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ginak IF-Dazzler
ginak
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Posted: 26 March 2008 at 3:33pm | IP Logged

Hello Knukkadians,

Time for another Knukkad already, though we await for events to unfold with a heavy heart and disappointment at the turn of events.  Nevertheless Holi is around the Korner and here's wishing the  Kolors and gaiety  revive us.

I am putting up something I wrote down, for now until someone else comes with something more suitable and up to Knukkad standards Embarrassed.  Bear with me.  All thanks to Ash for coming up with the title and helping with putting up this edition of the knukkad.

He lost his heart to an ice maiden

He tried so hard to thaw her out

and slowly she gave in

 

But then he became an imposter

To save a friend from disaster

All hell broke loose when his beau got news

and then he was all but done in

 

He begged her pardon

Tried to explain in vain

But she didnt relent

and he was in such pain

 

Woebegone and weary to bone

He bade her goodbye and moved on

 

The maiden in turn was ridden with guilt

She went on a mission to bring him back

He shooed her away but she wouldnt quit

By resorting to tricks she got him back

 

He reached out to her for a lil comfort

He wanted but a lil reassurance

but the ice maiden knew not how it felt

and she snapped at him in impatience

 

She denied any feelings and mocked at his love

Called him a friend and made him stagger

At every step she derided and hurt him now

Every word,every look stabbing him like a dagger.

 

What will become of him alas and his love story

Remains to be seen

With bated breath and heavy hearts

We await something unforseen.

ashvez IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 26 March 2008 at 3:45pm | IP Logged
@gina..Congrats!!!Superb Lines..Goes well with the situation.Thank You so much.
The last para...was really teary for me.

"What will become of him alas and his love story

Remains to be seen

With bated breath and heavy hearts

We await something unforseen."

Knukkadians welcome & congratulations. ...hope to bring some sunshine in Dr.Dude's life
Smile
ashvez IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 26 March 2008 at 3:49pm | IP Logged
@gina..PMed..sona,shalini,hemangi..
ashvez IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 26 March 2008 at 3:51pm | IP Logged
Pmed..anu,ifrah,manu
ginak IF-Dazzler
ginak
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Posted: 26 March 2008 at 3:57pm | IP Logged
can u pm sabah, manu, aarti pls?
ginak IF-Dazzler
ginak
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Posted: 26 March 2008 at 3:58pm | IP Logged
sara,sona,kristal,shal,hema,mehak,notty,spirit,marisa,
anu,sareeta, anagha, simi, smriti, sareena, done
ashvez IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 26 March 2008 at 3:59pm | IP Logged
Pmed all except Krystall,I dunno her ID.I guess I have covered all..even aarti & sareeta.
ashvez IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 26 March 2008 at 4:00pm | IP Logged
Marissa is spelled with single R or double r?..I have sent to Marissa.And the other sona is sarn7 rt???

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