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Red Triangle- RN Fic updated 07.10.10

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Posted: 28 March 2008 at 4:25am | IP Logged

Two girls were standing in a bus-stop & waiting for  the bus at 9.30 a.m. Yeh time office hour hai, so the place was crowded with

many people.

Girl 1- Disgusting aaj Collg ka first day hai,aur aaj hi hum late ho jayehge.Oh god,Naina yeh sab teri galti hai.

Naina- Tu mujhe kyun blame kar rahi hai,maine kya kiya Neelu??

Neelu- Maine tujhe pehle kaha tha,yeh bus aksar late karti hai,iske pehle ka bus pakad lete hai,but tune nahin mana.Tujhe pata

          hai pehle din agar kisi jagah late ho jate hai,to har din late ho jata hai.

Naina- main kaha har din collg janewali hu?

Neelu- kya??........arre here comes our bus..chal jung ki maidan main khudte hai.Jai Maa

 

The bus came full of people.They climbed the bus & both were trying to find a comfortable position to stand in.

Neelu- Ek baat kahu Naina, bus main travel karke hi hume pata chalta hai India kitna over-populated ho gaya hai.

Naina- Sshhh,eiii sun yeh dono shayad next stopage par utar jayenge,hum dono yaha par bethange.ok

Conductor- ticket,ticket

Naina- 2 tickets, St.Joseph's Collg.

         

Next stopage main Naina & Neelu ko bethne ki jagah mil jati hai,both sat comfortably.

Neelu- Thank god,Finally bethne ki jagah mili,varna collg tak jate jate meri engry ki, meri new cloths ki aisi ki taisi jo jati,Dekh

           Naina yeh Jeans & Top main specially aaj first day collg ke liye pehni hu,aur Dekh kal beauty-parlour ja kar Facial &

           hair-cutting bhi kar ke aayi hu,after all collg ki first day hai aaj.

Naina- hmmm,itna preparations,good,dekte hain kitne ladke aaj tuj par lattu hote hai,yaa teri hi band bajti hai.

Neelu- meri band??kyun kyun meri band kyun bajegi??shaadi thori na hai meri.he he

Naina- Ragging naam suna hai,ya first time sun rahi hai? bol ragging kya chiz hai khate hai ya peete hai??

Neelu- arre chor na, jo hoga dekha jayega,main bilkul ready hu. Aaj se hum bilkul azad panchi hai.By the way tu itni ghum-shum

          kyun hai??

Naina- Dekh tujhe to pata hai main doctor ban na chati hu,pata nahin is baar kaise mujhe rank kaise nahin mila Joint Entrance

           main? maine kitni baar ghar main kaha ek baar aur chance de do,but koi nahin mana,kaha agar next year bhi nahin hua

           to?Collg main padai ke sath sath joint ki bhi preparations lo,accha tu bol main kya Iswarchandra Vidyasagar hu.main keh

           rahi hu main sirf Joint ki preparations par dyan dungi.samajte hi nahin koi.

Neelu- arre yaar,main bhi bachpan main bolti thi,main doctor banungi,engenieer bonungi,but kuch hua,mujhe History main Hons.

          mil gayi ha,ab main ispar hi totally dyan dunga.Tu ne to English main Hons liya hai,Good.

Naina- arre chor to, sirf naam ke waaste liya hai.

Neelu- ok,but yeh bus jaldi chal kyun nahin rahi hai?ufff, yeh Kolkata ki traffic.eiiii,sun tujhe ek chiz dikani hai

Naina- kya??

Neelu- papa ne ek naya mobile set diya hai,Nokia N series, cool na?dekh FM,Camera sab hai.

Naina- woww,teri to chandi hi chandi hai,meri to sirf  pocket- money hi thora increase hua hai,baki kuch nahin badla,dekh

          collg main first day ja rahi hu wohi purani salwar- kamiz pehenke.Jeans pehenna bhi allow nahin hai.uff,meri family kab

          modern hogi,dekna main jab doctor ban jaungi to main apna sab saukh pura karungi,jo main ab nahin kar pa rahi hu.

Neelu- sab karna baba,but ab chal utarna hai, oh god late.

Both came down from the bus.

Neelu- chal apna umbrella nikal thora paidal jana hoga.ufff,yeh garmi,chal chal jaldi chal.

 

Naina,Naina Das,age 19 years old,born & brought up in Kolkata.Ambition Doctor banna, woh ek lower-middle class conservative

family main belong karta hai.Very charming, & fun loving girl.Uska best friend hai Neelu,uski neighbour hai woh.

Neelu,Neelima Roy,age 19 years, born & brought up in kalkata.koi particular ambition nahin hai.woh ek middle class family se belong karti hai,but uski family conservative nahin hai.Very charming & fun-loving.



Edited by sania_58 - 07 October 2010 at 10:16am

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Posted: 28 March 2008 at 4:26am | IP Logged
well,This is my new & second fanfic.agar aap logo ko accha lage tab hi main continue karungi,so plz comment
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Posted: 28 March 2008 at 6:42am | IP Logged
aweeeeeeeeeesum story line.pleeease continue dear.
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Posted: 28 March 2008 at 11:10am | IP Logged
I think nobody interested Confused
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Posted: 28 March 2008 at 11:17am | IP Logged
are yeh kya baat hui abhi to start kiya hai abhi bahot saare comments aane baki hai baba,tum to abhi se haar maan gayi Confused tum meri dost ho to tum kaise soch sakati ho k nobody interested Confused don worry tum conti karo dekhna kal bahot saare comments aayege Smile
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Posted: 28 March 2008 at 12:15pm | IP Logged
amazing story line

I am from kolkata also......................and I am interested.plz update soon
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Posted: 29 March 2008 at 12:15am | IP Logged

Originally posted by quietrajpri1623

aweeeeeeeeeesum story line.pleeease continue dear.

 

Thanks dearSmileSmile

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Posted: 29 March 2008 at 12:17am | IP Logged

Originally posted by sanabmw

are yeh kya baat hui abhi to start kiya hai abhi bahot saare comments aane baki hai baba,tum to abhi se haar maan gayi Confused tum meri dost ho to tum kaise soch sakati ho k nobody interested Confused don worry tum conti karo dekhna kal bahot saare comments aayege Smile

 

Thanks Sana,love u my friend.muahhhhhh,thanks for encourging me.actually meri mood & tabiyat dono kharap hai.kuch acchi nahin lag rahi haiConfused

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