1st FF "Pyar Ka Intehaan" Prt16 Pg39 Uptd

hey guys this is my first ever FF so please excuse the mistaks. hope u guys like it....

I thaught i'll continue from the the end of todays episode....

R ( Gusse se): Apne aap ko chot ponhuchana acha lagta hain na?

                           Kyon kiya aisa Armaan?

 

Armaan keeps starin at Ridz. Then suddenly goes OUCH

 

R: Dard ho raha hai? Saab thik ho jayega.

A keeps staring

 

Ridz goes on: Tumhe kisi ki perwah nahi. Apni bhi nahi. Kya Zarurat thi yeh saab karne ki.. tum …

 

A: Riddimaaa (in the old lovey-dovey voice)

 

R stops suddenly and looks at A. A is staring at Ridz with all the love and pain in his eyes. His eyes are starting to water…

Ridz is mersmerized.. keeps starin at Armaan.

 

A: Riddimaa…

R: Armaan Pleaseeee

A: Riddhima, tum… main…

     Riddhima…. I..

R: Please Armaan. Starts to leave.

A catches her arm to stop her.

R: Armaan Please chodon mujhe.

A doesn't leave her arm..

R turns around with anger: Chodon mera haath. Mujhe rounds pe jana hain.

A Leaves her arm. Ridz starts to walk away…

A Shouts: Riddhima Mein ja raha hun.

R keeps walkin and suddenly stops a the terrace door and turns around to see no Armaan. She gets worried n thinks Armaan kahan chala gaya..

Starts to look for him all over the terrace but cannt find him.. just abt to turn to go when she see him in a corner..

R (very angry): tum kabhi nahi sudhroge… bhad mein jao.

A: Tum daar gayi ki mein sach mein chala jaunga..

R: nahi. Tum raho ya jao mujhe kuch farak nahi padta.

A: tumhe meri baton se kuch farak nahi padta? (and walks towards her)

R: nahi

A: Kuch bhi nahi (comes nearer)

R tries to push A away

A catches hold of Ridz arm, the one with kada. R starts to bleed.

A: kuch Nahi??

Suddenly kada falls off.. and AR both step apart.. are shocked and sad

R: lagta hain bhagwaan bhi humein saath nahi dekhna chahte (and runs away form there)

 Armaan is very angry and smashes the mirror next to him with his hand and its starts to bleed profusely…. But in his mind he is just thinking abt the kada fallin off… and Ridz words ..lagta hain bhagwaan bhi humein saath nahi dekhna chahte..and there are tears fallin frm his eyes...

 

Precap for next part…

Anji looking for Armaan everywhere….. and asks Ridz abt him.

 

Let me know if u guys liked it... will continue only then..

thnks

 

UPDATES

PART 2 -- Pg 2

PART 3 -- Pg 2

PART 4 -- Pg 3

PART 5 -- Pg 5

PART 6 -- Pg 7

PART 7 -- Pg 10

PART 8 -- Pg 12

PART 9 -- Pg 14

PART 10 -- Pg 18

PART 11 -- Pg 21

PART 12 -- Pg 25

PART 13 -- Pg 28

PART 14 -- Pg 32

PART 15 -- Pg 35

PART 16 -- Pg 39

 

Edited by kesha2412 - 15 years ago

awwww! its so touchin! cntd sn! cnt w8 2 read d nxt prt!

hi kesha plz do continue...its really nice

Zaf

awwwwwww vry nice
ur precap made me more exited do continue
waiting for it
too good for the first one 👏
love
sayli

nice yaar plzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soooonnnn 😉

yea man its goood ..plz continue..and plz keep a contents page in the first post whenever u update so its easy to find where the updates are 😳 great job so far! 👏

thx for the feedback guys... will continue soon.. as soon as i get some time.. n thx for the tip on contents page...

hey wow yaar vryyyy nce yaar
it ws soo heart touchd yaar sare emotions,feelngs sab kuch wow don't know how 2 express it realy it ws superb..
cont sooooon
luv yachna

hey sorry for the delay.. but am going to post the 2nd part in a while..

