq, mohabbat ki duniya main jut jayein, sapne bune, behoosh hone lage, aur bhool jayen jhagde, bebuniyaad ki shikayatein, aur phir se IF jannat ban jaye.

yeh mohabbat ki dastaan bhi kya rang ley aati hai.  Hai rey mohabbat!!



Edited by ginak - 06 June 2008 at 12:46pm

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aritzia

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Posted: 08 April 2008 at 5:40am | IP Logged
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gina great post

i wud like to say for this choti ki prem kahan "is raat ki subah nahi " coz this tragedy is endless Cry Cry

ginak

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Posted: 08 April 2008 at 6:01am | IP Logged
comeone guys!!! 31 views and replies Cry Was it soo bad. I spent all afternoon penning that. At least consider the efforts I put in and pls do reply Cry

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Posted: 08 April 2008 at 6:10am | IP Logged
Hug Hug aww gina di mein hu na commnt karne k liye Clap Clap gr8 job !! shayed aur koi is tarah se yeh sacchi prem kahani bayan nahi kar sakte jaise apne kiya.wah wah kya likha hai..kabile tareef Clap Clap (perdon my hindi/urdu plz) Tongue

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Posted: 08 April 2008 at 6:14am | IP Logged
oh gina!!! don't cry please!!! bahut badhiya!!! you should've tried using that seedhi saadhi ladki line as a refrain, a para break!! just to make sure that everybody understands how much we adore R's simplicity and her pure clean untainted heart! her innocence and her goodness!!

AWESOME!!!!!

ginak

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Posted: 08 April 2008 at 6:20am | IP Logged

Originally posted by marisa

Hug Hug aww gina di mein hu na commnt karne k liye Clap Clap gr8 job !! shayed aur koi is tarah se yeh sacchi prem kahani bayan nahi kar sakte jaise apne kiya.wah wah kya likha hai..kabile tareef Clap Clap (perdon my hindi/urdu plz) Tongue
ooh raks meri jaan!!Hug.  Thank you sweetie for liking my post Cry.  Finally someone appreciated my efforts Wink!!  Thank you thank you for the tareef!Big smile

My hindi/urdu is also not that khaas yaar!!  Tried my hand at it.  Glad you liked it Big smile

ginak

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Posted: 08 April 2008 at 6:23am | IP Logged

Originally posted by vaarti

oh gina!!! don't cry please!!! bahut badhiya!!! you should've tried using that seedhi saadhi ladki line as a refrain, a para break!! just to make sure that everybody understands how much we adore R's simplicity and her pure clean untainted heart! her innocence and her goodness!!

AWESOME!!!!!
Thank you Aarti, thank you so much .   Your appreciation means so much to me, awwwwwww.  Finally someone understands and appreciates my efforts I fink.Cry.

You got the point made so well!!!  Indeed I shud have done that na!  Will reaffirm just how much I adore her, her innocence and her lovely hair and face with those cute salwars and heels.  How canmy jaanu poor A not fall for her yaar.Embarrassed

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Posted: 08 April 2008 at 6:24am | IP Logged
Giiinaaa! Kamaal ka post tha, yaar! Clap
i loved the disclaimer! lekin yaar, AR ki jagah agar Armidz likha hota to aur bhi acha hota!
sach kahoon toh mujhe bas us logon ki fikar ho rahi hai jin ki kismet ab ek seedhi saadhi, masoom, sadharan si ladki ke haat main hai!Cry najaane unhein ab aisi kismet dobaara naseeb hogi bhi ya nahi!

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