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DrSK-Pyaar Ke Liye Pg 79 and 80 updatd (FF) (Page 7)

Jodubai Goldie

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Posted: 08 April 2008 at 5:36am | IP Logged
Lovely FF, just so realistic, liked the way you made Ridz take the 1st step rather then poor Armi all the time, I hope they patch up soon, waiting for the next update

sonia_92 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 08 April 2008 at 5:48am | IP Logged
shot but relly nyc
luv sonia
yogzz IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 08 April 2008 at 7:06am | IP Logged
hey plz continue soon
falak298 Goldie

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Posted: 08 April 2008 at 10:07am | IP Logged
at home armaan comes out of the shower Big smile and picks his phone up he dials ridz's number and puts the phone down before it rings. he picks it up again and then purs it down and then he starts to walk around his room really reli fast and is confused he picks the phone up for the last time and takes a deep breath and rings riddhima....ridz is sitting reading a book in her bedroom she is alone and her phone starts ringing she doesn't recognise that it's armie's number Confused but she picks it up and says hello...armaan is about to say something but the words don't come out of his mouth. ridz keeps saying hi and armaan breaths out then suddenly ridz says- armaan? armaan is shocked yet again and the background music for aasmani is being played armaan smiles and starts jumping up and down ridz is on the other end saying hello hello amraan then comes back to is senses and says- hi sorry wo mein ne ye kehne ke liye phone kiya tha ke mujhe tumhara number atul ne diya tha aur....he sarts to think about saying something then continues saying...wo...tumhare paas file haan file hai? ridz says wo sanjeevani mein hai mere paas to nahi hai armaan says- ofcourse ofcourse tumhare paas kaise hogi wo tou...sanjeevani mein hai anyways ermm good night ridz smiles and blushes and says good night

the serious sanjeevani music is being played Confused and sophia is alone in the locker room she is looking worried and she is walking round the changeing room verry fast she keeps looking at her phone and goes and sits on the bench near armie's locker and starts to cry someone then rings on her phone and she picks it up quickly and says- hi tum kaise ho? kuch hua to nahi na? the person on the other end says- tum rou rahi ho? sophia says- nahi wo mein...the phone cuts off and sophia says- hello hello and puts the phone down she cries and cries armaan comes from behind she knows it's him and wipes her tears away quickly before he sees
he comes and hugs her says- kaise ho?
sophia says- mein theke hoon tum kaise ho?
armaan says- mein bohot khush hoon tume pata hai meine riddhima ko kal phone kiya tha it was great hum dono ne baat ki thodi dair ke liye...armaan suddenly stops to see that sophia isn't paying attention and is looking worried he says- khushie kya hua?
sophia says- kuch nahi tum kya kehre the?
armaan says - nahi sophia kya hua tell me wat's wrong?
sophia starts to cry and armaan hugs her and asks her -kya hua khushie batao na wat's wrong?
she releases her self from armaan and runs out of the chinging room armaan follows her and riidz comes but he goes right past her towards sophia.

all the interns are called to meet Dr Keerti everyone arrives and armaan tries to talk to sophia but she doesn't look at him Dr- Keerti seperates armaan and sophia and puts sophia and rahul together and armie n ridz together armaan looks at rahul who in sign language asks wats up armaan looks at sophia and so does rahul he asks wats happened armaan shrugs his shoulders and gets annoyed ridz walks up to him and says hi armaan says- hi but his attention is at sophia all the interns go. and armaan tries to go to sophia but she walks to path lab with rahul.

rahul asks sophia wats worng? and sophia says- wo bus mom dad ki yaad ari thi

rahul comes round the corner and armaan is there he tells armaan that- wo kehri hai ke usse apne mom dad ki yaad ari hai lekin mujhe lagta hai wo sach nahi bolri.
armaan says- ofcourse wo sach nahi bolri usse ho kya gaya hai?

epi ends here

PRECAP armaan hugs sophia and she is crying but ridz comes round the cornor and sees that armaan is hugging sophia....ridz is in her bedroom cryhing ishq leta hai is being played

do comment guys cheers

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yogzz IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 08 April 2008 at 10:25am | IP Logged
hey this part was superb & now new twist intersting plz continue soon
ARMaanEet IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 08 April 2008 at 12:28pm | IP Logged
Really good part...Your FF is really realistic...Love it..Awww bless Ridz!Can't wait!
urmila_17 Goldie

Joined: 08 March 2008
Posts: 1860

Posted: 08 April 2008 at 1:06pm | IP Logged
hey just caught up with ur ff it is excellent Clap and omg what happened again to arman and ridhima and ridz again missunderstood arman i guess and if u dont mine try to pm me after yr next part
plsssssssssssssssssssss continue soon
sea_nyx Goldie

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Posts: 2319

Posted: 08 April 2008 at 1:58pm | IP Logged
omg plz tell me its not another misunderstanding, chalo koi baat nahin atleast u lovely ff writers don't trouble us poor readers like those stupid creatives LOL anyway nice update Clap Clap Clap

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