Tujhe Yaad Na Meri Aayi Prt 6-Pg 1 (13/07 - Page 4

ur story is really different....like it...lage raho!!

ooooooooooo
really lkin ur story
great concpt
really nce updte
cnt wait 2 read da nxt part
updte soon 👏

hiya, just caught up with ur ff, really nice update keep it going looking forward to the next update,

Sania 😃

hey tht was really differant and interesting, can't wait to find out wht happns nxt, r the two ppl armi-ridz, r they married? does she have alzhimer's? god so many questions, can't wait 4 the nxt part

Hey guys

Prt 3 is up....sorry for not sending PM's last time....but please read and leave a comment

Luv
Nainu
XXX

Reserveddddd!! Whoopiiee, I'm first!

*EDIT*

Omgggggggg!! 🤣

The shower scene was HILARIOUSSSSS!!! Omg 🤣

I can't stop laughing... Hmm... and the part where Ridz goes into the men's changing room 😆😆 Personal experiences, huh? 🤣

But You hadddd to stop right when I was getting lost in the story, Bakri is so mean 😭😭 I want lamba part. Otherwise, I'll stalk you! And kidnap you.. and bring u down here and tie you to the seat and make you write 😈

Okies, well, jaldi update karna!!

Luv
XxX
Bandarya
Edited by Veiledbeauty - 16 years ago

tht was just wonderful, i love ur writing style, its so sensitive, and i love the way the story cuts frm the present to the past and vise-versa. of course loved the nok-jhok b/w araan and ridz, do update soon and if pssible make ur posts a bit longer, this is not enough to satisfy our appetites 😆

U know i have a feeling if i comment on dis ff...da effect is gonna get ruined...bt i cant control myself...so here goes:

OMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG GGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*JUMPS UP N DOWN....LEFT N RIGHT!*

It was soooo well written!!!!!!

i cant believe u stopeed at such a cliffhanger!!*pouts*

LOL...da towel scene was hilarious!!cudnt stop laffing jus imagining it!! 😆

Also...i luv da way da Old man is telling the Old lady the story...it makes me soooo curious 2 know whu dey r!!

neways...plz plz plz continue soon!! *begging literally!!*

Luv ur ff!!
Marisha

Hey, That was fantastic! I wanna know what happened that night!! Plz continue soon.

wooooooooooooooooow
dat was sooooooo amazingly fantastically great lol
luved ever bit
especailly wen rids strted swearin "You moron! You saala ullu ka patha! Kamina kahi ka!" lol 😆 😆 luved hw u explain everthing in detail
it was great luv it
gd job
updte soon plzzzzz
luv nizma 👏