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monikaseth

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Posted: 19 February 2008 at 11:14pm | IP Logged
 
                                              
Hi friends this is my first try to write ff, so please forgive me for my so many mistakes.

 

My first fanfic story name is kaho Na pyar hai.

 

In this story Sharma's, nanda's are staying together. They have joint business and they share very good friend ship.

 

Khanna's also a part of their friend ship, but they stay separate.

 

All 3 families like one big family. They are from one college and their wife's also as same.

 

 

This story stars from flash back very soon.

 

 I write intro part and today I am going to show my all-main lead in this story.

 

 I hope you all like this.

 

 

NITIN NANDA   62 years

 

 

NITYA NANDA   59 years

 

 

KAVYA NANDA 35 years

 

 

 

 

PRATHAM NANDA   32 years

 

 

 

 

 

 

SURBHAAN SHARMA 62 years

 

 

GAYATRI SHARMA 59 years

 

 

SUJAL   SHARMA 35 years

 

 

 

JOSH SHARMA 32 years

 

 

KRIPA SHARMA 26 years

 

 

ANJALI SHARMA 26 years

 

 

KHANNA

 

 

DILIP KHANNA 62 years

 

 

NAINA KHANNA 59 years

 

 

KARTIK KHANNA 35 years

 

 

ANGAD KHANNA 28 years

 

 

 

Some more stars Simon, as kartik would be wife

 

 

Gauri as pratham's love

 

 

Tanya as josh love life

 

 

 

 

Kashish as sujal's love

 

 

 

 

As Jodi here it is

 

Kavya anjali

 

 

 

Pratham gauri

 

 

 

 

Sujal kashish

 

 

 

Angad kripa

 

 

 

 

 

Kartik Simon

 

 

 

 

 

Josh Tanya

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Love Monika I hope its ok very soon I write more.

 

 

 

 

 

Mien kripa Sharma!  Aaj mein aap ko apni zindagi ke who beete huye pal batane ja rahi hu jinko mein kabhi nahi bhool sakti.

 

 Meri yeh kahani shuru hoti hai six saal pehle Mumbai mein!!   Jaha se kripa ne apna eak naya Safar shuru kiya tha.

 

 Meine kabhi nahi socha tha ki meri life itni jaldi aise, badal jayege.

 

 Who kripa jo sirf pyar mein wishwaas karti thi.

 

Jab usske dil ko angad ne itni buri tarah toda ki mere, ko khud ko sambhaalne ke liye apne sabhi rishtoh se door hona para.

 

Kyuki mein apno ko apna dard aur apne asso nahi dikahna cahti thi.

 

 Magar mein janti thi ki who sabhi Jo mujhe dil se pyar karte hai, iss liye UN sabhi mere iss faisle mein mera saath diya, haste huye mere ko apne aap ne door Jane diya.

 

Mein kripa aaj six saal baad apne ghar India wapas JA rahi hu, sukuun villa mein sab mujhe dekh ke waha kitne khush honge.

 

Eak ajeeb se khushi aur dar dono hi hai ki sab kaise react karenge mujhe dekh ke acha nak in 6 saalon mien sab badal gaya hai.

 

 

Thank you Faiza



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PROLOGUE

 


We see a girl sitting on her bed with her family photo frame in her hand and with one hand she writes some thing on her diry.

 

Jo usske har zakham aur khushi ki sathii rahi hai.

 

Aaj mein aap ko apni family ke sabhi member se apna rishta batane ja rahi hu.....

 

 

 

Kripa  to herself  

 

 

Aaj kitna ajeeb lag raha hai ..jaise kal ki hi baat ho jab, meine sabko apna faisla sunaya tha ki mein London Jana cahti hu apni aage ki studys ke liye.

 

 

 Kuch banne ke liye apne KO sabit karne ke liye jab meine sabse kaha ki mein Jana chati hu, toh muje kisis ne nahi roka kyuki sab yeh jante they ki mere Jane mein mere Dard ka anth hai.

