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Posted: 01 April 2008 at 6:42am | IP Logged
great update.can't wait 2 see them sharing there special friendly talks.plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update very soooooooooooooooooon.

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heyy..cool update..plzzz continue soon..!!

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PART 3
Thnks a loooooot for ur comments guys… it really helps, believe it or not…. :D:D:D

Hmm… continued
Recap : Armaan and Ridz meet each other after a long time and Ridz is there in LA for some exchange programme for 1 month and is in the same hospital as Armaan… and armaan persuades ridz to stay at his house seeing tht they are best friends(she was staying in a hotel b4)… ab aage…


( a lil'bit of part2 included to give a continuation (recap))

Ridz- hugs him and holds her ears making an innocent puppy face and says – Lekin main….


Armaan- Lekin tum kyaa??? Tum mere ghar mein hi rahogi and that's it !!! Duty ke baad hum tumhaara luggage lekar ghar chelenge.. ok??? Aur phir bahut saari baatein bhi batani hai tumko? Ok? While grinning…

R – OK !!! DONE !!! grinning !!!


And both go to their respective duties!!!

After a long tiring day, they go to their locker room and put their lab coats and other things away.

Armaan – Chalein basket?? he said grinning

Ridz – Haan chalo…. She replies with a smile

They walk out of the hospital and Ridz misses a step and is about to fall but Armaan catches her from her waist. Both go into a eye-lock session for abt 15 seconds and both come out of their tance and straighten and Armaan says:

Armaan – Basket, sach mein, in 6 saalon mein tum bilkul nahi badli ho... Abhi bhi bin dekhe hi chalti ho kyaa?

Ridz – Oh shut up Armaan !!! Badle to tum bhi nahi ho… Pehle bhi mujhe bachaate the, ab bhi bachate ho… Kyun, haina ??? she says smiling to herself…

Armaan – Woh …. Umm… Arre ab chalo bhi, yahin par saari baatein karne ka irrada hai kyaa?

Ridz – Haan haan to chalo

They walk towards the car and go to tht random XYZ hotel in which Ridz's luggage was kept.
They go to Ridz's room and Armaan picks up the luggage , loads it in his car and they leave for his place…


AT ARMAAN'S PLACE… IT'S QUITE HUGGEE !!!!

Armaan shows Ridz her room, puts her luggage down and Ridz says

Ridz – Thnx Armaan !!!Oops I mean – dumbo…

Armaan – Smiles at the word "DUMBO" but then makes an angry face and says – Basket, tum apna promise tod rahi ho…

Ridz – confused look and says – Kaunsa waala promise??

Armaan – arrreeeee… Best friends mein…

Armaan and Ridz TOGETHER - NO SORRY, NO THNK U !!!! and both laugh…

Ridz – oh sor ( was abt to say sorry)….. I mean, chalo I wanna c ur room…

Armaan – smiles and says – sure, chalo… takes her to his room which is right next door… It's a pretty cool room with posters and pics (lots of childhood ones, functions, bithhdays- (most of the pics had her in them)) and a bit of mess … lol:LOL LOL

They sit on his bed and Armaan takes out a small gift box from his bedside table

Armaan - he says while handing her the gift box- – Yeh tumhaare liye laaya tha, yahaan aane se pehle dena chahta tha lekin bhool gaya…and smiles cutely Embarrassed

Ridz giggles slightly and begins to open the gift box…. LOL

Thts it 4 now guys
THE GIFT IS A HUUUUGE SURPRISE CUMING UP IN THE NEXT PART…… Wink
IF I GET ENUF COMMENTS, I WILL CONTINUE 2DAY ITSELF ….

HOPE U GUYS LIKED IT……PLZ COMMENT… I worked vry hard for it guys… plzzzz!!!!!
If u hv any suggestions, plz PM me…. And dun 4get to comment frnkly
Tc
tajju



Edited by Cutie_tajju - 01 April 2008 at 7:40am

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Posted: 01 April 2008 at 7:46am | IP Logged
hey tajju
wonderful part
Clap
thanx for pm
plz update one long part
plz continue soon

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Posted: 01 April 2008 at 7:52am | IP Logged
Clap
gr8 cont soon
its damn cute Clap

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Posted: 01 April 2008 at 7:54am | IP Logged
PLZZZ COMMENT GUYS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Cry Cry Cry
its nt tht baaddd is it???????????????? Confused
i worked very hard 4 it... and dunt 4get its mi 1st 1 everrr so plzzz there is plenttyyy of room for improvements....
plzzz guys suggestions and frank comments are most welcum!!!!!!
and if u hv any suggestions, just PM me...
tnnks
TC
TAJJU Smile Wink Big smile

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Posted: 01 April 2008 at 8:08am | IP Logged

Pleeeasseee comment !!!!

pleeeeeeeeeaseeeeeeeeee....

wud u like me to continue or not????????

tell me franklii.......

pleaaseee

tc

tajju

 



Edited by Cutie_tajju - 01 April 2008 at 8:13am

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Posted: 01 April 2008 at 8:11am | IP Logged
Choo chweeet. Update soon.

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