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Originally posted by tisha

Neha
excellent flow.just loved it.
But if I am allowed to critique, I see some glimpses of the actual KYPH story line here. Amit giving Neha a hand when she sprains her ankle Wink

Whose Neha? and Yes, ur are allowed to crique! Di, did you forget my name??LOL

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Posted: 09 September 2005 at 10:57pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by tisha

Originally posted by jenny1000

Originally posted by tisha

Neha
excellent flow.just loved it.
But if I am allowed to critique, I see some glimpses of the actual KYPH story line here. Amit giving Neha a hand when she sprains her ankle Wink

Whose Neha? and Yes, ur are allowed to crique! Di, did you forget my name??LOL

Sorry Sweetu,

Its almost midnight on Friday. What do you expect?Dead

I was busy teaching my kid to dance for the upcoming Durga Puja celebrations.

 

No probs.Embarrassed

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Posted: 09 September 2005 at 10:59pm | IP Logged

Jens...I am waiting to learn about more chemistry!!where are u????Its been couple of hours..the reaction should be all set to go and its ur time to write the report yaar...Wink

SmileAnamikaSmile

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Posted: 09 September 2005 at 11:04pm | IP Logged
im not sure if i read it but cont soon jenny im loving itClap

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Chemistry: Part 5

Angry Iqbal, Sweet Neha

The next day, Neha's ankle is swollen but she still manages to come to work. Iqbal is standing there with his bag talking to some peon when his eyes catch Neha. Neha is wearing a black pant and green top. She is holding onto her bag as much as possible. Before Iqbal could help her, Neha fell down once again. Amit rushed to her side and gave her a hand. Iqbal was angry. "Neha, you have to be careful, lean onto me" replied Amit with a smile. Neha smiled at him. Iqbal was turning red and red. Just then someone called Amit and he had to leave for a while. Iqbal stared at Neha angrliy and left her there to rot. Neha was shocked at Iqbal's behavior and tried to get up by herself but her pain was too much. Iqbal turned back and saw her stuggling. He went upto her, grabbed her bag and lend her his hand. She grabbed it and Iqbal escorted her to her makeup van. Iqbal was about to leave when Neha told him Thanks. He looked at her and went away. Outside the van, he smiled a bit. Neha got her makeup ready and then there was the trip to Goa.

Goa: fun and laughter

The KYPH team set out with their crew and the cast : Amit, Iqbal, Survana and Neha out to Goa to shoot the Rabba Rabba scene. On the way to Goa, The KYPH took a bus instead of Plane. In the bus, the crew members are talking. Amit grabs the backseat and reads , Love Story by Erich Seghal as he needs to finish the book. Survana is late and is talking to Jaya regarding something. Neha gets on and takes the window seat. Iqbal comes on and stares at all seats and sees Neha sitting and listening to her ipod. He sees Amit doing something with his seat and bags the chance and sits next to Neha. and Amit grabs the whole back seat to himself. Survana comes on and realizes that the bus is full. She sees Iqbal with Neha and is angry. She sees Amit on the back seat sleeping. She only sees one seat and that is next to the driver. Survana gets the seat and then... the driver bores her towards Goa.

In Goa, the KYPH arrive at their hotels and into their rooms. Amit and Iqbal share a room and Neha and Survana have seperate rooms. Survana is getting ready and then she phones Iqbal. "Hello?" "Hi Iqbal, the shot is an hour, why don't we explore Goa after the shot?" "Okay, that's fine" replies Iqbal and shuts the phone. Just then Amit complaints about the shower not working. Iqbal is frustrated. Amit on this stand calls up Neha. "Hello?", "Hi Neha, amit" replies Amit and Iqbal stares at him. "Hi amit, what's up?", "The shower here doesn't work, can we use yours?" Neha hestitated and said Yes. Amit gave Iqbal the good news and they went on to Neha's room witht their bags. Amit took a shower first and was singing.. Kal Ho Na Ho.. in his own voice. Iqbal was telling Amit to hear and not to sing. Neha was re-tapping her tapes onto her ankle when she fell down the bed in reach for something and Iqbal grabbed her. The eye shot was fantastic, it was something never before seen. Amit just then came out and saw them in the awkard postion and just then Miss Survana also saw them. Iqbal then took a shower and so did Neha and then they went on their shooting.

Cupid strikes?

The Rabba song is fantasticly shot and Iqbal and Neha sizzle with their chemistry. The beautiful beaches of Goa add a depth into this passionate love story

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After the shot,Neha, Iqbal, Survana and Amit go out to eat some dinner and explore Goa on their own. While Iqbal and Amit run to get ice-cream, Survana talks rubbish to Neha. "So, you finally got what you wanted huh? "What does that mean?" "Oh come on Neha, you gold digger, You got Amit and Iqbal, wah, I should take lessons from you" "Survana!" Neha raised her hand up but Survana held her arm. "I am not Iqbal, who gets fooled, I am more smarter, but I have to admit, Iqbal is so sweet, he listens to me but not you.. You're a born loser Neha and You're also a bloody B*****. " Neha was shocked and ran out crying. Iqbal who had been watching this was shocked and Amit also heard it.

Consoling??

Amit went to where Neha was sitting and he gave her some confort and then they hugged which was seen by Iqbal ragging his face up. He was shocked. He didn't know why he felt bad, but he just did.

Preview: Iqbal gets sick;)

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Posted: 09 September 2005 at 11:32pm | IP Logged
wow Jenny,

It is awesome fan-fic. I simply loved it. You have to continue soon. I just can't wait.

I don't where you get these ideas, but I love it. You're brilliant writer, you have vivid imagination.

Brilliant work! Clap

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Posted: 09 September 2005 at 11:39pm | IP Logged

Ur lab report is rocking Jens!!!..Are u all ready to set up the next chemical reaction???Wink

LOLAnamikaLOL

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