1st FF "Pyar Ka Intehaan" Prt16 Pg39 Uptd - Page 2

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Posted: 16 years ago
wonder whats going to happen next.......update soon ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘
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PART 3

 

Armaan walkin down the corridorโ€ฆ hand still bleedin..

All the ward boys, nurses and patients r starin at him.. but he doesn't notice. ..

He crosses Sis Padma..

Sis P: Armaan kaise ho tum?

Armaan keeps walkin

Sis P suddenly notices Armaan's bleedin hand.

Sis P: Armaan.. Armaaan..

A comes out of his thoughts: oh.. Sister Padma.. kasi hain aap?

Sis P: Armaan tumhare haath se kitna khoon beh raha hain. kya hua? dikhao mujhe main dressin kar deti hun.

 A suddenly looks at his hand and for the first time realises tht heis bleedin

Sis P: Armaan bleedin ko rokna hoga. lagta hain stitches lene padenge

Sis P (at reception): Sis Lovely Dr Keerti ko page kariye .. jaldi

Sis L: Haan (notices A's hand) Dr Armaan.. yeh kya hua? Are bhagwaan kitna khoon beh raha hain.

A slowly gettin disoriented.. He is lossin bld quickly..

Sis P to sis L: jaldi page kariye

Anji comes there: Armaan.. God yeh kya hua?

Armaan loosin conciousness slowly.. startin to sway.

Sis P: pata nahi lekin khoon rokna bahut zaroori hain.

Anji: haan.. Armaan..

Aarmaan loses conciousness n is abt to fall when 2 ward boys grab him. Stretcher is called. Armaan taken to casulty.

 

NEXT PART

Armaan gets critical....

 

Sorry its a short update.. got to go now.. will update tom. hope u like it till now.

 

Edited by kesha2412 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
wooow......tht was great........atleast now shell realize tht she was wrong..plz continue soon.
luv ur ff
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Posted: 16 years ago
awesum..i hope sumthng lyk thz happened in dmg..even armaan gettng critical is b8r den ar fightng...do cont..do pm me wen th next part is updated.... ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 16 years ago
wow yaar i vh jst read ur prts it ws awesom yaar now armaan yaar main aise nahi dekh sakti why ridz doi ths yaar nd armaan gt critical nooooooooooooo plz cont soooooooooon
waitng fr ur prt
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Posted: 16 years ago

wonderful job... i hope in ur ff everythin gets ok beteew AR!

plz continue soon๐Ÿ˜ƒ

 

Edited by tania_786 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey it too gud
plz plz continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey.. thx for all the comments.. will post next part later today.. am at work at present. I am sure u guys will like the next part..
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: kesha2412

hey.. thx for all the comments.. will post next part later today.. am at work at present. I am sure u guys will like the next part..

waiting for u r part

so plz try to update it as fast as possible 

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Posted: 16 years ago

PART 4

 

Armaan taken to casulty.

Dr Keerti arrives there. Anji cleaning Armaans wounds.

Dr K: Dr Anjali, kya hua?

Anji: Pata nahi dr Keerti, lekin lagta hain kaach ke tukdon se injury hui hain. wrist ki veins cut gayi hain.. isliye itna bld loss ho raha hain.

Dr K: Bld order kiya.

Anji: Yes Dr Keerti.

Dr K checks Armaans vitals

Dr K: He is not doing well.. bahut khoon beh gaya hain. he needs blood quickly.

A Dr: Dr Keerti Bld pressure is droppin. heart rate is increasin. 

Dr K: Capillary refill is failing

Dr Anjali he is going into shock. CPR start kariye. Anji starts CPR. Rahul arrives there. He is shocked to see Armaan there... sinking. 

Dr K: Oh Dr Rahool acha hua aap aagaye. Dr Anjali ko help kariye..

A nurse comes with bld fro Armaan. Dr keerti puts the bld on. slowly Armaan's vital start improvin but he is still unconcious.

DrK: He is out of immediate danger lekin regular monitorin ki zarurat hain. Dr anjali Fluids dena bhi start kareye. aur ICU mein transfer karvadijeye.

Anji: Yes Dr Keerti. (Dr Keerti leaves)

Rahool: Anjali yeh saab kya hua?

Anji: Pata nahi. Anji turns round & suddenly notices Ridz.. standing there wide eyed starin at Armaan. 

Anji: Ridzzy...

Ridz leaves from there. Anji gets concerned & follows Ridz.

 

In Locker Room

Ridz cryin.. anji comes there: Ridzzy kya hua? Ridzzy.. and puts her arm round Ridz.

Ridz grabs hold of anji and hugs her fiercely.. starts to cry uncontrollably.

Anji: Ridzzy bus... Bus Ridzzy. Armaan ko kuch nahi hoga. tum dekhana woh kuch hi deeno mein thik ho jayega.

 

Next scene

Its night time.. armaan is in ICU still unconcious. Still on fluids.

Ridz is standin outside lookin at him through the window. She lifts her right hand slowly and touches the window..as if she can feel armaan through it. she calls his name Armaan.. Armaan.. Slowly rests her forehead on the window.

Suddenly armaan's.. ECG machine starts to bleep.. Ridz looks up.. Armaan starts to struggle to breath even though he is on oxygen. Ridz is abt to go to him... when suddenly Rahool enters with a nurse. he starts to check Armaan..

Ra: Sister Dr Subhankar ko page kariye jaldi.. Nurse leaves

Ra: Armaan.. common yaar.. dont give up.. chal yaar tuje meri madat karni hogi.

Dr Subh: Dr Rahool.. kya hua?

Ra: Sir armaan ki vitals ekdum se dip kargaye...

Dr subh starts to check armaan. The wound on his hand has started to bleed agian.

DrSubh: kita bld loss hua tha

Ra: sir about 40%. aur 4 bottle bld alrdy de diya hain.

Dr subh: he shouldnt be sinking.. pata nahi kyun aisa ho raha hain. aisa lagta hain jaise usse jeena hi nahi hain.. he is not fightin back.. he is not fightin to survive.. Dr Rahool.. aap crytaloids start kariye.. bld order kariye 

Suddenly notices Ridz who has entered the room..

Dr subh: ohh Dr Riddhima.. platalet injection jaldi..DR RIDDHIMA

Ridz runs to lab.. gets injection & runs back.. starts to give injection.. her hands are shakin..

DrSub: Dr Riddhima.. jaldi..

Ridz gives the injection.. Slowly armaan's vitals come back to normal. Dr Subh n Rahool take a big sigh.

Dr Shub: Dr Rahool.. please keep checkin Dr Armaan regularly.. He leaves

Ra: Riddhima aap yahan pe rukegi mein lab jake aata hun.

Ridz nods.. Rahool leaves

 

NEXT PART

Ridz holdin armaan hand and while he is unconcious.    

hey guys... hope u like it.. plz comment.

Edited by kesha2412 - 16 years ago