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i loved the part soooooooooooooooooo much nandini.its a fantastic part Clap .the way gauri confrenting shiv was really good.but what is the secret behind his behaviour towards gauri n y does nikki wants their maariage to happen after knowing abour them Confused .plz update it soon friend.iam waiting 4r update Embarrassed

its really a very gud part friend Clap

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HEY, cum on di! im waiting 4 da nxt upda8 so get ur thinkin cap on!!!! Angry

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hey, awesome update yaar, Clap superb job, plzzzzzz continue soon Cry

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PART 10

hi alll..well well...am very very very very very sorrrrry...coz i wasnt able to updt this ff for a very very loong time now...i mean....i know many are mad at me for tht....and yaa...some must be knowing y too.....gosh....i dont wanna lie....frankly..bcos...i was too much into kis desh mein hai mera dil show....i just simply love the pair in it...and i was soo much into it tht i everything else has darkened out for me.....
this is for my jaanu sister atop.....i know she's mad at me...hehe......lols..but gurl......i continued...hehe....and yaa...yu gave me time til monday...but i did 2day itself.......hehe...i know its late....hehe....

gauri and shiv were utter shocked to see nikhila...she looked at both of them..."yeh tum donon kya bol rahe ho huh??!!.." both looked at each other with full of rage and confusion in their eyes....and then they looked at nikhila again..."mein tum donon se kuch pooch rahi hoon.."..shiv replied.."mom woh kuch nahi......actually.."..."chup.....mein sab kuch jaanti hoon....aur yeh bhi jaanti hoon ki tum donon yeh shaadi nahi karna nahi chahthe ho...."...this confused shiv-gauri even more...."mein jaanti hoon ki aap abh bahut confused ho..par....mein jaanti hoon ki mein kya kar rahi hoon aur kyun kar rahi hoon...samaj gaye??!!..."..she turned to gauri now..."gauri beta...tumaari maa ki fone aayi thi...tum ghar jao...".."teek hai badi maa...mein chalthi hoon.."..she glared at shiv and then left from there....shiv looked at his mom with a hopeless and a confused loook.....before shiv could say anything nikhila also left from there...shiv got mad and pushed all the things that was on his table....
gauri was approaching tht door when she saw anupam..."hey gauri...tum yahaan??!!".."hi anu...mein woh badi maa se milne aayi thi...mein thodi jaldi mein hoon..toh mein tumse baad mein milthi hoon..okk..byee..".."sure...byee.." and gauri left from there...nikhila saw anu and called him and told him what had happend...she told him to talk to shiv about this..he agreed and went to shiv's cabin....there he found shiv all frustrated...."shiv...yeh mein kya sunn raha hoon....".."kya...abh meine kya kiya hai??!!!"..."tum aur gauri yeh shaadi nahi karna chahthe ho??!!".."oh...toh mom ne sab kuch keh diya hai huh....haan...teek kaha unhone....."..."par kyun shiv??!!!"..."kyun??...yeh tum pooch rahe ho anupam...tum toh sab kuch jaante ho naa...."...."ek minute....yu dont mean ki tum.....gauri aur pia ki baat mila rahe ho??!!.."anupam!!!...uske naam math lo.....please..." shiv was terriblye more angry by now...anupam then patted on his bak and talked to him....."shiv...sach sach batao aakhir baat kya hai??!!..."...
anupam came downstairs after abt 1 hour..nikhila saw him and called him to her room..."anupam...kya hua?!!!..kya kaha shiv ne??!!!..."...anupam hesitated..."badi maa...woh baat actually yeh hai ki....i am sorry badi maa...meine aapse ek bahut badi raaz chipaayi.."..nikhila didnt understand anything..."kya matlab?!!...raaz??..".."haan badi maa...lekhin ajj mein aapko sab kuch bata detha hoon...lekhin badi maa...aap shiv se math kahiye ki meine aapse yeh sab keh diya hai..please...."..."teek hai...mein nahi bataoongi...".."badi maa....jab aap america aaye the toh shiv bilkul khush nahi tha....par woh khush lagne laga tha...jab uski mulaakaat pia se hui thi...."..."pia?!!!...."..."ji badi maa...shaayad aap nahi jaanti...lekhin shiv pia se pyaar karne laga tha...."..."kya?!!!!...par meine shiv se poocha toh usne..."..."lekhin woh pyaar teek nahi tha badi maa.....yeh sach hai ki pia bhi usse pyaar karthi thi...elkhin shiv ko patha nahi tha ki woh ek dhoka tha....yahaan india waapas aane ke do maheen pehle hi usse patha chala tha ki woh two timing game khel khel rahi thi......uski ek boyfrnd already tha...aur shiv ne unn donon ko pia ke ghar mein ek saat dekh liya tha....shiv toot chuka tha....par badi maa...tab woh mujhse gauri ke baare mein kehtha tha....ki woh bahut achchi hai....aur uski sabse achchi dost hai....isliye woh waapas bhi aaya tha..."..."toh anupam...usse abh gauri se kya problem hai?!!!.."..."haan badi maa....meine bhi yahi poocha tha...aur sach kahoon toh usne joh bhi kahaa.....mujhe nahi lagta aisa kuch hua...."..."par hua kya tha??!!!..."..."shiv ko toh gauri pasand thi..par woh pia ke dhoke ko poori tharah se bhool nahi paya tha...isliye woh sabhi ladkiyon se bahut buri tharah se barthaav kartha tha....aur khaas karke gauri se kuch zyaada..lekhin iss ummeed mein ki woh usse samaj paayegi.....par gauri ko toh aisa hi laga ki woh usse kuch zyaada gussa kar raha hai.....yeh baat shiv ko samaj mein aaya....aur woh gauri se baat karne akele mein gaya...aur gauri ne usse galat samaj liya...ki woh akelepan ka mauka uttaana chahtha tha......bas.....shiv ko aur bura lagaa...usse yakeen hi nahi hua ki gauri bhi usse galat samajne lagi thi......uska gussa aur bhi badd gaya....usse saha nahi gaya....khas karke gauri ki baatein uske kaanon mein goonjithi rahi......bas...phir se america chala aaya..."...."bas...itni si baat ke liye yeh itna react kar raha hai?!!!..agar usne gauri se dirctly pooch liya hota iss baare mein toh woh saaf saaf keh dethi ki usne aisa kyun kahaa tha...."..."haan badi maa...par....shiv pia ki harkat se aaaj bhi affected hai....lekhin ek baat hai badi maa....shic gauri ko bahut pasand kartha hai..."..."kya?!!!".."ji badi maa...woh hamesha gauri ko ooncha baaat kartha tha....meine usse poocha toh usne kaha sirf dost hai...lekhin uske baaton aur aankhon mein toh dosti se bhi kuch zyaada pyaar tha.....mein kahtha hoon badi maa...gauri hi shiv ko waapas humaare puraane shiv bana sakthi hai......"...."mein bhi jaanti hoon anupam ki gauri hi shiv ke liye hai....."..."aap fikar math keejiye....sab teek ho jaayega...abh mujhe chalna chaahiye....mein chaltha hoon...."...anupam said bye and left....