 

 Mere 5 bhai itna roye kyuki who mere liye kuch nahi kar pa rahe they?

 

Per unhone mujhe apna aashirwad aur best wishes deke London bheeja.

 

 Magar like all brothers!  Meri har pal ki khabar rakhi ki mein kaise hu?  Kya kya karti hu kaha jati hu?

tippikal tru brothers I love them a lot.

 

I miss my bade papa nitin nanda!  jinko mein bachpan se hi bade papa kehti thi , & my sweet nitya mom now I miss moms  hand made food specily allo ka paratha jisske kite hum sab khoob ladte they.

 

My mom& dad dono thot gaye they, mere Jane ke faisle se per, mere papa ne mujhe kaha ki ja aur kuch ban ke wapas aana.

 

Anjali my best friend jo apne mom dad ki deth ke baad bilkul akeli ho gaye thi.

 

mere mom dad ne ussko legal tareeke se adopet kiya now she is my sister com by best friend.

 

 Ussko meri kasam ne waha roka!  Kyuki Mon dad KO apni eak beti ki jaroort thi,, waise bhi kavya bhayia usske bina nahi reh pate, yeh bhi mujhe pata tha.

 

Sujal bhayia and josh bhayia they come to settle me, and every 3rd or 4th month koi Na koi bahana bana ke muje Milne aate, bec they cant acepect ki mein ghar se door ho gaye bec of my one side love when they meet me they cry a lot.

 

Dilip papa and naina Mon or kartik bhai I miss them a lot, jo bhi hua ussmein unki koi galti nahi thi.

 

Bachpan se hi naina mom ne mujhe apni chooti bahu kaha aur mujhe mom kehne ko kaha aur mujhse wada liya ki mein unki chtoti bahu Mrs Kripa angad kahnna banuuge.

 

 Per aaj bhi yaad aata hai who din Jan mere aur naina mom ke sare sapne tooth ke bikhar gaye, lekin who aaj bhi meri mom hai aur hamesha rahege.

 

Kartik bhai he is so swee tbut verry possessive about me.

 

 Koi bhi mere KO kuch kahe who bardash nahi karte they, he saves me from every scolding.

 

Yeh mere bhai aisa hai ki issne apne khoon ke rishtey ke bhai angad se apne sare rishtey tod diye jab ussne mujhe who Dard diya.

 

 Aaj bhi who USS baat ko nahi bhoole aur angad se baat nahi karte siwyae business ki batton ke.

 

Prahtam yeh mere bhai, yeh hamesha chup rehte hai, kabhi kisis se kuch nahi kehta per who apne dil ki har baat mere se share karte hai, jab mein London aaye toh bhai ne bus yeh akha I am waiting for you jab tak tu wapas nahi aati mein apne dil ki har baat dil mein hi rakhugaa come back soon aur mujhe gale laga ke khoob roya .

 

 

Yeh hai mere sabse imp ristey jinke liye mein kuch bhi kar sakti hu.

 

Yeh mere life kuch aur log Jo humari zindagi mein aaye, jaise Tanya aur kashish aur Simon aur gauri yeh sab ab humare pariwaar ka hissa hai.

MERE PARIWAR KA PARICHAY

 

SHURYABHAAN SHARMA............ HE IS VERRY FAMOUS BUSINESS MAN. HE WORK WITH HIS CLILDHOOD FRIEND NITIN NANDA HE IS CONMPETLEY DEPENDEND ON HIS  2 YOUNG Sons SUJAL AND JOSH .

 

 

JO KI SHURYABHAN KE DO HAATH HAI. SAATH HI HAI INKI LADLI GURYIA KRIPA JISSKE PAIDA HONE KE BAAD INKE GAHR MEIN LAKSHMEE AAYE ,AISA IN SAB KA MAANA HAI .

 

 

 

HE ALSO LOVES ANJALI, HE NEVER LET HER FEEL THAT HE IS NOT HER REAL FATHER AND HE LOVES HIS WIFE GAYATRI VERRY MUCH.

