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PART 2:

At the evening Malick's residence is full with guest.Antara (elder sister of arman) looking very beautifull.Rehan and his wife amrita is very happy because of the engagement ceremiong of their daughter.They welcomed the guest ,while their son arman is not present in the party.

Amrita: Rehan where is my son arman?

Rehan: you know your son is very careless.He never reach in time. party mei sab log us kay baray mei pooch rahay hai. Mei jawab day day kar thak gaya ho. Tumharay laad payr nay usay beghar diya hai.Aj aanay do usay mei us ki khob kahbar layta ho.

Amrita: Usay mei nay nahin ap nay beghara hai.Please jab woh aaye ap usay kuch mat boleay ga , warna mei ap say kabhi baat nahin karoon ge.

Rehan: Waisay kahan hai ap kay ladly.

Arman enters in the party he sing the song

" janam dekh lo meat gai doriyan

mei yahan ho yahan ho yahan ho yahan"

Rehan : lo a gaye ap kay noor-e-nazar.

Amrita:Beta kahan rah gaya tha tu. sab teray baray mei pooch rahay thay.

Ar: Mom woh mei atul kay sath tha .(he is searching someone in the party).

Amrita: Kisay dohnd rahay ho beta .

Ar: Mom where is gupta uncle?

Amrita: Pta nahi par tum kyun gupta bhai kay baray mei pooch rahay ho?

Ar: Mom mujhay ridz say badla layna hai.

Amrita:

Kiya kya hai meri beti nay jo tum ussay badla lo gay.

Ar:Woh aur ap ki beti no or never.Mom u know aj anatomy ki class mei usnay buhat zor say mujhay tang mari.

Amrita:Zaror tum nay koi shararat ki ho ge.

Ar: No mom bus mei payr say usay dekh raha tha.

Amrita:Acha kiya usnay.

Ar:Mom pehly us nay khud mera face apni taraf kiya, waisay to mei reya , tina aur jeeya ko dekh raha tha.

Amrita:Arman sudhar ja, ja  kay change kar kay a ja.A baghan tu hi is ladkay ka bhala kar, yeh tu rahul aur juhi ki perchai tu dor un ki chavi tak nahi hai.

Shahank ,padma, nani, anjali &riddhimma joins the party.

Amrita: Aj tu anji aur ridz dono buhat sundar lag rahi hai.Bus meri betiyon ko kisi ki buri nazar na lagay.

An: Thanks aunty.

Ridz:Touches the feet of amrita

Amrita: Jeeti raho beta sada kush raho.

Atul enters and say aur hamesha arman say dor raho

At: namastay aunty where is arman.

Amrita:Beta woh change karnay gaya hai.

At: Mei us dekh kar aata ho (excuse me)

Amrita:Hello chitra( atul's mom) kaisi ho

Chitra: Thek ho.

Amrita, padma &chitra standing together.

Rehan: Aray arman betay aj tumhari behan ki saghai hai zara nach gaana ho jaey.

Ar: you areight dad.

Amrita: Anji, ridz ,atul come on and join the dance floor with arman

Ridz dance in the song

"Aj hai saghai sun ladki kay bhai zara nach kay hum ko dekha

kudi ki tarha na sharma tu meri gal man ja"

she dance with arman.While the anjali dance with atul on the song

"Banoo ki saheli resham ki doori"

During the dance arman push the ridz and she falls on the floor.Ridz gives a bad look to arman. After the dance ridz call arman on the garden and wet him from a basket full of water and run away

Ar: Ridz mei tunhain nahi choru ga .

Ridz: Pehlay pakhar kar tu dekhao.

Ar: grabs ridz hand and come close very closed to her.He move his lips toward's ridz checks .She closed her eyes she thought that he wants to kiss her .But he is whisperring her ears kal mei tumhain is ka jawab do ga just wait and watch tommorow.

 

I hope that u like this part.Please post the comment if u like it.

Precap:

 ridz and arman go to date.

