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Vinzy

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Vinzy

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Posted: 24 February 2008 at 4:16am | IP Logged

Hi friends.........

Just imagine this is your diary..........So how you write your  Imaginations /Views / Fantacy/feeling about a Person / place /Friend/ family etc!!

just write it here!!!!!!!!!!

Eg:-Let me quote old one...Smile

First year*+*

As I sat there in English class,
I stared at the girl next to me.
She was my so-called 'best friend'.
I stared at her long, silky hair, and wished she was mine.
But she didn't notice me like that, and I knew it.
After class, she walked up to me and asked me for the notes she had missed
 the day before. Handed them to her.
She said 'thanks' and gave me a shake hand. I want to tell her,
I want her to know that I don't want to be just friends,
I love her but I'm just too shy, and I don't know why.

Second year *+*

The phone rang. On the other end, it was her.
She was in tears, mumbling on and on about how her love had broke her heart.
She asked me to come over because she didn't want to be alone, so I did.
As I sat next to her on the sofa, I stared at her soft eyes, wishing she was mine.
After 2 hours, one Drew Barry more movie, and three bags of chips,
she decided to go to sleep. She looked at me, said 'thanks' and gave me a kiss on
the cheek.
I want to tell her, I want her to know that I don't want to be just friends,
I love her but I'm just too shy, and I don't know why.

Last year  *+*

The day before prom she walked to my locker.
"My date is sick" she said, "has not gonna go" well,
I didn't have a date, and in 7th grade, we made a promise that if neither
of us had dates,
we would go together just as 'best friends'.
So we did.
Prom night, after everything was over,I was standing at her front door step.
I stared at her as she smiled at me and stared at me with her crystal eyes.
I want her to be mine, but she doesn't think of me like that, and I know it.
Then she said- "I had the best time, thanks!" and gave me a kiss on the cheek.
I want to tell her, I want her to know that I don't want to be just friends,
I love her but I'm just too shy, and I don't know why.
A day passed, then a week, then a month.
Before I Could blink, it was graduation day.
I watched as her perfect body floated like an angle up on stage to get her diploma.
I wanted her to be mine-but she didn't notice me like that, and I knew it.
Before everyone went home, she came to me in her smock and hat, and cried as
I hugged her. Then she lifted her head from my shoulder and said -
 'you're my best friend, thanks' and gave me a kiss on the cheek.
I want to tell her, I want her to know that I don't want to be just friends,
I love her but I'm just too shy, and I don't know why.
Now I sit in the pews of the church.
That girl is getting married, That girl is getting married now.
I watched her say 'I do' and drive off to her new life, married to another man.
I wanted her to be mine, but she didn't see me like that, and I knew it.
But before she drove away, she came to me and said 'you came!' She said 'thanks'
 and a soft hug.
I want to tell her, I want her to know that I don't want to be just friends,
I love her but I'm just too shy, and I don't know why.

Years passed, ........*+*

I looked down at the coffin of a girl who used to be my 'best friend'.
At the service, they read a diary entry she had wrote in her high school years.
This is what it read:     "I stare at him wishing he was mine; but he doesn't
notice me like that, and I know it. I want to tell him, I want him to know
that I don't want to be just friends, I love him but I'm just too shy,
and I don't know why. I wish he would tell me he loved me! 'I wish I did too...'

*+*...............*+*

Post your diarySmile

just chill

vinu's



Edited by Believe - 24 February 2008 at 4:17am

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IceFire

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Posted: 08 March 2008 at 11:49pm | IP Logged
you love her? lol i'm sure it was jst a crush mate lol you've only met her for a day! anyway me i just write whatevers in my mind. i love writing poetry. for some reason i'm so good at writing but don't expect a very long one hahaha XD

IceFire

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Posted: 08 March 2008 at 11:52pm | IP Logged
by the way this poem is not yours. iu've read this poem before, i just realized lol but i can remember the story

Angeleyes 2

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Posted: 09 March 2008 at 3:11pm | IP Logged
that story is sweet and I've read it before in another sectionClap

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Posted: 13 March 2008 at 9:01pm | IP Logged
If this isn't an original story please let us know because only original stories are allowed in this forum!

*Nishi*

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Posted: 27 March 2008 at 3:05pm | IP Logged
original or not, this story is great ! its so sad too Cry thanks for posting this yaar Big smile

Mini786

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Posted: 31 March 2008 at 9:02pm | IP Logged
Sorry, this is not Original.
And Also this is a place for Storiess, this is a diary entry, makes a good story though (Again, not original) , but you made this so ppl can write there diary entries here, that is not allowed.

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