 

 

GAYATRI SHARMA.................. SHE IS HOUSE WIFE AND TAKE CARE EVERY HOME MATTER NO ONE INTRUPETED IF GAYATRI SAY SOME THING ABOUT HOME MATTER.

 

 SHE LOVE ALL KIDS BUT SHE ALLWAYS HAVE COMPLAIN ABOUT KRIPA AND ANJALI ,BUT GAYTARI SAY KOI FAYADA NAHI INKE BARE MEIN BOL KE INKO YAHA KOI KUCH NAHI KAHEGA INKO  BETTER HAI MEIN KUCH KA KAHOO.

 

SUJAL SHARMA............................ M.D OF SHARMA EMPIRE EXTREMLEY SMART AND WORKOHOLIC, ALLWAYS TALK ABOUT PROFIT AND WANTS TO BECOME NO 1 BUSINESS MAN.

 

HE LOVES HIS FAMILY SOO MUCH ONLY ,ONE PERSON CAN DISTRUB HIM ANY TIME NO MATTER IF HE IS IN BORD MEATING ALSO ITS NONOTHER KRIPA JISSKO YEH PYAR SE PEENUT KEHTA HAI.

 

HE KNOWS IF HE MAKE HER ANGRY SO NO WORK FOR NEXT 1 OR 3 DAYS .HE IS IN LOVE WITH HIS SALES MANAGER KASHISH.

 

 

JOSH SHARMA................CHAIR MAN OF SHARMA INDUSTRIES, VERRY SMART AND BEST FRIEND OF ANGAD KHANNA JO KI HEARTTHROB OF THE NATION HAI.

 

JOSH LOVES SUJALLOVE KASHISH TWIN SISTER SIMON SHE IS WORKING AS MARKETING MANAGER AT NANDA INDUSTRIES.

 

 

SUJAL AND JOSH VERRY HAPPY BEC OF KRIPA THEY ENGEGE WITH KASHISH AND SIMON .SUJAL AND JOSH CALLED KRIPA CHUTKI! THE JAAN OF THE SHARMA FAMILY.

 

 

 

 

ANJALI SHARMA................. ANJLAI SHARMA KRIPA KE BACHPAN KI DOST, USSKE MM DAD KI ACAHNAK DETH NE KRIPA KO ITNA HURT KAR DIYA KI WOH BEEMAAR PAD GAYE, TAB SUYRA AND GAYATRI NE LEAGLE TAUR SE ANJALI KO ADOPT KIYA AUR TAB SE ANJALI SHARMA HO GAYE .JOSH AND SUJAL ALSO SUPPORT THEM.

 

 

NOT THEN LEASET SHAITAAN KRIPA SHARMA......

 

GUNDA NO 1 FOR ALL 3 FAMILY TOTAL CHATTER BOX HAUGHING AND TALKING HER BEST HOBBY.

 

 SHE LOVES  HER FAMILY SO MUCH, SHE IS IN LOVE WITH ANGAD KHANNA ROCKSTAR OF THE NATION ,AND SHE TOLD HIM EVERY THING ABOUT HER LIFE AS SAME ANGAD ALSO SHARE HIS ALL FEEINGS WITH KRIPA .

 

ANGAD KRIPA KI HAR BAAT MANTA HIA CAHE WOH GALAT HI KYUNA HO, WOH USSKO HURT NAHI DEKH SKTA ,ANGAD JAB BHI KOI NAYE DHUN BANATA HAI SABSE PEHLE KRIPA KO SUNATA HAI .

 

KRIPA ANGAD KO KITNA PYAR KARTI HAI YEH 3 NOO FAMILY JANTI HIA AUR, SAB YEH SOCHTE HAI KI ANGAD BHI KRIPA SE PYAR KARTA HAI.ANGAD CALLED HET MY PRIENCSS AND KRIPA CAN DOO ANY THING FOR ANGAD KRIPA MAKE PROMISS TO NAINA SOON SHE WILL BE MRS .KRIPA ANGAD KHANNA.

