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dilkeroshni

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Posted: 12 March 2008 at 7:52pm | IP Logged
i just read all of it.. awesome yaar... kamal kar diya.. i can't wait for the next part pls pls pls update soome pretty please?

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bollyrockstar

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Posted: 12 March 2008 at 8:38pm | IP Logged
aw your ff is really cute.

plz cont soon Big smile

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Guyz I promise I will update 2morrow

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Posted: 14 March 2008 at 7:28am | IP Logged
Ranbir looks at the window and sees Slok there and gets mad at being interupted

RN-Slok ke baache main tuje nahin chodunga

Slok runs and Ranbir chases

Kanya comes out of the spell and looks fit to kill

KN- ye sand khud ko kya samajta hai pehle zabardasti kiss karta hai aur phir zor se gira dehta hai. Pooja di teek hi kehti han laadkon ko hat tamow to who gale par jaatein hai. Ab is gaande ko main teek kartee hoon who us se karowngee jise use nafrt hai.

Walks out into the lawn and listens to Big D and Malika talking.

Big D-Maalika Ranbir kitna baadal gaya hai? Pehle kaita taa ke pyaar is dunya ki sab se baadi bimari hai aj khud apne parivar se jhoot bol kar romance kar raha ta. Yaad hai tume Ranbir ne mujse meri pichli birthday pe kaha ta ke agar who kisi laadki ke kareeb gaya to do din ka khana wo khud banaye ga. Ab main use khana banwaon gi.

Malika-Rehne digye mom Kanya Ranbir ki biwi hai to yeh sab use jaiz hai aur doosre baat to yeh hai ke Ranbir ko is tara se kaam se sakht nafrat hai, muje to yeh shaak hai ke Ranbir ko to paata bi nahin kitchen kahaan hai.

Kanya-(thinking) Ranbir tume to mein kitchen mein pocha ke rahoonge ab dekna main kya karti hoo.

Kanya walks towards Malika and Big D.

Malika- ao humare paas beto beta

On seeing her upset

Malika- kya hua kisi ne kuch kaha tume beta

KN- Woh ranbir ne

Malika gets angry

Malika- Kya keha rehin tee ap mom ke Ranbir badal gaye hai kya khaak badla hai. Kya kaha usne tume

KN-(thinks) ab ayga maaza (outloud)Mom usne kaha ke muje khaana bana ana nahin ata aur (starts fake crying) agaar kisi khute ko mere haat ka bana khaan mile to wo be moon mor kar rejecxt kar dega.

Malika-Kya usne ye sab kaha

KN-(full on fake crying) haan aur kaha ke ab use office men 24/7 kaam parna barega kyunki hotel se roz khaan mangane ke bill bohot zyaad hoga

Big D-Us kote ko men seeda karti hoon khud khabi kitchen men per nahi raka aur tume baatein suna vaha hai Ranbir ko abhi bulaw Malika

Malika- RANBIR ABHI YAHAN AO

The whole family comes running followed by Ranbir who looks at Kanyas face and

RN- Kya huwa kanya ro kyun rahi ho

Big D-wa khud use rulaya aur pooch rahe ho ke woh ro kyun rahi hai sharam nahi aati

RN-(confused) maine? maine kya kiya?

Malika-Oh just shut up Ranbir aur naatak karna baand karo. Tumne meri bahun ko kaha ke use khaan banana nahin aata aur uski bezaati be ki. Kuch kehne se pehle soch liya karo tumari biwi ha woh

Big D- Tu itna Kanna banane ka expert ha na to do din ka khana tu hi ban aye ga aur agaar nahi banaya to ek hafte ke liye na kuch kahne ke liye milega aur nahi tum office ja sakoge SAMJE.

KN-(thinks) ab is Ranbir Nanda ki haalat iek saand se bi battar hogi. Jalo age dekhtein hai tamasha.

KC294

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Posted: 14 March 2008 at 8:19am | IP Logged
it jus gets better and better... lol... ranbir in the kitchen... we've seen how he ended up... pls do continue soon

rainshine_11

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Posted: 14 March 2008 at 9:45am | IP Logged
oh cant wait till next update........
hopefully the get more closer!

dilkeroshni

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Posted: 14 March 2008 at 9:54am | IP Logged
loll it was great.. update soon.. ranbir in kitchen should be fun

punjabi.princes

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Posted: 14 March 2008 at 11:05am | IP Logged
lol LOL great update..continue soon Smile

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