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        JAB PYAAR KISI SE HOTA HAI

 

Let me first give you an intro of all my characters in this story...

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ANGAD KHANNA: He is a popular rock star. He is 24 yrs old. He is very handsome and a great flirt, but he loves his family a lot. He is living in Mumbai.

KRIPA SHARMA: She is a sweet simple girl of 21 yrs. She owns a play school in Shimla and also teaches there. She is the daughter of a rich businessman in Mumbai. She finished her studies in Mumbai.

KARTHIK KHANNA: He is Angad's elder brother.He lives in Shimla

RAHUL KHANNA: He is the son of Karthik.. Angad loves him a lot.

MISHTI KHANNA (BOSE): She is the childhood friend of Angad. She is married to his brother Karthik.She also lives in Shimla with Karthik and Rahul.

PRITHVI BOSE: He is Mishti's younger brother.He is 24 yrs old. He is also Angad's childhood friend. He works in Mumbai with his mother.

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PART-1

It was morning 6.30 am. The fresh morning sun was visible through the window of the bedroom. Angad Khanna was asleep in his bed.The bedside alarm started to ring.

A:(eyes still closed)Oh….hmmmm…(hand fumbles for the alarm and puts it off)

After some time his mobile rang.He took his mobile and attended the call..

A:(eyes still closed) Good morning sweetheart…(smiles)Love you darling….Hmmmm…..Sure!! Why not??I will be there by 10 o clock….Miss you….Ummuaahhh….

Then he hanged the call and slept again ……

After sometime his mobile rang again…He answers the call.

A:(eyes closed)(smiles)Kaisi ho darling…?Aaj raat ko..?Kyun nahi…..?Miss you sweetheart…Hmmmmm…..Bye…..(hangs the call and sleeps again)

After sometime there was a knock at the door…It was his Mom Naina Khanna..She had a tray with bed coffee in her hand.

N:(knocks)Angad beta….Darwaza kholo….ANGAD…..

A:(gets up suddenly)Mom!!Oh no!! Aayaa Mom……

he got down from the bed and ran to the door..He opened the door quickly..

A:(smiles cutely)Good morning Mom…..

N:Good morning beta…Here is your bed coffee….(shows him the tray)..Aur jaldi se tayyar ho jaa…

A:(takes the coffee)But why Mom?Meeting is in the afternoon na..?

N:Woh toh hai…Par tujhe gym jaana hai na..?Prithvi will come now..He had called me up..

A:(touches his head)Oh!!I forgot about it…Sorry Mom…(keeps the cup in the tray after drinking)I will get ready soon….

His Mom went downstairs..Angad started to get ready for going to the gym...He went to the gym every morning for maintaining his great body..He used to jog all the way to the gym..

His Mom Naina was very strict in many matters but she was very sweet also.He loved his mom very much..But she was the only person whom he feared in the whole world..His Dad Dilip Khanna was a businessman.He loved his Dad too..

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Edited by hp_2006 - 27 May 2008 at 6:43am

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I like that way you set up the characters in the different places! Clap So AK will meet through Rahul...Good start! Smile


Edited by Koyi Si - 08 March 2008 at 12:29am

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gr8 intro and awesome part.


~Sana~

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great start.
do continue

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loved it.....cont. soon Big smile

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LOVE IT!!!!!! I love kids too!!

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PART 2

{{RECAP:Karthik comes to Kripa's playschool for admission of his son,Rahul}}

Angad was sitting in a restaurant with a girl. She was wearing a miniskirt and a spaghetti top.Both of them were looking into each others eyes..

A:Sonia….You are so beautiful Sonia….
S:Oh!!really?
A:Hmmm…Tumhari yeh aankhen..Yeh naak..Yeh hont…Sab kitne khoobsoorat hain..
S:(smiles)Waise tum bhi kuch kum handsome nahin hai..
A:(holds her hand which was on the table)Oh..Mera kya Sonia…?Tum jaisi ladki ko mujhse bhi handsome ladka mil sakta hai..
S:Oh!!Don't be so modest Angad..You are a popular rockstar and who am I?
A:Tum mere liye sab kuch ho Sonia…
S:Really Angad…?


