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Posted: 16 years ago

 

Chapter 3

     I leave college and remembering how Angad was talking to me and sitting with me in all the classes we have, maybe he it's just a bet or maybe he doesn't know what happened in the party.

     I go home and see that dad is there watching TV. "Hey Kripa! How was college and what about yesterday, your first day?" he asks. I just ignore him and go upstairs to my room. He sighs and starts to watch TV again. I know I shouldn't be like that but if I do he might ask questions and I don't have any answers for them now.

     The next day, while parking my car, Angad comes and starts talking to me. "Hey! What's up?"  he says. I just walk straight to the entrance of the college. "Well that's good and I'm fine to. Thanks for asking" he says with fake enthusiasm. I want to laugh at this but I just keep on walking and he keeps on talking. After a while he gets annoyed and grabs me " What's wrong with you…I am talking to you and your just ignoring me huh what the f*** is wrong with you don't you have any manners that when someone is talking you could just say hello or something but now you stay quiet and alone. I have no idea why I pitied you but really you don't need pity your just like that. Let me tell you something Miss. Whatever Your Name Is you need help I don't know what happened to you but get help before something bad happens to you" he screams. I just stare at him and I know that my tears are ready to burst; I bite my lip that is bleeding now, and great my tears are rolling and before I know I am running to the bathroom and crying. It's not that Angad was yelling at me but in a way I felt that someone cared about me but he doesn't know what happened to me. He doesn't know the truth that the way I am is not because that was the way I was but I was turned like that because of person.

Thank you guys for the comments. I am so sorry that I couldn't contiue because I was busy and will be so I don' t know when I will post next time. I am really sorry but please comment me negative or postive they make me want to keep on writting. Thanks

~Mani~

 

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Posted: 16 years ago
nice part...
i wonder what happened in the part
continue soon
sidra01 thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
fascinating fic loved it all feel so bad for kripa depressing but loved it
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey great part..can't wait to read more.. πŸ‘
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Posted: 16 years ago
gr8 part πŸ‘
wonder what happen at the party πŸ˜•
com kripa a hot guy pitied on u aleast u should hi πŸ˜†
cont soon 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
nice part
but i am waiting 4 trhe mystery 2 unfold...
continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
nice part loved it can't wait to know angad's reaction on kripa'so outburst well hope you cont soon 😳 πŸ‘
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Posted: 16 years ago
nice part
i want to see what will kripa do now at Angad's accusiations...
continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
nice i havent actually read the book but i'm sure you'll do justice to it.

Angad just randomly came up and started screaming at her- i think that scared me a bit, lol.

ps. could you make the writing a little smaller please.
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Posted: 16 years ago
interestin -- !!
wonder wat hppnd at the party--
newez-- gr8 stuff --
cant wait to read the nxt part :D