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Posted: 26 March 2008 at 11:13am | IP Logged

hey guys this is my first ever FF so please excuse the mistaks. hope u guys like it....

I thaught i'll continue from the the end of todays episode....

R ( Gusse se): Apne aap ko chot ponhuchana acha lagta hain na?

                           Kyon kiya aisa Armaan?

 

Armaan keeps starin at Ridz. Then suddenly goes OUCH

 

R: Dard ho raha hai? Saab thik ho jayega.

A keeps staring

 

Ridz goes on: Tumhe kisi ki perwah nahi. Apni bhi nahi. Kya Zarurat thi yeh saab karne ki.. tum …

 

A: Riddimaaa (in the old lovey-dovey voice)

 

R stops suddenly and looks at A. A is staring at Ridz with all the love and pain in his eyes. His eyes are starting to water…

Ridz is mersmerized.. keeps starin at Armaan.

 

A: Riddimaa…

R: Armaan Pleaseeee

A: Riddhima, tum… main…

     Riddhima…. I..

R: Please Armaan. Starts to leave.

A catches her arm to stop her.

R: Armaan Please chodon mujhe.

A doesn't leave her arm..

R turns around with anger: Chodon mera haath. Mujhe rounds pe jana hain.

A Leaves her arm. Ridz starts to walk away…

A Shouts: Riddhima Mein ja raha hun.

R keeps walkin and suddenly stops a the terrace door and turns around to see no Armaan. She gets worried n thinks Armaan kahan chala gaya..

Starts to look for him all over the terrace but cannt find him.. just abt to turn to go when she see him in a corner..

R (very angry): tum kabhi nahi sudhroge… bhad mein jao.

A: Tum daar gayi ki mein sach mein chala jaunga..

R: nahi. Tum raho ya jao mujhe kuch farak nahi padta.

A: tumhe meri baton se kuch farak nahi padta? (and walks towards her)

R: nahi

A: Kuch bhi nahi (comes nearer)

R tries to push A away

A catches hold of Ridz arm, the one with kada. R starts to bleed.

A: kuch Nahi??

Suddenly kada falls off.. and AR both step apart.. are shocked and sad

R: lagta hain bhagwaan bhi humein saath nahi dekhna chahte (and runs away form there)

 Armaan is very angry and smashes the mirror next to him with his hand and its starts to bleed profusely…. But in his mind he is just thinking abt the kada fallin off… and Ridz words ..lagta hain bhagwaan bhi humein saath nahi dekhna chahte..and there are tears fallin frm his eyes...

 

Precap for next part…

Anji looking for Armaan everywhere….. and asks Ridz abt him.

 

Let me know if u guys liked it... will continue only then..

thnks

 

UPDATES

PART 2 -- Pg 2

PART 3 -- Pg 2

PART 4 -- Pg 3

PART 5 -- Pg 5

PART 6 -- Pg 7

PART 7 -- Pg 10

PART 8 -- Pg 12

PART 9 -- Pg 14

PART 10 -- Pg 18

PART 11 -- Pg 21

PART 12 -- Pg 25

PART 13 -- Pg 28

PART 14 -- Pg 32

PART 15 -- Pg 35

PART 16 -- Pg 39

 



Edited by kesha2412 - 20 May 2008 at 8:08am

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Posted: 26 March 2008 at 11:17am | IP Logged
awwww! its so touchin! cntd sn! cnt w8 2 read d nxt prt!

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Posted: 26 March 2008 at 11:33am | IP Logged
awwwwwww vry nice
ur precap made me more exited do continue
waiting for it
too good for the first one Clap
love
sayli

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Posted: 26 March 2008 at 11:41am | IP Logged
nice yaar plzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soooonnnn Wink

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Posted: 26 March 2008 at 11:49am | IP Logged
yea man its goood ..plz continue..and plz keep a contents page in the first post whenever u update so its easy to find where the updates are Embarrassed great job so far! Clap

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Posted: 26 March 2008 at 11:59am | IP Logged
thx for the feedback guys... will continue soon.. as soon as i get some time.. n thx for the tip on contents page...

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Posted: 27 March 2008 at 7:31am | IP Logged
hey wow yaar vryyyy nce yaar
it ws soo heart touchd yaar sare emotions,feelngs sab kuch wow don't know how 2 express it realy it ws superb..
cont sooooon
luv yachna

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