[FF:An Office Affair] PART 27 , pg 40,updt 29 OCT - Page 2

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hey! no that was a good start!!! but cud u please not write in capitals please? keep it up!!!

hey first part is superb friend 👏 . n y do u think that ur ff is bad.its really good n waiting 4r u to continue it friend 😊

awesum start 👏 👏
pehli nazar mein hi hosh udd gaye toh aage kya hoga 😉
looking forward for next part
plz cont soon 😃

that was really good...shiv toh first meeting mein hi latto ho gaya hai...mr kapoor to gaye kaam se...good one...waiting for next update hun 👏 👏 👏


Asever 😳

Amneet 😉

thanxx for all ur support, i will try to maintain the pace here is the nxt

                        PART-2
                    THE INTERVIEW

Gauri is in fear she thinks--''oh god nothing is going normal today, first we reached office late.....then i collided with shiv kapoor n now my interview with him...oh god... plzz help me....

Gauri waites for an hour then.......
RECEPTIONIST--Ms. Gauri , sir is calling u

gauri kept on muttering different ,different god's name
she knocked shiv's room's door,.....a voice came... COME IN
Shiv was reading newspaper, his eyes were on the newspaper,he didn't looked at her n told her to take a seat .
SHIV-- any past working experience?
GAURI--emmmmmmmm...... no.
Shiv hears her voice n raises his eyes to look her
SHIV-- you!!!!!!!!!! u were the one near the lift n...........
GAURI--- yes sir,.... but.... it was a fault..... i promise u that this will never happen again n i will keep my eyes open all the time.

Shiv smiles n says--hey relax , i know it was a mistake ,don't be so tensed just forget that incident.

Gauri takes a deep sigh n said thanxx to god
SHIV--can i hav a look of ur profile.

Gauri gives n take a look of the room
Shiv opens the file n sees gauri, he again started feeling that someone is playin violin around him .........he watches her carefully .......he kept on looking at her .......... but when gauri's eyes turned towards shiv..... shiv turned his eyes back on the file (tryin to show that he's not watching her).
SHIV-- so u r alok uncle's daughter ....
Gauri noddes her head (saying yes)
SHIV-- ok ,u can join from tommorow
GAURI--sir...... r u serious , i mean..... did i.... really......... got the ........job
SHIV-- yes, u did n smiles.
gauri yelled ...aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa.....
SHIV--calm down,calm down this is an office
GAURI-- i m really sorry sir , i promise, this will not happen again.
just then anupam entered shiv's room
ANUPAM-- hey what happened,..n.. who yelled?????
Gauri keeps her head down in guilty,
SHIV-- nothing Anupam.... just.......
GAURI--Sir can i leave.
SHIV-- yeah sure n.... gave a smile
Shiv watches her carefully till she left the room
ANUPAM-- are u ok shiv?
SHIV-- what do u mean?
ANUPAM-- i mean , as far as i know u , u never smile at girls in office hours n that too to a new girl.
SHIV blushes n says--No , no it's not like that..it's ... just.....nothing.. n went out of the cabin
Anupam thinks that something is fishy

so how was this part Edited by pals_sneh - 16 years ago

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