 

 

NITIN NANDA, HE IS ALSO FAMOUS BUSINESS MAN LIKE HIS FRIEND SHURYABHAAN IN INDIA AND ABROD EVERY ONE KNOWS ABAOUT NANDA EMPIRE.

 

HE IS VERRY LOVING DAD CARRING PERSON.HE LOVE HIS FAMILY AND SPECILY NITYA HIS BELOVED WIFE.

 

 

NITYA NANDA............SHE IS VERRY SWEET AND VERRT SOFT SPOKEN LADY ,SHE IS WORKING WITH NITIN BUT NEVER NIGLECT HOUSEOLD THINGS ,SHE LOVE HER KIDS AND SPECILY SHARMA KIDS LIKE KRIPA .

 

SHE IS PRIENCSS FOR NITIN AND NITYA KRIPA CAALD THEM BARI MAA BARE PAPA.

 

 

KAVAYA NANDA...............HE IS MAGAING DIRECTORE OF NANDA EMPIRE AND VERRY INTELLEGENT, BUT AS SAME VERRY RELIGIOUS.

 

HE ALSO LOVES HIS FAMILY AND HIS BRO PRTAHM AND HIS LADOO KRIPA.

 

HE CALLED HER PARI AND HE IS IN LOVE WITH ANJALI SHARMA ,JISSKI WAJAH SE KAYE BAAR KRIPA KO RAAT KO 2 BAJE BHI ICE CREEM KHILANE LE JANA PARTA HAI.

 

PRATAM NANDA.................HE IS VERRY DIFFRENT  MAN OR YOU SAY ULTA INSAAN ,VERRY MOODY AND ALLWAYS BECOME IRRITE WITH SMAAL THINGS .

 

NITIN AND NITYA ALLWAYS WORRIED ABOUT HIM, BUT HE IS VERRY SMART IN BUSSINESS.

 

HE HELPS HIS FATHER AND BROTHER FOR BSINESS IN ALL TERMS.HE HEVE ONLY 2 FRIEND KRIPA AND ANJALI INKE SIWA YEH KISI KE SATH KHUL KE BAAT NAHI AR PATA, YAHA TAK KI JAB USSKO APNI DREAM GIRL GAURI MILI TOH USSKO PATAYA BHI KRIPA NE.

 

 

 

DILIP KHANNA..........ONER OF BEATS MUSIC COM AND RUNNING VERRY WELL SUOL MUSIC ACADAMY.

 

 HE IS VERRY FAMOUS IN MUSIC INDUS IN INDIA BEC OF HIS 2ND SON ANGAD JO KI EAK SINGER HAI .DILIP LOVE HIS 1ST SON KARTIK ALSO HE IS WORKING WITH HIS FATHER AND VERRY SUCESSFULL.

 

NAINA KHANNA.....................SHE IS ALSO WORKING AND VERRY CARRING WIFE AND MOTHER , WHEN SHE SEE KRIPA SHE FORGET HER ALL TENSION AND PAIN.NAINA KNOW ABOUT KARTIK AND SIMON SHE ACEPET HIS LOVE BUT FOR ANGAD SHE IS VERRY MUCH SURE FOR KRIPA SHE ALLWAYS SEE KRIPA AS KHANNA PARIVAAR KI CHOOTI BAHUUUU.

 

 

KARTIK KHANNA.........................VERRY HANDSOME AND FUNLOVING GUY, HE LOVES EVERY ONE AND HE ADMIRE KAVYA,JOSH,SUJAL AND PRATHAM.KARTIK KNOW FROM FIRST DAY KRIPA LOVES ANGAD AND HE LIKE TO SEE ANGAD KRIPA TOGETHER .

 

 

ANGAD KHANNA .....................HANDSOME ROCKSTAR JISSKI EAK NAZAR PANE KO SAB PAGAL REHTE HAI ,ANGAD KI KAFI GF HAI PER HE NEVER GOSE AFTER LIMITS HE LOVES KRIPA AND SHERE EVERY THING WITH HER SPEND A LOT OF TIME WITH HER .

