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new ff *Jab Dil Miley*... Part 6 Updated. - Page 4

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Posted: 16 years ago
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww good stuff 😳 precap sounds fab 😳 👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey guys im bk.....with part 4

Riddhima was packing her bag to leave.....when armaan came in....

Armaan brought riddz back to his place.......he lived alone.
R:wow tumhara ghar to bohot sudar hai.....
Armaan brought her in and showed her her room.

A:armaan kept her bags.....accha mein bagal wale kamre mein hoon agar tumhe kuch chahiye toh bula lena....tum change karlo tubtak mein kuch khane ke liye magwata hoon.(he means by phone)
he was abt to leave when....ridzz hold his hand

R:Armaan mere saath kuch daar nahi beethoge...?

Armaan sits on the bed beside her.....hold her hand....
A:riddhima.....tmne toh meri jaan hi nakaldi thi.....pata hai tumhe mein kitna daar gaya tha.....pheli baar aisa laga ke zindagi rukh jayegi.....thank god thume kuch nahi hua......varna mein toh......

Riddhami cuts him off by hugging him all of a sudden......she flet like the world was hers now......she flet safe.....she flet love.....every inch of her missed armaan.....she wanted her to be in armaans arms like this till eternity......thinking this tears started to roll down her cheeks....she started to cry....
On the other hand armaan was shocked to see riddhima like this breaking down in his arm.......her flet protection towards her....he flet to hide her in his arm forever and never let anything or anyone harm her or even touch her......she was his and only his......he heard her crying.....he knew the reason...
A:Shhhhhhhh......bas....(he wispered)......bas...
R:(stops crying and looks into armaans eyes)......armaan.....dun u ever dare leave me again......mein zinda....
Hearing this armaan put a hand on her lips....
A:(looking at riddz angrily)....aaj keh diya dubara khabhi mat kehna.....tum nahi jaanti tumhare bin yeh armaan....jeeta toh hai par uski zindagi moth ke jaisi hai......
Saying this they both hugged each other tightly.....after a while they broke apart......
A:Tum change karlo mein kuch lahne ke liye lata hoon.......
R:theek hai

Riddhima change into a white loose nighty(It was already night)......she came down......armaan was sitting on the sofa.....the wind was blowing hard.....they both set on the sofa and started to eat....Armaan feed ridddhima with his hands and riddhima feed him with hers.....
They were going to sleep when they was a blackout.

R:armaan.....armaan....yeh kya hua!!!
A:Lagta hai bijli chali gayi......
R:Armaan mujhe bohot dar lag raha hai.....

A:riddhima curcuit box bahar hai....mein check karke aata hoon....
R:Armaan mujhe akele iss andhere mein bohot dar lag raha hai.....mat jao..
A:riddz mein bahar hi hoon.Agar mein bahar nahi jaoga toh andhera nahi jeyga...
R:theek hai par jaldi aahna...
A:Bas yu gaya aur yoon aaya....

Armaan leaves he has to go to the back of his house to see the box as he is on the way to the box it starts to rain heavily......

Back in the house riddz got more scared ny the rain and runs out of the house to find armaan.....in her haste she fogot to carry a umbralla.....

Armaan is fixing the box when riddz came behind him....
A:Tum yaha kya kar rahi ho....
R:woh mujhe bohot daar lag raha tha...
A:accha yeh fuse uur gaya hai lagta hai ke kal hi fuse le ke fix karna parega.....

Just then a loud thuder struck....
Riddz heard this and screamed she hugged armaan tightly......
Armaan flet a new desire arose in him......he stood there still like he wanted this moment to stop here.....
he hold riddz sholders and look deeply into her eyes....
riddz flet she was high armaan eyes were so fierce.....so intense that she flet she was sinking in them.......she flet a legs go weak and stumbled abit.....
armaan saw this and immidiately carried her in his strong arms.......both of them were getting very wet by the rain......he never looked away from her eyes....he remember the night riddz dressed in a mini skirt and was so ashamed ......but now she was daringly staring in his eyes....daringly submitting herself to him......he knew he wanted her.....
He walked into riddz bedroom.......he put her down beside her bed.....he still was staring at her......she looked down......she was shivering her lips was trembling........both of them knew no word cld express what they flet......she looked up at armaan.....
R:Plz aise mat dheko....
A:(still staring intensely)Kyu.....
R:Kuch hojayega......mein apne aap ko rokh nahi paogi.....
armaan came close to her riddz moved back armaan came closer ridds moved back........this went on till riddz hit a wall and was trapped.......armaan started st her fiercely with love...lust and protectiveness...
A:Aaj apne aap ko mat roko ridddhima.....aaj mein tumhe apne saason mein mehsoos karna chahta hoon......tumhe.....tumhe meri baahon mein toothte hue mehssos karna chata hoon.......humare pyaar ho sab haade par karna dhena chata hoon.......hamare aatmao ko ek hona dhekena chata hoon........
R:armaan......(she closed her eyes and sighed)
Riddz flet like armaan's eyes were touching her everywhere.
armaan touched her face....her......cheek....
Riddz was shivering...every touch of armaan was making the fire in her burn more and more fiercely....
Riddz lips trembled......armaan used his index finger and traced her lips......

He kissed her cheek.......left then right......her forehead....his hands were going up and down her waist and hips.......riddz flet like she was in estascy.........she sighed armaan name......armaan got high on riddz sighs.....he came very close to her.......gave her a small light kiss on her soft lips......after that he looked up.......Riddz had her eyes closed.....she was in another world.......armaan was drunkened by her beauty...he had never seen anyone soo beautiful......she looked like an angle.....brought to earth just for him....he tasted her sweet lips and needed more......he cld not take in anymore......seeing that riddz did not protest.......he closed his eyes like he was very high......and kiss her again and again.......first very passinately and then....very fiercely.......

Precap
What will happen next where will this kiss bring riddz and armaan relationship to........see riddz and armaan understand and feel love in the next post (part 5)


okie guys that was the end on Part 4 plz enjor iy and comment .......okie.....love you all bbbye.....

P.s ill post the next post by tmw.... 😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
awwww....tat was soo cute!! 😳 ...plzz contd!!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: gari14

awwww....tat was soo cute!! 😳 ...plzz contd!!

 

thks alot i will by tmw.

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Posted: 16 years ago
wow yaar it ws wonderful yaar
sooooooooooooooooo romantic evn i ws also
blushng wow it ws realy touchd abt armaan wrds yaar so peacefully realy it ws toooooooo goooooooooood
lts see wht gonna happn nxt
waitng fr ur nxt prt cont sooooooon
luv yachna
Payal_17 thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: yachna

wow yaar it ws wonderful yaar
sooooooooooooooooo romantic evn i ws also
blushng wow it ws realy touchd abt armaan wrds yaar so peacefully realy it ws toooooooo goooooooooood
lts see wht gonna happn nxt
waitng fr ur nxt prt cont sooooooon
luv yachna

thks yachna for the wonderfull comment.......ill post the next part by tmw evening.....

love

payal

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Posted: 16 years ago
Wow thts so cute n romantic....the preview also seems very interesting..gr8 job..plzz continue.. 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
really nyc...i cud feel my cheeks burning..m speechless really nyc..do pm me wen the next prt is update..awesum job.. 👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
WOW!!!..So wonderfully expressed 👏 👏 👏 ...U did owesome work....Plzz continue soon..! and try to pm me if u can..! 😉 Edited by *K@nik@* - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
verrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrry cure payal