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omg soooo good
plz continue today

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thanks 4 realli update..urs realli very nice
plzzz continue soon Smile Big smile

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PART 3:

Next morning:

As usual arman go to the gupta residence to pick ridz and anjali for the college. He enters in the gupta's house.He namastay padma and asked her where is anji and ridz.

Padma: They are in their room.

Ar. Aunty mei abhi un say mil kay aata ho.

Arman enters their room . Anji is almost ready but ridz is combing her hairs.He moves towards ridz and pulls her hair and puts small quantity of oil in her hair .She hits him with the comb.Arman smiles.

An: Ridz are u ready

Ridz: Yes di

Ar: Let's go

After picking atul they reached college .At the e4nd of the class arman says

Ar: Aj tum log akelay ghar chalay jao.

An:Aj tumhain mera kay sath date par jo jana hai.

Ar: Yes my dear.

Ridz: It's o.k hum chalay jaen gay.Let's enjoy your date.

Ar: Chalo mei tumhain drop kar don meri jaan.

An: Arman don't flirt with ridz.

Ar: cheay mamdam hum ap ko drop kar daytay hai.Waisay bhi hum ap kay payr mei pagal hai.

At:Arman yar tu anji say dor rah. WEaisay hum say teri aadaton say waqif hai

An: You are right.

Atul whispering in arman ear.

At: Arman anji kay sath romance mat kiya kar yad rakh woh sirf meri hai arar tujhay romance karna hai to ridz kay sath kar na meri anjali kay sath nahin.

An: yeh tum log kiya khusur phusur kar rahay ho

At: kuch nahin anjali.Anjali kiya tum meray sath date par jana pasand karo ge.

An: ya sure why not.

Arman's phone rings

Ridz: Par di mei kis kay sath ghar jao ge.

Ar:Meray sath jan-e-man kiya hum mar gaye hai .Waisay kiya aj tum meray sath date par chalo ge.

Ridz: Par tum aj mera kay sath date par janay walay thay na.

Ar: Nahin mei kal jao ga us kay sath. Actually us ka hi phone tha aj usay kuch kam tha is liay woh nahi a sakay ge.

Ridz: Arman kiya ladkiya tumharay liay timepass hai .

Ar: yes my darling ladkiyan tissuepaper ki tarha hai use kiya aur pheka.Yar mosamo kay sath girlfriend bhi to badlni chaheay.

Ridz: Arman sudhar jao.Kabhi tum is kay sath kabhi us kay sath.Kisi kay dil ko khelona mat samjho.Dil totnay ka dard kiya hota jab payr mei tumhara dil tootay ga tab jano gay.

Ar: Arman ki dictionary mei payr nam ka koi shbd nahin hai.Arman or payr no or never.

Ridz: Waqt badaltay der nahin lagti.

Ar: Waqt bhalay badlay par arman kabhi nahi badlay ga.

Ridz:Dekhna tmhari zindagi mei koi zaror aaye ge jo tumhain badal jaey ge.Payr buhat jald tumhari zindagi mei dastak day ga. aur dekhtay dekhtay tum badl jao gay.

Ar:Woh waqt kabhi  nahi aaey ga.

Ridz: Shart laga lo.

Ar: done

Ar: chalen

Ridz: kahan

Ar: Date par

Ridz: Let's go.

 

This the the third part .I hope u like it .

please post comments if you like thos part.

PRECAP:

Arman still flirting inthe restuarant infront of ridz.

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nice part do update soon Embarrassed

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soo good...actulli ridz is rite
plzz continue sooooooon Smile

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Posted: 09 March 2008 at 9:46am | IP Logged
wow yaar its superb
toooo good,awesom,mindblowng prt
ar ki dict.mein pyar naam ki cheez nahi hai it ws too good yaar
realy i lvd hm so mch d way he flirt nd fght wth ridz ..........cnt wait fr ur nxt prt superb grt job cont soon............
dekhna ridz se pyar ho jayga fir gana gayga PYAR TO HONA HI THA HAHAHAHAHAH
yachna Big smile

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