 

YEH HAI MERE POORE PARIVAAR KA PARICHAY JISSKE BINA MERI KAHANI ADHOORI HAI ,MEIN KRIPA IN RISHTOH KE BINA ADHOORI AUR YEH RISHTEY MERE BINA .

 

 

 

PREVIV.......PARAT 1 KRIPA BORD PLANE FOR INDIA.

 

 

Thank you Faiza



Edited by monikaseth - 16 July 2008 at 10:45am

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PART 1, 

 

 

LONDON

 

KRIPA SIT ON HER BED, AFTER SOME TIME SUDDENLY HER MOBIE RINGS TRING TRING! KRIPA JUST ABOUT TO PIK THE CALL CALL ENDED AND WE SEE KRIPA PAKING HER ALL STUFF TO SUITCASES BEC NOW SHE IS GOING BACK TO HER HOME.

 

SHE TAKE A DEEP BREATH AND SAYS I KNOW BHAI AAP HO ,AUR AAP KYU BAAR BAAR PHONE KAR KE KAAT RAHE HO. I MISS YOU 2 BUT VERRY SOON I AM WITH YOU ALL SO PLEASE WAIT FOR 18 HRS BHAI.

 

KRIPA PACK EVERY THING AND WENT TO AIR PORT, AND CHEQ IN FOR FLIGHT LUFTHANSA TO LONDON TO INDIA BSINESS CLASS   AND WAITING FOR BORDING CAAL.

 

 

KRIPA TO HERSELF .........ACHANAK JAKE SAB KO SHOK DOOGE, SAB E DEKH KE PAGAL HO JAYNEGE WOWOWO MOM MEIN AARAI INDIA I AM ON THE WAY I LOVE MY INDIA.

 

 

WE LISTEN BORDING CALL, THEN KRIPA BORD THE FLIGHT AND SETTLE ON HER SEAT, START WRITING HER DAIRY AGAIN........

 

FLASHBACK.....NOTE IN FLASHBACK HAR KISISI KI AGE 6 SAAL PEECHE HOGE.

 

WE SEE A BIG BOUNGLOW PAINTED WITH WHAITE AND PINK COLOURE PAINT, A HUGE GARDEN SOME MALI WORKING ON THERE SUDDELY ONE LADY COME AND CALL SHE IS NITYA................

 

NITYA ,,,,,,,,MALI KAKA JARA POOJA KE PHOOL TOD KE MANDIR MEIN RAKH DEEIYE ,GAYATRI NECHE AATI HOGE AUR SARI TAITAARI KAR DI AAP NE ARTI KI NAHI.

 

MALI KAKA........ BHAURANI SAB HO GAYA HAI, JAKE DEKH LO BUS PHOLL LEKE AATA HU AAP CHALO ANDAR.

 

NITYA .......THEEK HAI KAKA JALDI AAYEYE.

 

NITYA GAHR KE ANDAR JATI HAI ,WAHA GAYATRI MANDIR MEIN AAKE BHAGWAAN KO PRANAAM KARTI HAI SAATH HI NITYA BHI ,AUR PHIR HUM DEKHTHE HAI KI 2 MALE PERSON PEECHE AAKE KHARE HOTE HAI WOH NITIN AUR SURYA HAI.

 

THEN GAYATRI START SINGING BHAJAN

 

OM JAI JAGDISH HARE SWAMI JAI JAGDEESH HARE.

 

SCENE SHIFTED TO OTHER ROOM WE SEE SUJAL AND JOSH AND KAVAYA CO MING DOWN, WHILE COMING THEY STOP AT ONE DOOR AND SAY...................

 

JOSH ............KYA KEHTE HI UTHEYE ISKO KI MAZA LE AAJ ISSKO DAT KAHTE DEKHNE KA.

 

SUJAL ..............REHNE DE YAAR, WARNA PITWAAYEGA KYA WAISE BHII AAJ ISSKO NAI TANG KAR SAKTE AAJ OFF MEON ISSO MERE SAATH REHNA HAI CHAL, AAJ UTHATE HAI EAK BAAR AUR.