Suddenly his phone rings..He picks up the call..
A:Hello Prithvi..Kya baat hai yaar?
P:Tum kahan ho..?
A:Main restaurant main hoon..Sonia ke saath..
P:Angad..Tum bhi naa..Will you ever get tired of hanging out with your girlfriends..?Try to come soon..I will be waiting for you at your music academy..Meeting ke liye jaana hai na..?
A:I know yaar….Ok dosth..I will be there in 30 minutes…Bye..
P:Bye..
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All the children were playing with some or other toys in the classroom..Kripa was walking between them and was watching them play..She felt really delighted when she answered their various questions and cleared their doubts..
She reached near Rahul who was playing with a small toy car…

K:(bends down)Rahul..Aap ko cars pasand hai..?
R:Yes M'am..Mujhe saare gaadiyan bahut pasand hain..
K:But which is your favourite..?
R:Hmmm….(thinks)Mere chachu ke car…(excitedly)It is a red car…and you know M'am…its top is open too…(YOU KNOW ANGAD'S CAR)
K:Oh,well…Nice!!

Then she goes to another kid…

K:Arre Kiran..Aap kya kar rahe hain?
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In the evening :

Kripa was sitting on a sofa, watching television..She was watching the news...

News reader :ANGAD KHANNA ROCKS AGAIN…The popular rockstar of Mumbai, Angad Khanna ,performed a music show in the J.K grounds yesterday.

And a clipping of his performance was shown in the T.V..

K:I just hate this Angad Khanna..What does he think about himself..?

NewsR:Let us hear what his fans want to say to us…

Fan1:Oh!!I just love Angad..He is so handsome, and well he is really talented..
Fan2:Angad is the best…!!
Fans group:We all love Angad….Angad Khanna Rocks….!!
Kripa gets irritated with this and she changed the channel..She began to watch a music channel..
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It was night and Angad was in his car with a hot babe, who was wearing a black colour dress. Angad was wearing a black sleeveless hoodie jacket and jeans..He really looked hot….

A:Hey Sam, you really look great today..
S:(smiles)Thank you Angad…

The car stopped in front of a discothque.. Angad got down and opened the other door of the car..Sam got down and both of them went into the discotheque.

Both of them danced together and started to get intimate with each other…

A:Sam, shall I get you a drink?
S:Sure..I would like vodka..

Angad went to the counter..

A:Two vodkas please….
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The time was 11 pm…Angad dropped Sam at her apartment….

S:(leans to the car's window at Angad's side)Thank you Angad(gives a short kiss on his lips)Would you like to come to my apartment…
A:No Sam..Not today…Mom will be waiting for me sweetheart..
S:Awww!!So sweet of you boy….(pinches his cheeks)
A:Bye sweety….(with a flying kiss)

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Everybody was having breakfast at the Khanna house…

D:Angad beta..Yesterday night Karthik had called up…
A:Oh!!Is it Dad??Kya kaha bhaiyya ne..?
N:Woh keh raha tha ki Rahul tumhe bahut miss karta hai…Hum ne Rahul se bhi baat ki…He was telling that he started to go to a nearby playschool..Mishti was telling that he liked the school very much..
A:Oh!!Even I also want to see Rahul….Kitne din hogaye usse milke…
N:You are not having any shows or meetings this week na?….Kuch dinon ke liye tu Shimla kyun nahin chale jaate…?
A:Wow..That's awonderful idea..!!
D:Haan..And you ask Prithvi if he also wants to come..
N:Haan..Prithvi would love to see Mishti…
A: (calls Prithvi)Hello Prithvi…Today I am planning to go to Shimla…Are you coming with me yaar..?
P:Wow!!I will also come…Mishti mujhe kayi dinon se bula rahi hai…
A:Ok Prithvi…You get ready…We can leave in the afternoon…Bye….(hangs the phone)

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END OF PART 2..... SO FRIENDS..TELL ME HOW IT WAS...SHOULD I CONTINUE??...PLEASE REPLY...
THANKS!!

With luv,
Naina Smile
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Posted: 10 March 2008 at 5:36am | IP Logged
Friends....I will be able to update the remaining parts only after this month...Please forgive me...Lots of work to doooo....Thank u for liking my fanfic... Smile

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