[FF:An Office Affair] PART 27 , pg 40,updt 29 OCT (Page 2)

wow an office affair....nice intro..
looking forward for the real show!!!!!!

love
nihita aka neena

thanxx all fot supporting me i will try my best,so here it goes

             PART - 1
       
               WHEN SG MET
               
               
IPPY TAKES GAURI TO OFFICE....DOORS OPENED,... COOL AIR BLEW N GAURI KEPT ON STARING THE OFFICE
GAURI-- WOW ! IS THIS KAPOOR INDUSTRIES
IPPY--YES,LETS MOVE FAST N CATCH UP THE LIFT
IN THE LIFT
IPPY-- OH GOD IM ALREADY LATE BY TEN MINUTES
GAURI--OH IPSHITA, WE R ONLY A FEW MINUTES LATE, DON'T WORRY .
IPPY-- DON'T WORRY!!!!!, U KNOW WHAT GAURI,...'' MR.SHIV KAPOOR'' IS REALLY PUNCTUAL N HE DOSEN'T WANT THOSE ON JOB ,WHO COME LATE BY EVEN ONE MINUTE
SO GAURI IF U WANT THIS JOB, U HAV TO MAKE A GOOD IMPRESSION ON SHIV SIR ,TODAY IN THE INTERVIEW  ITSELF
GAURI SMILES N SAYS OK........ THE  DOOR OF THE LIFT OPENS N.................. BANG
GAURI COLLIDES WITH SHIV,....GAURI DROPS HER FILES.......SHIV N GAURI BOTH BEND TO PICK UP THE FILES N AGAIN.....THEIR HEAD CRASHED
GAURI--AAAWWWWW! HEY R U BLIND OR WHAT CAN'T U SEE WHERE U R GOING .
SHIV RAISES HIS EYES IN ANGER ....BUT WHEN HE SAW HER EYES,.. HE FELT A KIND OF ATTRACTION....A KIND OF INNOSCENCE IN HER EYES,THOUGH SHE WAS WEARING SPECTACLES, HE TRIED TO LOOK DEEP INTO HER EYES
THAT MOMENT HE HAD FORGOTTEN ALL HIS ANGER............BUT GAURI NEVER BOTHERED TO EVEN LOOK AT HIM SHE KEPT ON MUTTERING ........''THESE PEOPLE R REALLY SICK,ALREADY WE R LATE N NOW THIS MAN ..........DAMN'' .
BUT FOR SHIV HER LIP MOVEMENT WAS LIKE A MILLION DOLLAR SMILE TO HIM
GAURI PICKED UP HER FILES N THEY BOTH GOT UP
SHIV KEPT LOOKING AT HER..... HE FELT LIKE HEARING A VIOLIN PLAYIN HE WAS AMAIZED BUT HE WAS ENJOYIN IT, BUT SHE DIDN'T EVEN RAISED HER EYES TO LOOK AT HIM
SHIV AGAIN KEPT LOOKIN AT HER TILL..............
ANUPAM---AHEM! HEY PARTNER WE R GETTIN LATE , CAN WE MOVE ON FOR THE MEETING
SHIV--YEAH, SURE!
ANUPAM N SHIV WENT INTO THE LIFT
IPPY WHO WAS WATCHING ALL THE DRAMA CAME TO GAURI
IPPY -- DO U KNOW WHO HE WAS?
GAURI-- NO !!!!.....AND I REALLY DON'T WANT TO KNOW ANYTHING ABT HIM , DID U SAW HIM ,HOW HE DROPPED ALL MY FILES
IPPY-- BUT........HE WAS......
GAURI-- ENOUGH ....I DON'T WANT TO TALK ABT THAT INCIDENT LETS GO N MEET MR. SHIV FOR MY INTERVIEW
IPPY -- HE WAS .........SHIV KAPOOR
GAURI (IN SHOCK)--WHAT, ...........HE WAS ......... MR.......SHIV KAPOOR.........OH DEAR, NOW ONLY GOD KNOWS, WHATS GONNA HAPPEN IN THE INTERVIEW
IPPY-- ALL THE BEST GAURI
GAURI-- YES, I NEED THAT A LOT

HOW WAS MY FISRT ATTEMPT IF U WANT MORE , I WILL WRITE MORE


Edited by pals_sneh - 26 March 2008 at 7:11am

no replies did i wrote so bad

no nooooo u wroteee too niceeeeee yaaarrr itz awesommm partttt but plzzzz do continuee soonnn okyyy nd once again u wroteeee too niceee

hey! no that was a good start!!! but cud u please not write in capitals please? keep it up!!!

hey first part is superb friend . n y do u think that ur ff is bad.its really good n waiting 4r u to continue it friend

awesum start
pehli nazar mein hi hosh udd gaye toh aage kya hoga
looking forward for next part
plz cont soon

that was really good...shiv toh first meeting mein hi latto ho gaya hai...mr kapoor to gaye kaam se...good one...waiting for next update hun


Asever

Amneet