 

KAVYA.........ARE AGAR PEENUT KO  PATA CHALA NA KI HUM LOGO NE ISSKO NAHI UTHAYA TOH HUM GAYE KAAM SE ,ARE ISSKO TOH UTHANA HI PAREGA WARNA PEENUT HUM 3 NOO KO UTHA DEGI CHALO UTHAOO KHUMBHKARAN KOOOOOOOO.

 

THEN THEY BOTH ENTER THE ROOM! WE SEE PRATHAM SLEEPING VERRY WELL AND SMILE A LOT WHILE SLEPING.

 

JOSH......DEKH JARAA KAISE SAPNE DEKH KE MUSKURARA RAHA HAI.

 

KAVYA....... KYA KISMAT HAI YAAR ISSKO DEKH KE MUJHE BHI NEED AA JAYGE DOOBARA.

 

SUJAL............. CHUP KAROO DONO, UTHAOOOO ISKO WARNA HUM LOGO KI BHI WAAT LAGEGE.

 

 THEN THEY ALL 3 TRIYING TO WALE UP PRATHAM.

 

PRATHAM.................KYA HAI MOM SONE DOO NA ABHI KYU UTHA RAHI HAI AAP.

 

 SUJAL MOM KE BACHHE UTH WARNA PITEGA AAJ MON SE PHIR SE ,BUT PRATHAM NOT RESPONDING SO JOSH AND KAVYA TOOK A JUG FRON BED SIDE TABLE AND POORE ALL WATER TO PRATHAM, HE START SHOUTING WHAT THE HELL YEH KOI TAREEKA HAI NEED SE UTHANE KA.

 

SUJAL.............. KUMBHKARAN KO AISE HI UTHAYA JATA, JALDI CHAL TERI WAJAH SE HUM BHI MAAR KAHAYNEGE.

 

AFTER THET ALL 4 ABOUT TO GO DOWN SUJAL SAYS INKA KYA KARE? THEN WE SEE OME BIG ROOM PINK COLOURE PAINTED AND 2 BEAUTIFULL GIRLS SLEEPING PEACEFULLY.WE CANT SEE THE FACE BEC ITS COVER WITH BLANKET ITS NON OTHER KRIPA AND ANJALI.

 

JOSH,KAVYA .PRATHAM SAYS TOGETHER LEAVE IT BHAI HUM JA RAHEHAI NA , INKO CHIAN SE SONE DO MERI GURIYA KO USSKE SAPNE SE MAT JAGAOO PLEASE,ALL 4 LAUGH AND WENT DOWNSTAIR FOR MORNING PRAYER .

 

 

 

WHEN THEY REACH THERE NITYA ASK SOMETHING FROM KAVYA AND SUJAL.

 

NITYA........BACHHI KAHA HAI?  USSKO NAHI UTAHYA AAJ PHIR.

 

SUJAL.............. ITS OK MOM, HUM SUMBHAAL LENGE DONT WORRY.

 

KAVAYA .............RELAX MOM WAISE BHI HUM HIA NA YAHA, AUR PEENUT AARAM SE SO RAHIA HAI MAN NAHI KIYA UTHANE KA.

 

NITYA........... BIGAAR DIYA HAI TUM SAB NE MIL KE USSKO, AUR WOH BHI KAM NAHI HAI TUM SAB KO AAD MEIN HAMEHA BACHA LETI HAI.

 

NEXT ..........POOJA END'S AND GATAYRI SCOLDING EVERY ONE BEC OF SPOILIG KRIPA..............

 

 

 

Thank you Faiza



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SOUNDS INETRESSTING Smile Smile . WAITING FOR TEH NEXT PART Wink Wink Wink

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Like the intro, and concept. Can't wait for you to continue Smile

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very intereasting begining can't wait for the next part Clap Clap Clap

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PART 2

 

AFTER FINISHING AARTI, GAYATRI STARTING DISRTIBUTE PRASAAD TO EVERY ONE AND SEE LIKE EVERY DAY KRIPA AND ANJALI MISSING AGAIN.

