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Tujhe Yaad Na Meri Aayi Prt 6-Pg 1 (13/07 (Page 5)

maaha16 Groupbie
maaha16
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Joined: 03 January 2008
Posts: 177

Posted: 10 April 2008 at 2:24pm | IP Logged
ur story is really different....like it...lage raho!!
123abc123 IF-Rockerz
123abc123
123abc123

Joined: 06 November 2007
Posts: 5957

Posted: 10 April 2008 at 2:41pm | IP Logged
ooooooooooo
really lkin ur story
great concpt
really nce updte
cnt wait 2 read da nxt part
updte soon Clap
ArmiandRidz4eva Goldie
ArmiandRidz4eva
ArmiandRidz4eva

Joined: 09 December 2007
Posts: 1393

Posted: 10 April 2008 at 2:51pm | IP Logged
hiya, just caught up with ur ff, really nice update keep it going looking forward to the next update,

Sania Big smile
sea_nyx Goldie
sea_nyx
sea_nyx

Joined: 18 October 2007
Posts: 2319

Posted: 10 April 2008 at 3:56pm | IP Logged
hey tht was really differant and interesting, can't wait to find out wht happns nxt, r the two ppl armi-ridz, r they married? does she have alzhimer's? god so many questions, can't wait 4 the nxt part
Naina123 Senior Member
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Joined: 14 February 2008
Posts: 621

Posted: 17 April 2008 at 9:02am | IP Logged
Hey guys

Prt 3 is up....sorry for not sending PM's last time....but please read and leave a comment

Luv
Nainu
XXX
Veiledbeauty IF-Dazzler
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Joined: 04 December 2007
Posts: 3706

Posted: 17 April 2008 at 9:02am | IP Logged
Reserveddddd!! Whoopiiee, I'm first!

*EDIT*

Omgggggggg!! ROFL

The shower scene was HILARIOUSSSSS!!! Omg ROFL

I can't stop laughing... Hmm... and the part where Ridz goes into the men's changing room LOLLOL Personal experiences, huh? ROFL

But Ouch You hadddd to stop right when I was getting lost in the story, Bakri is so mean CryCry I want lamba part. Otherwise, I'll stalk you! And kidnap you.. and bring u down here and tie you to the seat and make you write Evil Smile

Okies, well, jaldi update karna!!

Luv
XxX
Bandarya


Edited by Veiledbeauty - 17 April 2008 at 9:14am
sea_nyx Goldie
sea_nyx
sea_nyx

Joined: 18 October 2007
Posts: 2319

Posted: 17 April 2008 at 9:41am | IP Logged
tht was just wonderful, i love ur writing style, its so sensitive, and i love the way the story cuts frm the present to the past and vise-versa. of course loved the nok-jhok b/w araan and ridz, do update soon and if pssible make ur posts a bit longer, this is not enough to satisfy our appetites LOL
perfectpiscean IF-Rockerz
perfectpiscean
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Joined: 22 July 2007
Posts: 5052

Posted: 17 April 2008 at 9:56am | IP Logged

U know i have a feeling if i comment on dis ff...da effect is gonna get ruined...bt i cant control myself...so here goes:

OMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG GGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*JUMPS UP N DOWN....LEFT N RIGHT!*

It was soooo well written!!!!!!

i cant believe u stopeed at such a cliffhanger!!*pouts*

LOL...da towel scene was hilarious!!cudnt stop laffing jus imagining it!! LOL

Also...i luv da way da Old man is telling the Old lady the story...it makes me soooo curious 2 know whu dey r!!

neways...plz plz plz continue soon!! *begging literally!!*

Luv ur ff!!
Marisha

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