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omg Ouch Cry Cry plzz continue soon

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26javey

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Posted: 17 March 2008 at 1:43pm | IP Logged
really nice but sad at the same time Cry

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Posted: 17 March 2008 at 1:47pm | IP Logged
great update but really sad Cry ..plzz u have to continue this soon!!

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Posted: 20 March 2008 at 7:11pm | IP Logged
Guys jus to warn you... pls do have some tissue around coz this next update is going to be a dard bhari update... and if u don't have even one tear.... that means my writing is horrible ( be honest i won't mind, it'll jus make me more determined to write better) so ready for part 12....

Recap

Malika accepts kanya as her bahu

Kanya tells Ranbir the engagement will be pretence

Kanya has an accident and miscarries

Part 12

D: We have to operate on her... I'm sorry but due to the injuries to her abdomen... we couldn't save the child... we are operating to remove the placenta...

Ranbir stands there shocked Confused Cry ....

R: kya... par doctor...

D: i'm sorry i have to prepare for the operation.. pls complete the formalities...

Ranbir walks to the reception desk in a daze....

RE: can i help u sir?.... sir.... sir....

R: huh... oh yes i need the forms for kanya Nanda...

RE: sure here they are... please fill them out....

Ranbir stands there filling out the forms and doesn't realise he's crying until Cry Cry a tear falls on one of the forms. He wipes his tears and finishes filling the forms as he turns he bumps into....

KC: sorry...

R: its ok...

KC: aap teekh hai... are u ok?

R: yeah yeah...

RE: Dr aap ka intezaar ho raha hai....

KC: kaun hai... pls quick muje details do

RE: patient hai Kanya Nanda...

KC: Shocked Nanda... u mean Krisnakant Nanda...

RE: i dunno... but here it says husband Ranbir Nanda

KC: ShockedOMG krish uncle ke bte hai... i'm goin...

RE: lekin...

Dr KC rushes to the operation theatre... while ranbir is aimlessly pacing the floor...

R (thinking) Kyun... kyun meri kanya ke saath ye saab horaha hai... pehle rape aura b jab mei use thodi si khushiya dena chata hunt oh ye accident... woh bacha hamara tha... kitne sapne the meine.... kyun...

M: ranbir...

R: mom....

Ranbir rushes into his mothers arms and cries Cry Cry Cry ...

M: bas ranbir... agar tum kamzor parjaoge toh Kanya aur tumhare bache ka khayal kaun rakhega....

R: Cry Mom... Mom... woh... woh... Bacha... Hamara Bacha ab nahi hai... Kanya miscarried mom... accident ki wajese woh margaya... mom... kanya bilkul tut jayegi...

M: ShockedKYA... Ranbir tum chinta mat karo... ab hame kanya ke liye strong baana parega...

Harry, Natasha and Riya come running down the corridor...

N: woh kaisi hai?... Ranbir... pls batao na...

R: woh operation theatre mei hai...

N: Cry uska baacha... woh nahi bacha... i can feel it... lagta hai jaise meri jism se kisi ne kuch china hai...Harry humari kanya...

Harry hugs Natasha...

H: its ok Nats... kanya strong hai... woh ye halat ka bhi samna karegi...

Riya stands in the corner listening... Cry tears rolling down her cheeks...

H: arre Riya... tum waha kyun khari ho...

Riya wipes her tears and goes to stand with them...

RI: Natasha... hum sub Kanya ke saath hai... hum use sahara denge...

N: Cry Cry lekin tum kanya ko janti ho... woh apne aap ko blame karegi... aur phir rape ka gham kya kam tha kea b use ye gham se bhi guzarna paraha hai... aur kitna dukh sehpayegi... muje to lagta hai ke Kanya ki kismet mei sirf gham hi likha hai....

R: nahi... Kanya ki kismet mei badlunga... agar bhagwan se larna parega toh mei larunga... ab kanya ko sirf khushiya milegi... aur hum sab usse sahara denge...

As time goes by they all wait sitting and pacing waiting for the doctors to come out... after 2 hours...

M: arre Karishma tum...

KC: hi aunty... sorry hum iss circumstances mei mile hai...

M: pehle kaho... kanya teekh hai...