Shiv and Gauri are standing in front of the house for the Grahapravesh.....shiv didnt smile at all....except for the photo of himself and gauri...he was completely mad abt thsi wedding...he kept glaring at anupam...its bcz of him he agreed to marry gauri.....anupam simply winked and smiled at him....gauri wlked in and was taken to shiv's room...and then they all left shiv and gauri in teh room...as soon as all of them left....shiv glared at gauri...but she had no reaction on her face except for tears in her eyes....she was looking down at teh floor sitting on the bed....shiv went in to wash....gauri went to the balcony and started crying....."yeh kya ho gaya...meri shaadi ho gayi......woh bhi aise insaan se jo mujhse bilkul pyaar hi nahi kartha...."...she looked up at the sky...with a hopeless look...suddenly she heard a knock on the balcony door...she turned to see shiv chnged..."abh poori dhin aise hi kadi rahogi kya??...neeche sab humaare intezaar kar rahein hain....thayyar ho jao..aur jaldi se neecha aa jao..."...he said tht and stormed out of the room..."gauri thought this was her end..she had to live like this for her entire life......there's no use of crying now.....she wiped her tears...and wnet to the washroom..she wore a violet saree...and went downstairs...all of them were waiting for her...shiv didnt look at her once...he was too busy with aditya....payal came running to her..."chachi..." and hugged her...gauri hugged her back and took her in her arms...."hai payal....aap toh aaj bahut khoobsoorat lag rahi ho..."smiled gauri...aditya and shiv simply looked at them..."gauri beta.."called nikhila..."i hope sab kuch teek hai naa...." "ji badi maa...koi problem nahi hai...".shiv gave a sly smile...and then palak came...."bhayyaa...bhabhi...aap donon ke liye ek surprise hai...."..all of them looked at palak...and then she called out vivaan...who brought a chocolate cake.....he placed it on teh table...."abh yeh meri aur vivaan ke style mein shaadi ka celebration hai...kyun vivan bhayya??!!..".."of course.....bahut hi simple hai....aap sabko patha hi hai naa...kitne functions mein dekh chuke honge...ki couples ko ek saat cake kaatna hai...aur phir ek doosre ko khilana hai....and and....usse khatham nahi hua....ek aur game hai.....par pehle cake..".."nahi vivan...uski koi zaroorat nahi hai....mujhe yeh sab pasand nahi..." "bhayya.....aaj aapki pasand ya napasand ki baare mein nahi hai.....aapko yeh karna hi padega....its an order...."...shiv thought it to be useless to argue with vivan and palak 2gether...he glared at gauri....who now looked at shiv in a look"oh god...am totally trapped..."...shiv understood this and for some reason felt happy now...yes...thts wat he wanted...make gauri feel uncomfortable...he took teh knife..and now looked at gauri....gauri slowly moved to him...and held his hand....they both cut the cake...and fed each other...they acted as if they were fine...."abh...aur next game...yeh bhi kuch khaas nahi...same old game...hum iss thaali mein ek ring daalenge..........aap donon ko haath dalke usse doondna padega....jisse milega..woh doosre ko pehnaayega.....
gauri was totally lost now...this was too much for her..but shiv kind of enjoyed gauri's situation now....he was ready for it...this surprised nikhila a lot....they kept the thaali...palak winked at vivan and he said start....both put their hands in...shiv got hold of gauri's hand.....her eyes nearly bulged out in shock..but then she tried being normal...he was holding her hand tight...real tight tht it was hurting her....after abt 2 mins...vivan and palak started laffing....shiv left gauri's hadn doubting if he found out...and all of them looked at them....."arrey bhayyaa..kab tak aap bhabhi ke haath pakadkar rahenge....??!!!.." this shocked gauri and shiv a lot...but shiv wudnt agree..."kya matlab...??!!..mein toh sirf ring doond raah tha.."..."haha..kaise doondenge....humne toh abhi tak ring daala hi nahi..."..all of them laughed...now shiv was totally embrassed...and gauri was pink with shy.....shiv looked at gauri..was now looking better and as if she wanted to laugh her heart out....vivan then put the ring and this time shiv started searching for the ring....