 

GAYATRI TO SUAJL ....KAHA HAI TUM SAB KI LADOO RANI? AAJ BHI WHO NAHI AAYE POOJA MEIN?

 

SUJAL ….     MOM AAP ROJ EAK HI SAWAAL KARTI HAI ,JAB KI AP JALTI HAI KI WHO SUBAH NAHI UTH PATI, AUR HUM MEIN SE KOI USSKO FORCE NAHI KAREGA UTHNE KO ,SO PLEASE KAL  SE NO JHAGRA OK LOVE YOU MOM.

 

ISSE PEHLE KI GAYATI KUCH KAHE PEECE SE AWAAZ AATI HAI ……………

 

LET HET ENJOY MAA, ABHI MASTI AUR APNE MAN KI NAHI KAREGE TOH KAB KAREGEE, SO CHALO PRASAAD DO AUR HAA HUMARI GURIYA KE LIYE BACHA KE RAKHNA .

 

ALL JOSH AND PRATHAM OR KAVAYA SAID TO GAYATRI.

 

BIGAAROO KHOOOB BIGAROO TUM BAAP BETE MILKE SAB USSKO PATA NAHI KYA HOGA USSKA BHAGWAAAN JANE SASURAAL MEIN KYA KAREGE ?

 

JUST THEN SOME ONE SAID WAHA BHI WAHI KAREGE JO YAHA KARTI HAI. HE IS KARTIK HE TAKE BLESSINGS FROM ALL ELDERS AND HUG TO ALL BROTHERS.

 

NITIN AND SURYABHAAN GOSE TO GET READY FOR OFF BOTH LADIS WENT FOR THEIR WORK ARRENGING BREAKFAST.

 

SUJAL , KAVYA, KARTIK,PRATHAM,AND JOSH WENT UPSTAIRS AND ENTER KRIPA'S ROOM ,WHEN THEY ENTER THEY SAW ANJALI READY TO COME DOWN ,SHE HUG ALL OF THEM AND GO DOWN TO HELP HER  MOM.

 

THEN WE SEE A SWEEET LITTILE KRIPA SLEEPLING LIKE DOLL, SUDDENLY SHE START SHIVVERING BEC OF HER BLANKET FAAL DOWN ,ALL OF THEM RUN TO HER AND  COVERD HER FROM BLANKET AND KISS HER ON FORHEAD .

 

 THEY ALL TURN TO LEAVE THE ROOM, A SWEET VOICE COME I LOVE ALL.

 

"MY SWEET BHAYIA" THEY ALL TRUN AND SEE KRIPA OPEN HER ARMS  ,ALL OF THEM RUN TO HER AND HUG HER AND TELL HER TO GET READY AND JOIN US FOR BREAKFAST. SHE NODDED AND GOSE TO WASHROOM.

 

ALL FAMILY MEMBERS'S SITTING ON ONE BIG DINNING TABLE.

 

JUST THEN KRIPA COME DOWN SHE IS LOOKING STUNNING, SHE IS WEARING PINK SALWAAR SUIT WITH LOTS OF BALGLES AND SMAAL BINDI ON HER FOREHEAD.

 

KRIPA HUG ALL ELDERS AND GOSE TO GAYATRI AND HUG HER FROM BEHIND  ,AND SAY AGAIN ANGRY MOM ?GAYATRI TUM SE NARAZ HOKE WORLD WAAR KARANHI HAI KYA ,ISS GAHR MEIN AGAR TUM KO KUCH BHI KAHA TOH TUM JANTI HO KYA HOGA ,CHALO AB MASKA MAT MAROO AUR NASHTA KAROO.

 

KRIPA SAY TO GAYATRI I LOVE YOU MOM.AFTER FINISH BREAKFAST KRIPA SEARCHNIG ANJALI, BUT KRIPA CAN'T SEE HER ANY WHERE.

 

 

JUST THEN SUJAL SINGS

 

SUJAL……..  PYAR KIYA TOH NIBHANA IS BAHI PYAR KIYA TOH NIBHANA.