KC: surgery successful tha... ab sirf ye dekhna hai ke woh kitne waqt ke baad hosh mei aati hai... jitni jaldi itna acha hoga....

R: lekin koi aur injuries...

KC: Ranbir... hum physical injuries toh sambhaliye... lekin emotional aur psychological injuries usse severe depression mei jasakti hai... dekhna ab ye hai ke woh is situation ko kaise handle karti hai... aap sub log ko usse behad pyaar dena hoga...

H: thank you doctor... hum Kanya ko pyaar denge aur sahara bhi....

KC: Take care... agar kuch bhi ho... reception ko kehna muje page kare...

M: ok beta... thanx...

R: when can we go see her?

KC: abhi woh recovery mei hai... jub woh ward mei shift hogi tub tum log jasakte ho...

Dr. KC departs with kanya's case weighing heavy on her mind.... while the rest all wait for kanya to be shifted to the ward.... after another sluggish hour kanya is finally shifted to the private ward.
They all go and sit in the room until the nurse comes and tells them that they need to leave...

R: aap log jao... mei yaha bhet tha hun...

H: Ranbir tume araam ki zaroorat hai... mei hoon....

R: nahi... ab mei kanya ko nahi chodunga.... agar park mei uske saath jata to ye sub nahi hota.... mei yaha rahunga ....

M: teekh hai beta... harry tum log chalo... agar kuch hoga ranbir hame phone kardega...

Harry goes and kisses his sisters forhead...

H: Cry i love you lil sis...

Natasha whispers into kanya's ear...

N: Cry don leave me... i love u... come back please...

Riya jus stands there watching kanya with tears in her eyes... Cry Cry Cry

M: hum chalet hai... mei driver ke saath khana bhej ti hun... aur haan tume khana parega...

R: ok Mom...

They leave and ranbir goes to sit with Kanya... he picks her hand...

R: ye dusri baar hai ke tum hospital mei ho... lekin iss bar pata nahin tum hamare paas wapas awogi yah nahi... lekin mei boldeta hun...tum muje chorkar nahi jaa sakti... mei tume jane nahi dunga... agar tum muje chod kar gayi to mei tumhare piche awunga... Pls Kanya utho naa... Apne ankhe kholo naa... pls kanya mei marjawunga... pls kanya pls.... Cry Cry Cry

Ranbir breaks down and cries with his head on the bed next to kanya Cry ... On the other hand Kanya wakes up and hears someone crying Cry Cry Cry ...

K: mei... mei...

R: Kanya... (shouts) Nurse she's awake... Kanya tum teekh ho naa....

The Nurse comes in and behind her KC...

KC: Ranbir pls bahar jao...

R: Confused lekin...

KC: its ok Ranbir... hum check up kar rahe hai... jub batawungi usse mei tume bulalungi k

R: ok...

Ranbir goes out...

K: doctor mera baacha?

KC: kanya... first let me do ur obs ok...

KC does the obs and records her finding on the chart....

KC: Nurse go call Ranbir...

The nurse goes and ranbir comes in... he goes and sits next to kanya and picks her hand...

KC: mei batawun... ya tum batate ho...

K: ranbir kya huwa... mera baacha... pls batawo muje...

R: woh tumhara baacha... woh...

KC: i'm sorry Kanya you have miscarried... because of the accident u miscarried

K: Angry Angry NAHI... NAHI... tum log sub jhoot bol rahe ho...

R: Confused nahi kanya... sub saach hai...

Kanya is getting hysterical with everyword...

K: Angry Angry Cry no... no... get out chal jao... mei soch tit hi ke tum mere dost ho... lekin itni giri huwi harkat... tum to dushman se bhi bhatar ho... JUST GET OUT...

Ranbir is distressed by seeing Kanya like this... he doesn't know what to do...

KC: Ranbir chalo...

R: lekin...

KC: chalo ranbir....