Thx for the positive replies... it really encouraged me to go on.. hope u like the 2nd part.

Armaan falls onto his knees… cryin. Holds his head in his hands then slowly looks up.. his face is covered in blood.
A: Riddhima….. Riddhima…
    Yeh kya ho raha hain, Riddhima? Kyon ho raha hain? Yeh hum kahan aa
    gaye. Ab yeh dard nahi saha jata….

Tears are rolling down frm his eyes continuously. His eyes suddenly fall on the kadaa. He picks it up. He remembers the time he gave it to Ridz. Remembers the pledge he took. He starts to cry uncontrollably…

His hand is now bleedin even worse, but he doesn't notice the pain or the bld. The pain in his heart is too extreme to notice anything else.

Next Scene
Riddhima runs down sanjeevni's corridor. She goes to the fire exit stairs.. drops onto her knees at the landing. Tears are running down her face.
She slowly touches the wrist where the kadaa was. She remembers the time when Armaan gave it to her. Starts to cry uncontrollably…
R: Kyun Armaan?? Kyun?I hate u armaan… I hate u…

Next Scene
Anji: Sis Lovely aapne Armaan ko dekha hain?
Sis Lovely: Nahi Dr Anjali. Lekin Dr Rahul ko dekha hain chalega..
Anji rolls her eyes: pata nahi yeh Armaan bhi kahan chala jata hain.

In locker room—
Muskaan & Rahool arguing as usual.
Anji enters: You guys..stop it now. Kya hamesha ladten rehten hon.
Rahool: Main kahan ladta hun.. yeh hi hamesha bak bak karti rehti hain.
Muski: Main…Main.. bak bak karti hun. Tu… Tu na…
Rahool: Kya.. hunnn main kya???
Muski: Tuchup ho ja warna…
Anji: hey hey hey.. stop it u guys (comes in between them)
        Accha tum logon ne Armaan ko kahi dekha kya.
Rahool: nahi (muskaan shying)
Anji: Main kabse usse doondth rahi hun. Pata nahi kahan hain.
Ridz walks in slwly .. in her thoughts.
Anji: Ridzzy… Ridzzy.. RIDZZY..
R comes out of her thoughts: haan Di?
Anji: are u ok?
R: haan di.. kya baat hain?
Anji: tumne armaan ko dekha .. starts to say something but Ridz is remembering the terrace scene.
Anji: Ridzzy.. whts wrong with u? aur yeh tumhare haath ko kya hua?
R: Kuch nahi choti se chot lag gayin. Nahi maine Armaan ko nahi dekha.
Walks to her locker
Anji: God ab mein kys karun.. mujhe Armaan ki help chahiye then mere naye patient ko leker. Usne similar care pehle handle kiya hain.

R opens her locker… she cannt find Armaan's letter written in bld. Starts to search frantically… then she remembers it had dropped frm her hand. Searches under the benches cant find it.
R to all: tum mein se kisi ne koi paper dekha yahan pe gira hua.
Muski: haan yahan ek paper ton tha.. mujhe lage phaltu ka hain ton dustbin
             Mein dal diya.
R goes to the dustbin in the corner… starts to look like crazy. All staring at Ridz
Anji: Ridzzy tum yeh kya kar rahi hon..
R: woh letter..
Muski: important tha kya… oh god sorry riddhima..
R finds it in bin its all crumbled… opens it.
Anji: Kya hain yeh..
R: kuch nahi bas kuch patient notes… goes to her locker quickly..
All get paged & leave except Ridz.
Ridz takes the letter to the changing room.. opens it.. slowly toches it with her hand.. hugs it to her chest.. leans on the wall behind her.. slowly slides down to the floor.. tears are runnin down her face..

Next Part..
Armaan walkin down Sanjeevni's corrider.. hand bleedin… everyone starin at him

Plz comments... they are really appreciated.. both appreciation and criticisim welcomed.. thnk u

Edited by kesha2412 - 16 years ago