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Posted: 29 March 2008 at 7:06pm | IP Logged
ok guys im continueing the story is gettin goood!
ok

Manya feeding karan and has tears in her eyes also. KAran is unable to see this he tells her please dont cry Manya do u know how much i love you i cant see you sad.

Dr.- Karan ab tum garh ja sakte ho
K- Thanku dr. but mere pas iktna waqt hai
(manya is unable to hear this and leaves)
Dr.- Karan tumhare pas sirf kuch weeks hai
K- ab mai manya ka karuu voh tho mere bena marjai ge.

(mnaya takes karan to her house)

Karan is sittin by himself thinking that maybe if he shows amnya that he ahtes her and gets mad at her it will be easier for her to forget him. Manya coes gettin him water)

M- karan lho paani pelo
karan takes the glass and and thorws it! Ouch
K- mujhe tumhari koi jeez nahi chahye
M- karan kya hua
karan raises his hand about to hit manya. manya stops his hand in a quick reflex and twists it behind his back.
M- karan yeh mat bhulna ke mai ek police officer hun!!!
    AKASH COMES IN
A- im sorry i think i came at a bad time LOL
M- nahi Akash come in (she looks at KAran with a evil eye)
K- im leaving! Angry
A- yeh karan kho kya hua
M- pata nahi achanak hi..anywayz tell me rupa kasi hai
AKash looks down unable to answer
A- Manya we broke the marrige
   Manya is shocked!!! Ouch
M- kya but kyun kya hua?
A- vho manya..mai..manya..mai tumse pyaar....
    Dadu comes in before Akash could say anything! LOL
D- Manya beta tumhari liyea Om ka phone hai! Tongue

ok someone conitune! Tongue


Edited by ana1 - 29 March 2008 at 7:07pm
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Posted: 29 March 2008 at 8:00pm | IP Logged
no one can contuied u have to contuied ur good at it reallyy i just loved ur story a wedding story plzzzz contuiedd
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Posted: 30 March 2008 at 10:13am | IP Logged
hey i thought u were gonna change the part of where karan is dying. wasnt it supposed to be maanya the one hearing akash's convorsation not karan? plzzzz dont make karan die. this story is supposed to be the wedding of karan n maanya's.
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Posted: 30 March 2008 at 11:32am | IP Logged
plz cont soon
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Posted: 30 March 2008 at 12:24pm | IP Logged
cann wait to read next part karan acting so weid manya and akash confuised what with karan acting weid .
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Posted: 30 March 2008 at 12:55pm | IP Logged

ok ppl i will continue my own part LOL please let me know how it is k:
Tongue

M- om kaise ho! Om mujhe mere dost ki bhot zarurat hai
O- manya kya hua are u ok
M- patah nahi Om mujko kuch samaj nahi ara hai, tum please mere pass ajo
O- manya dont worry meh kal arahu, bye.

   ( Om is worries thinking what happened to manya, he has flashbacks of them 2) Manya goes back to Akash

M- Akash sorry Om ka phone tha
A- oh thats great, mnaya i have to tell you somthing important
M- of corse tell me
A- nahi not here, meh tumse kal milsakta hu
M- actually akash Om ara hai
( akash gets mad)
A- Manya! tum tho mujko bhol hi chuki ho kabi karan tho kabhi Om how about me.
M- kash whats wrong tum mere sabse ach hai dost ho
A- mujhe tho asa nahi lagta! (akash leaves)
   (manya breaks down and starts crying she cant take the pain anymore)

M- jab bhi meh Akash ko bhulne ke koshes karthehn voh mere samne ajatha hai...

ends! Smile

weddin is in one week Embarrassed

preview- Karan gets in a fight with Akash. Manya arrests Karan!

stay tuned for nex part will be really goodTongue



Edited by ana1 - 30 March 2008 at 12:57pm
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Posted: 30 March 2008 at 1:21pm | IP Logged
coollllllllllllll tht niceeeeeeeeeeeeee part cant wait to read next part
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Posted: 30 March 2008 at 2:15pm | IP Logged
really intereting

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