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Posted: 09 March 2008 at 8:10am | IP Logged
hi i m totally new to this fan fic world i m not an expert in this but yet i have tried one its mainly based on dharamveer and prithviraj chauhan
some character are changed some added more so here is it pls do comment


An DHaramveer Fan fiction
by ash

i m starting an new ff with all character of dharam veer with sighlt change in
there characterstics i m adding more charcater

here is the story line
Maharaj Aryavardhan:


he is the king of aryanagar which is famous for buliding stautes ,he is king for 20yrs
he is realy kind,nobel,loyal,honest,hard working,royal person he is also an strict father for only his one son
whose name is dharam ,his main ambition is to make his son an future king
so he is very strict towards him and he loves his wife n sister n his praja
he have a brother named jaivardhyan

Maharani Shamali(i don't know her serial name)

she is most caring person always support her son whenever he is in troble
perfect as a wife n perfect as a mother and is best friend of nivrithi


Nivrithi ;


she is an caring mother she lost her husband in an war between other country n lost his battle
she lost her 3 kids and she got veer from an lake n adopt him as her  own son n loves him till death
she is very kidn,friendly,loyal person but the fact keeps her hurting ,she misses her husband badlyyyyyyyy


Vikranth;


nivrithi's husband an brave,courages,good king of Shing nagar
but lost his last battle due to an cheap trick of other country person



Veer;


he is the most naughty prince u will find he loves his mother n dharam till deadth
he loves to break rules and he is very courages,brave,kind,lovely,
he doesn't know abt his real identity-that he is an adopated son
he thinks that his father was cheated n killed n he will take revengue with the that cheap king
he is a good player ,smart,integent person

Pari;


actcally she was maharani of Dajwar
an big rajyaaa it is rich in everything but an disaster took which changed her life
all wants this rajya as its rich but her husband somanad was grt warrior n king
he always wins all wars and his relatives are really jealous of him and their eyes are on his richness
he was killed by his relatives for wealth n oder to kill pari,sakshi(her daughter),veer(who was an month yr old baby)
but pari was lucky to escape them now also they are searching for pari,veern sakshi because somanad
put an will that only veer can be the king od dajwar or else there all wealth will be given in hands of the praja(ppl)
so she lost her veer on a river but knows that veer is in safe hands n joined sharmailks so she can see him every day


Somanad:



An grt warrior n grt king of dajwar where is famous for wealth and  vast place all ruler have eye on it
but he became an door between the greedy ruler
he was grt king but was killed by his own brother for wealth
but he was smart enough to put a will that all his wealth will be in veer's hands only or else it will go to
the people
he was smart,intelligent ,wise,grt fighter of the era he loved his wife n children n loves his prajya



so here goes
Dharam;


he is the son of aryavardh n is scared of his dad n his strictness
he loves his mother and  veer more than any one or more than his life
he is very nice to everyone ,he is very hardworking n caring,kind,royal,living accrding to the rules n regulation of the
aryanagar
he likes to play with veer who is his cousin but it is like
Do jism ak jaan
dharam knows veer's aim he promised that he will surly help him to
kill that boney chacha(who killed vikranth )
so they both are very deep bonded


Agni;

jaivard's son who is very like him very greedy and loves to play trick on dv n break there relation ship but never succeded
he likes to see dharam in trouble and hate veer for supporting everytime for dharam n helps dharam to escape from trouble
which will be created by agni,he loves his father his mother was dead 16yrs ago due to illness
he loves her n miss her too much and
agni is very greedyy,selfish,rude,cruel character he always compares stauts and alll
he always teases veer by saying that he is kamzoor pita's son n is not rich as he is and all
but dharam always says that whatever dharam has is veer's also
agni never leaves a chance to make trouble for dv


