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mahi4u

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Posted: 12 March 2008 at 5:26am | IP Logged
hey
jus read ur ff
cho cho sweeeetttt n cuteeeeeeeeee
jus luved it
cont super sooooooooonnnnnn
luv ya n tak care
mahru

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Posted: 12 March 2008 at 6:13am | IP Logged
wow yaar it ws grt
ilvd it thy all mde lunch nd arcutd his fingr nd ridz suck it nd ar saw her so lvngly yaar
itws awesom nd now ar md assignment intrestng or date pe bhi nahi jayega poor hm plzzzzz cont soon
yachna

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Posted: 12 March 2008 at 8:47am | IP Logged
armaan kabhi nahi sudhrega... siya naraj ho jayegi iss liye chahta hai ki ridz assignment kare LOL but gud job ridz usse hi assignment karne do Wink

gr8 part do continue soon Wink

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Posted: 12 March 2008 at 8:57am | IP Logged

PART 6:

Next morning

An: Arman tum nay assigment tayar kar leay hai

Ar: hah (keep seeing a girl)

An: I know you are responsible.

Ar: Ya of coure i am arman malick.

Ridz: Di jaldi chalen humain deer ho rahi hai class start ho jaey ge.

An: Ya u are right ridz.

At: Yar anji mera asigment dekho thek hai na mei nay raat bhar jag kay bnaya hai.

Ridz: You are very hardworking boy.

Anjali seeing atul assigment.

An:Atul this is superb.

Ridz, anjali ,arman and atul in classroom

Prof mehta:All the students submitt their assigment.

Arman sits beside the ridz.

Ar: Take the ridz assigment and change the name.

Ar: Sir this is my assigment

Ridz: But this is mine sir.

Ar: Don't blame me this is mine.

Prof mehta wants to  punishes ridz.But he forgive her for her best performance in the exam.

Prof mehta: Riddhimma i give you one chance please submitt your assigment tommorow.

Ridz: O.k sir

At the end of the class anjali ridz and atul is angry with arman

Ridz is weaping

Ridz: Arman how can u do this

Ar: Sorry ridz mei samjha yeh assigment tum meray leay lai ho.

Ridz: Woh assigment tumharay leay nahi balkay yeh tumhara assigment tha (give him a assigment)

An: Yes arman this is your's pta hai kal poori rat ridz nay jag kar apna aur tumhara assigment bnaya tha .And belive me your assigmemt is 100 times better than ridz.

Ar: sorry ridz.

Ridz: no

Ar: please mujhay maf kar do

He sit on his knees.Please forgive me.

ridz: O.k

Ar: Ridz yeh btaotumharay pas yeh assigment bhi tha par tum nay prof mehta ko kyun nahi deya.

Ridz: Kyun ki mei chahati thi kay is bar tumharay mujh say zayda number aayen.

Ar: Mujhay nahi pta tha kay t5um mera itna khayal rakhti ho.Please i am sorry.

Ridz:It's o.k aainda aisi galti mat karna

Ar: Aainda mei tumhari har bat mano ga aur dheray dheray khud ko bdalnay ki koshish karo ga.

Arman goes to the prof mehta and except his fault.

Next day;

An: Arman humaray exam shuru honay walay hai pleasetudies par dehan deyna shru kar do.

Ridz: Ya arman please kuch dno kay liay dosri ladkiyon ko dekhna aur un kay sath date par jana bandh kar do.

An: Ha arman yeh sab tumharay bhalay kay liay hai.

Ar: Ha anjali mei ab mei ridz ki koi bat nahi talo ga .Jo ridz kahay ge woh mei karo ga.

An: That's right

At; Yes arman i am proud you

An: hum paper ki tayari sath mei karen gay.

Ar: o.k

Ridz: Atul tum aur arman sham ko humaray ghar a jaya karna.

Ar: Par meri date.

Ridz: Arman

Ar: Hug her sorry baby i am just jocking.

 

Sorry guys this is very short part because i am going to watching dill mill gaye.

 

 

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pari0706

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Posted: 12 March 2008 at 9:03am | IP Logged
no probs sweety its cute still

yachna

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Posted: 12 March 2008 at 11:47pm | IP Logged
wow yaar armaan ridz ki baat manega
to good date par bhi nahi jayga
again too good or study karega
poor hm bt no pro its vry nce
cont soon wth lng prt
tcccc
yachna

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Posted: 13 March 2008 at 12:38am | IP Logged
hey awsome ff yaar its a wondeerful story something diff from the other stories Clap plz do write the next part fast n plz if u dont mind can u pm me everythime u update ur ff

shalika

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Posted: 13 March 2008 at 12:47am | IP Logged
nice update its so sweet armaan ridz ki har baat manega so sweet.......please update soon

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