i'l cont asap...and a biig sorry again for being late......sorry sorry sorry....and again a sorry if this upd was not long enuff....well wil hav loads of romance in teh next part.....kkk..and a vid also....hehe....

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reserved..will read and then reply...


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Edited by atop - 29 June 2008 at 12:47am

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ahem ahem ummmm wat's this am i dreaming kya..wat do i see wat do i see..an update..an update and that toooo by the bhulakad of the bhulakad lazzinees ki princess the great yet whom i love the most my nandini di...ummmmmm now wat do i say..kehten hai taarif karna accha nahi hota...par kya karoon control nahi hota..waise i won't say thnchhuu for the update..bada tadpa tadpa kar yeh update mili hai..so sowiiee no thnchhi and waise bhi yeh mera bday gift that jo ki mujhe instalments mein mil raha hai..wais am wondering ki aap next update kab karoge..uummmmmmmmmm maybe august..but kuch bhi ho i loved it di as usual..glad that u didn't u noe stretched the things,...and yup update next part at the earliest..and ya as promised tons and tons of romance in it.and the lenght of the part shud be more than this....am greedy yup so am i....the part was fabulously scripted as usual....so shiv loves gauri..but is just a bit egoistic..poor gauri doesn't noe that shiv loves her..awwwwwww will come to noe soon..wow shiv enjoying torturing gauri...but it wdn't be for toooo long..aakhir honeymoon pe everything will change....nafrat mein bhi pyaar chupa hai....chalo bahot ho gayi taarif ab chup chap next part likhna shuru kar do..and update it within this coming week okies..warna warna..u noe na....



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