JAivaryd;


maharaj aryavaryd's father's brother's son
he n aryavaryd was nominated for the seat
he did a lot of things for the seat all stuffs bad stuffs
but he didn't get it and he is soooooooooooooooooooooo jealous n
he hates his cousin n love to killl dharam when he gets an chance
n he wants agni to be the next king
he hates veeeeeer toooooooooo much as he is smart


boney chacha;


he is the one who killed vikranth and wanted to kill veer as he is afraid that one day
veer will kill him and take his dynasty so he is always on watch for veer wherever he goes
he is greedy,selflish,tricy,rude,cruel,who likes to kill ppl without reason


bhimdev;

he killed real father of veer somanad he is the brother of somanad
he is an crueslestttttttttttttttttttttttt person u have ever meet,you all can imagne how it will be to kill own brother for
wealth,he is greedddyyyyyyyy,crueslist, rudest,arrogant,disgusting,he badly wants veer
as all the wealth is in veer's name
he is most smart person cunning person crooked person


bichu



he is an special killer of bhimdev who is searching for veer pari n sakshiiiiiiii
he is an proffestionate killer he never falls to kill anyone  his orders are to kill pari n sakshi on the spot n
bring veer to bhimdev he is still on his mission

Tasha;


agni's best friend he is an landlord's son who is very close to jaivardyan
he is crooked all dako ideas are his n he is very like agni who always wants to
make trouble for veer because he hates veer more than anything


Nakul;(purana arjun)


in left
he is the best friend of veer n dharam who is rajkumar of kurukwar
he is very humoruos person,he loves his friends and hates agni n tashaaaaa
more than anything
he lives with dharam n veer


do comment there are some more character (all rajkumari's are com,ming)

now rajkumari's intro

Rajkumari Anannya



ji ha dostion iss may shera rajkumari sach much ki rajkumari anaaya hey magar
jab she was born her mother died
but her father loved her sooooooooooooo much he coudn't see her in sunshine for one minute he loves her soo much
but she was really irrated because she want to be like others she want to play in rain with other girl,she wants to walk n go to temple
but her fathers order was not to make any of these wish come trueeeeeeeee
sooooo shera dedicded she will go around the rajya as shera (an boy)
she is brave like to fight n is best house rider ever known,she loves to help poors and is known as the dako
but her father nor other's non her real identinty
she is most wanted  dako
her father rewards 100000 money those who bring shera in front of him[:lol]
she loves her friends,very couarges n proud to be a princess,she is also an ghambandi
aur little arrogant n don't belive in love n she have her own rules n regulation she
obeys alll rules n regulation

shera's father-jaichand;

he loves his daughtherrrrrrrr and he don't like hurting his daughter at all he thinks that she is all to him
and he won't make her hurt by anymean not even an sunshine can't touch her
he is good,very caring,poossieve king who loves his daughterrrrrrrrr
n is friend of maharaj aryavaryd


Rajkumari Anushka
new character i can't find my pic in my pc heheh kidding well i didn't get any girl according to her character

she is rajkumari of swargnagar
she is most naughtiestttttttt rajkumari who always talkssssssss and never obeys rule n regulation
she is mischeifer and an troublesome case
she loves to do what her father says to do she only hears what is right to her
and her father is  very very very strict
they are none other than maharaj .........
u will come to know it sooon
her father is an cruel one but she is like her mother who died 5yrs ago due to illness
she hates her father like hell n she doesn't like being his daughter
she always got punishments every time by her father always
she has a brother who is really like her father
she loves children n poor's she always escapes from mehal or palace as she can n hates being there

she don't care of stautus


Rajkumari sakshi;
sorri couldn't find a pic (same as our sakshi)
but nw she is a sharmilk but she is really the daughter of somanad n pari who knows abt her identinty n all abt herself
she is senstive,pratcical,brave,nice,kind girl who always hears her mother's words


 Vayshali



her parents loves her she is very nice humours n love her friend anushka
she always support anushka whenever needed and her parents as there daughther
her father  is an landlord n know how anushka is treated n
vayshali also is very caring,senstive,friendly,kind girl,she is sometimes dump but very nice



Rajkumari Sia;


she is same as dv  nice n annoying girl always talks too much she is very ziidddi n she is arrogant too
she cares abt stautus and she love her parents
in this fic
sia's parents don't compel her to marry
she is in talash of her dream rajkumar


Samarat ;


anuska's brother who is greedy n is very very careing n strict abt his stautus very arrogant he is cruel n rude
cunning and smart
he loves his sister but very strict with her
he loves being an emperior of the world



Hariya dako;

bona chachu's fav men
chachu had given him the contract to kill veer
n jaichand had given him contract to catch shera at any cost


do comment
if its bad or good do comment
i will start with the story or not??????????
sorri for mistakes pls forgive them



 


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