They both go out of the room... and stand outside the room

KC: jo muje daar tha woh huwa ... Kanya shock mei hai... aur disturbed hai... woh itna saara gham uske ander rakha hai... kea b woh aur gham nahi seh sakti... aur ye ek bohot bara khatra ban sakta hai... ab woh chilla rahi thi lekin ek waqt aise bhi aasak ta hai ke woh khamosh parjaye aur baat hi na kare... humme ye avoid karna hoga at all costs... aur mei janti hun ke tum usse pyaar karte ho... lekin uski jurwa behen ko phone karo aur usse bulalo... kyunki wohi ek insaan hai jo kanya ki thoughts janti hai... woh log ke connection strong hai... aur hum aise hi kanya ki madad kar sakte hai...

R: Confused ok lekin woh teekh hojayegi...

KC: woh sirf Allah ko pata hai... jo uski marzi... lekin mei poori koshish karungi...

R: thank you... mei Natasha ko abhi phone karta hun...

KC leaves Ranbir to make the call... after a few mins
Natasha comes back...

N: kya huwa?

Ranbir relates the episode to Natasha and she is shocked...

N: mei ander jati hun...

Natasha goes in the room...

N: kanya...

K: Cry Cry Nats dekho na ye log keh rahe hai ke mera baacha margaya... woh nahi maara... woh abhi bhi zinda hai... agar woh margaya hota to muje pata chaljata... dekho na...

Natasha can't stand seeing her sister in this state and she goes to her and slaps her...

N: Angry hosh mei awo... ur baby is dead... margaya woh... tum pregnant nahi ho...

K: lekin... Cry Cry Cry Kanya breaks down and sobs... Natasha takes her in her arms... and lets her sister mourn for her unborn child...

N: Kanya ranbir bahar khara hai...

K: Unhappy nahi... mei kissi se milna nahi chahti... pls... khas kar ranbir se...

N: ok teekh hai... lekin woh yaha se hilne wala nahi hai...

K: pls nats... usse kaho ghar jaye... pls ...

N: ok fine... mei yaha rahungi...

Natasha goes out...

N: ranbir tum ghar jawo...

R: no.. i'm staying here

N: pls ranbir... tum yaha bahar kitni der intezaar karoge...

R: agar marte dam tak muje intezaar karna pare to mei karunga

K: kyun? Kyun itna pyaar karte ho mujse

Both Natasha and ranbir turn round to see kanya standing at the door... she looks pale Confused Confused and her eyes are emotionless...

R: Confused kanya tume aram ki zaroorat hai...

K: Angry pehle mere sawaal ka jawab do... tum ek ladki jiska rape huwa hai, jiska baacha margaya, jiske paas inti saare emotional baggage hai tum kyun isse pyaar karte ho?

R: Unhappy kyun ki woh meri zindagi hai... jo dukh usse milta dard muje hota hai... aur jo emotional baggage ki tum baat karti ho na... woh mera baggage bhi hai... woh baacha bhi mera tha... dukh sirf tume nahi muje bhi hai...

K: lekin mei tumse pyaar nahi karti... ab mere andar koi jasbat ya dil nahi hai... mei apni zindagi akele jeena chahti hun...

Ranbir knows she is going into depression...

R: Confused jee paogi? Har insaan ko kabhi na kabhi pyaar ki zaroorat parti hai...

K: Unhappy Ranbir... Kanya ne pyaar ke bhager 4 saal jeeye hai... woh puri zindaagi jee sakti hai...

KC: Kanya teekh kehrahi hai... Ranbir tum jao... ab Kanya ko tumhari zaroorat nahi...

Both Natasha and Ranbir are shocked Shocked at KC's words...

Ok guys pls pls comment... this was a long one coz i haven't updated for long.... so please please leave comments... thnx

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Posted: 20 March 2008 at 7:12pm | IP Logged
me firstCry enough of that  some more of this Unhappy  i loved it... miss dr... reverse psychology me likey... LOL it was really heartfelt fatemah baji and glad to know you think of me when writingEmbarrassed =]


Edited by dilkeroshni - 20 March 2008 at 7:28pm

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Posted: 20 March 2008 at 7:29pm | IP Logged
tat was soooo sad Cry Cry ....pls make the next one wid a happy endin...i got sooo emotional...poor rannu Cry

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Posted: 20 March 2008 at 7:33pm | IP Logged
dude
that was so sad
plz update soon
i wanna c RK together again!!!!! Cry

26javey

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Posted: 20 March 2008 at 7:54pm | IP Logged
really sad Cry Cry

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