 

JOSH…….. PYAR KIYA KOI CHOORI NAHI KI IS PYAR KIYAAAAAAAA.

 

PRATHAM………… YEH PYAR HUMEIN KISS MOD PER LE AAYA YEH DIL KARE HAYE.

 

KARTIK…… PYARKIYA NAHI JATA HO JAYA HAI DIL DIYA NAHI JATA KHOO JATA HAI .

 

 

KRIPA ARE CHUP KAROO APP SAB, AUR YEH KYA GAA RAHE HO YEH KAVYA BAHIYA AUR ANJALI NAHI MIL RAHE HAI?

 

 AUR AAP LOG BATAO NA KAHA HAI YEH DONO?JUST THEN KRIPA HIT HER AND SAY I AM SOOOO STUPID KAHA HOGE MUST BE WITH KAVAYA .

 

THEN ALL 4 POINT FINGER TO KAVAYA ROOM AND KRIPA RUSH TO KAVAYA ROOM AND SLOLY OPEN THE DOOR AFTER SEE ING SCENE KRIPA START BLUSSING ,AND SLOLY CLOSED THE DOOR AND COME BACK TO GANG.

 

BEFORE GOING DOWN SHE RECAAL WHAT SHE SEE IN SIDE……………

 

KAVYA & ANJALI KISSING EACH OTHER.THEY ARE SOO BUSSY THEY CANT SEE KRIPA STANDING KRIPA THERE, SLOLY CLOSED THE DOOR AND COME BACK AND SIT WITH THEM WITH OUT SAY ANYTHING.

 

THEY ALL SURPRIED, KRIPA VERRY COOL AND NORMAL, THEY THING SOMETHING WORNG WITH HER JUST WANT TO ASK HER WHAT HAPPEN?

 

 KRIPA START CRYING JOSH RUN TO HER, AND ASK HER WHAT HAPPEN WHY ARE YOU CRYING?

 

 WITHOUT BLINKING EYES SHE SAID TO ALL OF THEM, SHE FOUND HER LOVE BHAI KAVYA BHAYIA KE SAATH WHO BAHUIT KHUSH RAHEGE WHO USSKO KHOOB KHUSHI DENGE TAKI JO ANJALI NE PEECHE KHOYA  WHO SAB BHOOL JAYE .

 

THEY ALL HUG HER AND SAY YES HE LOVE HER SOOO MUCH ,DON'T WORRY HUM HAI NA BEC THEY ALL KNOW ANJALI KRIPA KE LIYE KYA MAYANE RAKHTI HAI.

 

KRIPA WAITING FOR ANJALI AND KAVYA FOR 1HR. BUT BOTH ARE SOO BUSSY AND NOT COME BACK FROM ROOM KRIPA SAID TO ALL OF THEM AB BAHUIT HO GAYA YEH DONO KYA AB BAHAR AAYENGE BHI YA NAHI ,WAISE BHI MEIN IN DONO KO NAHI CHOODNE WALI ?

 

ITNI BARI BAAT IN LOGO NE MERE SE CHUPAYE AUR SPECILY ANJALI NE IN DONO KO AB APNE PYAR KA IZHAAR POORE GHAR KE SAAMNE KARNA HOGA NAHI TOH MERA NAAM KRIPA NAHI,AUR AAP LOGO KO MERI HELP KARNI HOGE SAMJHEEE.ALL NODEED YES MAM.

 

KRIPA DIAL SOME ONE NO AND SAYS KAHA HO TUM? KYA BAAT HAI GHAR KO BHOOOL GAYE HO GHAR KO CHODO MERE KO TUM KAISE BHOL SAKTE HO ? BOLTE KYU NAHI KAHA HO KAB AA RAHE HAO AB BOLO BHIIIIIIIIIIIIIII……

 

NEXT PART ...ANGAD'S ENTRY AND KRIPA'S PLAN AND FIGHT WITH ANGAD

 

 

Thank you Faiza

 



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