FF - Meri Doli Tere Angana LAST PART P 28 - Page 2

dont worry everythign will be fine.. i promise u all

omg .. kasamh se copied my idea..
i also amde the similair scenes.. where simran tell ruhaan she is leaving him.. for ever.. and now i was shocked seeing the same scene in Kasamh se
watch kasamh se today.. and then read my story u will fidn out.. i wil soon post the part..

remmber the story.. Ruhaan Simran are back in the hosue.. doc tells the Oberoi family that .. simran can never concieve again

aab aage !!!

 

 

Part 3.

Ruhaan and everyone is shocked hearing that Simran never will conceive

Ruhaan goes near the doc. And catchs him with his collar..

Ruhaan: its not true.. say it doc.. that its not true..

Abhishek: control ur self ruhaan plzz.. (while hold ruhaan )

Ruhaan: bhaiya look what eh said about Simran .. he is lying..

Ru's father: Abhishek take him to the room..

In abhisheks room

Abhishek: ruhaan u shouldn't have reacted like this..

Ruhaan: the doc shouldn't have said that:

Abhishek: why would he.. infact he is the one who saved u both.

Ruhaan: no bhaiya… all I know is my Simran is all fine.. nothing has happened to her..
but all what has happened till now is due to suhana.. I wont leave her.. she will have to pay for what ever she did to me and Simran.

Abhishek: ruhaan tum aisa kuch nahin akro ghe understand.. police is there .. and they are even searching for her..

Ruhaan: bhaiya police.. no she will get punished by these hands bhaiya.. jinoon ne kabhi uisay payal di thi .. aaj wohi uisay bhairiyan pehnayen ghe

 

Ruhaan in his room

Ruhaan sits near Simran.
Ruhaan: I love u Simran, humko koi judaah nahin kar sakta.. god forbidden .. agar tumhein kuch ho jatta ho main bhi wohin dum tor deta..

At night.. Simran comes and sits beside the coach where Ruhaan is sleeping on..
Simran: Ruhaan.. (simran tries to wake the sleeping Ruhaan)Ruhaan..

He wakes up
Ruhaan: Simran (he gets up and hug her) tum nahin janti i missed u alot.. plzz don't leave me  again.. i cant live without u..

Simran: i know but u have to.. mujhe jaana hoga.. its time --
Ruhaan: what do u mean by that.. kahan ja rehi ho tum
Simran smiles and gets up.. and start walking away from Ruhaan

 

Ruhaan: Simran plzz do not leave me plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz...SIMRANNNNNNNNNNN

Ruhaan gets up.. and sees Simran is still unconscious on the bed.. he is greatful that it only was a dream.. Nothing else... he is all restless.. and goes out fo the room to et water.. when SC comes there
Chachi: Ruhaan kya hua.. tum iis waqt yahan ..
Ruhaan: woh water..

Chachi: ohh ok.. waisay if u need help plzz let me know..

Ruhaan nods with his head.. and leaves..

Chachi standing there and start smiling

Some where fare away from the city.. a car stops near lonely place..
The doc. Comes out of the car..

And goes near a person..
Doc: look I dint what u told me to do.. plzz now let go my children..
no one answers him..
Doc: plzz I beg u (doc. falls on his knees)

The person turned around.. and its no other then Suhana ..

Suhana: relax doc.. ur children are very much save with me.. don't worry I wont do anything to them.. I promise u that.. jab tak mera maqsad kamyaab nahin hota.. u will not be able to see ur kids..

Doc: plzz no .. I will leave this city but don't harm by kids.. I beg u

Suhana: thek hai thek hai.. I will call u..

The doc leaves.
Suhana: (thinking) I should have shot Simran in her head not just in her stomach.. waisay bhi.. yeh game is not bad at all..
abb I will play such a game that Ruhaan will have to come to me leaving Simran in this state..

She laughs loud..

Oberoi house in RuhSimi's room next morning

The nurse is .. There in the room … giving Simran.. Injection.. Ruhaan comes in the room.. and the nurse leave.. by asking if she can leave a little early today as her child is unwell..

Ruhaan give her the permission.. he goes near the bed.. and holds simran's hand

Ruhaan: Simran .. I miss u a lot.. phir jaldi wapas aao..

He kisses her hand. And tries to leave for the office. But wasn't able to as.. he wanted to spend some time with Simran.. but leaved when his mother came…and told him he shouldnt worry more.. God will surely help them..

He leaves.. the time he steps out fo the room, Simran start moving her hand..

 

END!!!

 

To be continued…

 

Edited by Nausheenfan - 16 years ago

it was really good san u should be a scrip writer i love your fan fic so much thnx yaara can't wait fot the next part. 😛

yeah nausheenfan gr8 job..like ur fanfic very much..so when is the next part coming...can't wait... and when i have a fanfic can i also post it here..? u don't mind right.. Edited by RuhaanSimifan - 16 years ago

well not in my fan fic.. topic..
😛

but yeah u can make a new topic.. coz it will mix up.. and it will be difficult to see whom has written what

yeah i meant as a new topic... 😃

Good Job San.... 👏
Really G8 Fanfic... 😉
When is the next part coming??Can't wait to read it...

sure u can go on.. well u can also start from where rusimi got shot

 

Originally posted by: RuhaanSimifan

yeah i meant as a new topic... 😃

wow thanx 4 liking.. the next part will be up by tonight or early 2morrow