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1st FF "Pyar Ka Intehaan" Prt16 Pg39 Uptd (Page 3)

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Posted: 28 March 2008 at 6:09am | IP Logged

wonderful job... i hope in ur ff everythin gets ok beteew AR!

plz continue soonBig smile

 



Edited by tania_786 - 28 March 2008 at 6:10am
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Posted: 28 March 2008 at 6:14am | IP Logged
hey it too gud
plz plz continue soon
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Posted: 28 March 2008 at 6:19am | IP Logged
hey.. thx for all the comments.. will post next part later today.. am at work at present. I am sure u guys will like the next part..
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Posted: 28 March 2008 at 6:23am | IP Logged

Originally posted by kesha2412

hey.. thx for all the comments.. will post next part later today.. am at work at present. I am sure u guys will like the next part..

waiting for u r part

so plz try to update it as fast as possible 

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PART 4

 

Armaan taken to casulty.

Dr Keerti arrives there. Anji cleaning Armaans wounds.

Dr K: Dr Anjali, kya hua?

Anji: Pata nahi dr Keerti, lekin lagta hain kaach ke tukdon se injury hui hain. wrist ki veins cut gayi hain.. isliye itna bld loss ho raha hain.

Dr K: Bld order kiya.

Anji: Yes Dr Keerti.

Dr K checks Armaans vitals

Dr K: He is not doing well.. bahut khoon beh gaya hain. he needs blood quickly.

A Dr: Dr Keerti Bld pressure is droppin. heart rate is increasin. 

Dr K: Capillary refill is failing

Dr Anjali he is going into shock. CPR start kariye. Anji starts CPR. Rahul arrives there. He is shocked to see Armaan there... sinking. 

Dr K: Oh Dr Rahool acha hua aap aagaye. Dr Anjali ko help kariye..

A nurse comes with bld fro Armaan. Dr keerti puts the bld on. slowly Armaan's vital start improvin but he is still unconcious.

DrK: He is out of immediate danger lekin regular monitorin ki zarurat hain. Dr anjali Fluids dena bhi start kareye. aur ICU mein transfer karvadijeye.

Anji: Yes Dr Keerti. (Dr Keerti leaves)

Rahool: Anjali yeh saab kya hua?

Anji: Pata nahi. Anji turns round & suddenly notices Ridz.. standing there wide eyed starin at Armaan. 

Anji: Ridzzy...

Ridz leaves from there. Anji gets concerned & follows Ridz.

 

In Locker Room

Ridz cryin.. anji comes there: Ridzzy kya hua? Ridzzy.. and puts her arm round Ridz.

Ridz grabs hold of anji and hugs her fiercely.. starts to cry uncontrollably.

Anji: Ridzzy bus... Bus Ridzzy. Armaan ko kuch nahi hoga. tum dekhana woh kuch hi deeno mein thik ho jayega.

 

Next scene

Its night time.. armaan is in ICU still unconcious. Still on fluids.

Ridz is standin outside lookin at him through the window. She lifts her right hand slowly and touches the window..as if she can feel armaan through it. she calls his name Armaan.. Armaan.. Slowly rests her forehead on the window.

Suddenly armaan's.. ECG machine starts to bleep.. Ridz looks up.. Armaan starts to struggle to breath even though he is on oxygen. Ridz is abt to go to him... when suddenly Rahool enters with a nurse. he starts to check Armaan..

Ra: Sister Dr Subhankar ko page kariye jaldi.. Nurse leaves

Ra: Armaan.. common yaar.. dont give up.. chal yaar tuje meri madat karni hogi.

Dr Subh: Dr Rahool.. kya hua?

Ra: Sir armaan ki vitals ekdum se dip kargaye...

Dr subh starts to check armaan. The wound on his hand has started to bleed agian.

DrSubh: kita bld loss hua tha

Ra: sir about 40%. aur 4 bottle bld alrdy de diya hain.

Dr subh: he shouldnt be sinking.. pata nahi kyun aisa ho raha hain. aisa lagta hain jaise usse jeena hi nahi hain.. he is not fightin back.. he is not fightin to survive.. Dr Rahool.. aap crytaloids start kariye.. bld order kariye 

Suddenly notices Ridz who has entered the room..

Dr subh: ohh Dr Riddhima.. platalet injection jaldi..DR RIDDHIMA

Ridz runs to lab.. gets injection & runs back.. starts to give injection.. her hands are shakin..

DrSub: Dr Riddhima.. jaldi..

Ridz gives the injection.. Slowly armaan's vitals come back to normal. Dr Subh n Rahool take a big sigh.

Dr Shub: Dr Rahool.. please keep checkin Dr Armaan regularly.. He leaves

Ra: Riddhima aap yahan pe rukegi mein lab jake aata hun.

Ridz nods.. Rahool leaves

 

NEXT PART

Ridz holdin armaan hand and while he is unconcious.    

hey guys... hope u like it.. plz comment.



Edited by kesha2412 - 28 March 2008 at 8:26pm
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Posted: 28 March 2008 at 10:08pm | IP Logged
awww...poor armaan...man m cryin Cry
thanks plzz continue Embarrassed
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Posted: 29 March 2008 at 4:19am | IP Logged
wow kya part tha
plz jaldhi se continue karo na
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really tochin! cntd sn! cnt w8 2 read d nxt prt! cntd sn!

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