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FF-Mera Pehla Pehla Pyar:::FINISHED (Page 3)

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ok i 'll wait fr ur prt .......
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nice ff interesting Smile Smile ya lets play bb Smile
cont super soooooooooooooooooonnnnn
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contd from chap 2

They had a free period after lunch."Let's go to the basketball court guys!"atul suggested."good idea atul!"anjali said.a slight blush appeared on atul's cheeks."hey ridhima....u coming?"rahul asked ridhima.
"no thanks guys"ridhima said"i need to do some studying"
"it's a pity" said Armaan"i thought i would beat you again at basketball...but if u don't want to cum's ok...let's go guys"
As they were about to leave ridhima said "Armaan!"
"dekh...mera bina ek pal bhi nehi reh sakti"Armaan whispered to atul. "yes ridhima??"he then said to ridhima."i will not let you live in this misconception that u are better at basketball than me! i challenge you to a one-on-one match...nd this time you will be disqualified if u cheat..these ppl will look into that u dnt cheat!"ridhima said."you wanna beat me sweetie?"armaan said in a rough-and-tough manner"you won't be able to!" "we'll see to that"ridhima said.

Edited by ro_armaanlover - 08 March 2008 at 10:31pm

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A few minutes later,Armaan was swiftly dribbling the ball.whenever ridhima got close to him or tried to take the ball away from him,he shifted the ball so rapidly that it was very tought to even spot the ball. SOOn,armaan scored two hoops.Ridhima got very angry"you can't beat me you jerk!"she exclaimed.armaan was dribbling the ball when ridhima flew across the court,swerved to the side and soon,armaan found the ball slipping from his fingertips...ridhima had scored!

Ridhima took the rebound...she was dribbling quite fast..she span the ball to her left and strutted across to the hoop....she scored was a tie!

Armaan took the rebound this time..he now gave RIDHIMA NO CHANCE TO GET HOLD OF THE BALL..he swung the ball left,then right and was about to score when something went wrong eith his eyes.A peice of dirt had got caught between his eyelids which blurred his vision.all he could see was a faint splash of blurred colours..betwen this colours..he saw the steady figure of ridhima coming at him...he couldn't maintain his balance and fell to the floor with a thud.."ouch!"ridhima screamed and fell on top of him..suddenly a strange feeling came over armaan.he somehow felt very conscious..ridhima was so close to his body that he could sense her slow breathing fall on him. her eyes seemed really deep and beautiful to him suddenly..he became aware of her beauty and also became immersed in her for the moment.he kept staring at her when atul called "foul!"
armaan snapped out of his reverie and soon realised what he had done..the game was completely out of his hands now..ridhima had got a penalty and he was sure ridhima would score and she wud tease him for the rest of his life. ridhima got up and helped him up.

it was time for her penalty."concentrate ridhima...this is your only chance of winning" rishima told herself.
she dribbled the ball slowly...came near the hoop and scored....just then the bell rang...indicating the end of the free period...."I WIN"ridhima exclaimed with sheer happiness and joy!
"congrats ridzie"anjali said and hugged her...then,all the people started congratulating her.

armaan,stood at a corner and startedcursing himself for what had happened...but somehow..he couldn't stop think about the moment when ridhima had fallen on was the greates feeling he had ever experienced...was this the beginning of love??

Edited by ro_armaanlover - 08 March 2008 at 10:31pm

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hye plz continue soon
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thank u soo much 4 commenting guyz...this is being flooded with comments...thanxx guys!

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