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great update..plz continue soon

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hey, i just caught up with your fan fiction story. and i love it. and i also read your other ff story radio rankan and that one is gr8 and plzz update it soon

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lol.. awesome dear what can i say everyone has already said it.. pls do continue soon Clap

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Ok Part 11 is here....

Recap...

Ranbir and Malika v Shanaya and Krishnakant

Ranbir vows to make kanya happy

Kanya meets Ranbir's mom

Part 11

K: aap ranbir ki maa hai?

M: haan beta... mei Ranbir ki maa hun... muje sari asliyat pata hai...

K: mei ranbir ko aap se ya uske parivaar se dur nahi karsakti... aapko to malum hai ke ye incident ke baad koi bhi ladka mere haath thamne se inkar karega...

M: lekin mera beta tumse saacha pyaar karta hai... aur woh tume aur tumhare bache ko apna na chahta hai....

K: lekin....

M: muje kuch nahi suna... mei tume apni bahu baneke rahungi... beta jo tere saath huwa isme teri koi galti nahi... aur tumhare saath mei bhi hun... ranbir hai... tumhara parivaar bhi hai... tum kyun itna fikr kar rahi ho....

K: aunty mere mama aur papa ko nahi bata... Harry aur mei uk jakar unhe tab batayenge....

M: oh... teekh hai mei tuhamre mummy papa ko yaha bulawungi... aur hum tumhare aur ranbir ki shaadi ki baat karenge aur is hadse ki bare mei bhi bataenge... aajse tum meri bahu nahi meri beti ho... aur mei apni beti ko insaaf dilakar rahungi...

K: lekin...

M: lekin vekin kuch nahi... Ranbir bata raha tha ke wknd ko tum log party dene wale the?

K: Haan aunty...

M: Aunty... mummy bolo

K: haan mummyji...

M: teekh hai iss wknd nahi lekin next wknd zaroor ye party hogi...

Ranbir sees them talking and walks up to them...

R: mom... Kanya...

M: acha beta ab tum dono bate karkar sab kuch teekh kardena... aur haan Ranbir... Kanya ko waqt ki zarrorat hai... shayid tum ek ladka banker uski jasbat aur feeling nahi samaj paoge... lekin koshish karna ke tum dono ke beech mei koi na aye...

R: teekh hai mom...

M: acha mei jarahi hun...

Kanya stands up and touches malika's feet... malika hugs her and kisses her on the forhead...

K: bye mummyji

M: bye beta...

Malika leaves and Ranbir and Kanya sit on the bench...

K: tere papa...

R: nahi mere papa ko mei handle karunga

K: lekin Ranbir...

R: Kanya mei mere papa ka beta hun... woh apne hi pero par apna business empire khara kiya... humare paas bohot paise hai... lekin jub me ibis saal ka tha meine soch liya ke mei apne hi pero par khare hokar dikhaunga ke mei kaam nahi... tab meine sab kuch... mere papa ka business, paise, sub kuch tukhradiya... woh muje dhamki ya ultimatums nahi de sakte... agar woh muje ghar se bhi nikala mere pas ek ghar hai mere pas ek naukri hai... aur agar tum meri saath hogi to muje aur kuch nahi chahiye... mom ko koi rokpayega nahi... woh jab bhi chahe woh hume visit kar sakti hai...

K: lekin ranbir woh tumhare parivaar hai... agar woh nahi hote to tum nahi hote... hum kyun ye nahi karte... hum pretend karte hai ke hum engaged hai... jab alab pakra jaye ga tab mei wapas UK chali jawungi.. aur tum apne parivaar ke paas...

Ranbir looks away because he is hurt... he realises where Kanya is coming from... but how to make her understand that he loves her...

R: Kyat um pretend karpaogi... mei tume saaf saaf boldeta hun... mei koi pretending nahi karunga... mei bikul serious hun aur agar tum pretend karna chahti ho to teekh hai lekin jab alab jail ke peeche hoga ye sagai tume torna parega kyunki mei nahi torunga.... mei tumse pyaar karta hun aur apne parivaar ko hamare beech ane nahi doonga...

Ranbirs phone rings....

R: haan mom... teekh hai... mei use kehta hun... ok mom... bye...(he hangs up and turns to Kanya) aaj raat tum aur harry hamare ghar are hai ho...

K: kya lekin kyun?

R: pata nahi lekin mom ne harry se baat karli...

K: ok... mei hotel jarahi hun...

R: chalo...

K: Nahi Ranbir... muje thora waqt akele mei guzarna chahti hun...
Ranbir is aching but he lets her walk away. Ranbir sits on the bench thinking about Kanya... Tanha from Ghayab Playing.... Tears are rolling down from ranbirs eyes...

Scenes flash back from the past starting from their childhood...
Dil Ki Zameen Pe Ek Haseen Chehra
Saaso Ke Paas Hai Zindagi Ke Jaisa
Dil Ki Zameen Pe Ek Haseen Chehra
Saaso Ke Paas Hai Zindagi Ke Jaisa
Aankhon Ke Tale Diya Sa Jale
Akele Guzara Kiya Jayena
Tanha Ab Na Raha Jaye Tanha
Tanha Ab Na Jiya Jaye Tanha
Tanha Ab Na Raha Jaye Tanha
Tanha Ab Na Jiya Jaye Tanha

Scenes of them together before they break up and the break up scene Ranbir gets up and starts walking aimlessly

Ujli Se Raaton Mein Baton Ki Khushbo Hogi
Gayegi Phir Sari Khamoshiya
Jhilmil Si Rimghim Si Chupke Se Tu ayegi
Mitjayegi Ek Din Yeh Duriyan
Jeena Hai Sada Ab Tere Bina
Akele Guzara Kiya Jayena
Tanha Ab Na Raha Jaye Tanha
Tanha Ab Na Jiya Jaye Tanha
Tanha Ab Na Raha Jaye Tanha
Tanha Ab Na Jiya Jaye Tanha
Scenes of Kanya when she comes on the tour... how they get back together... the happy and sad moments flash back....
Ranbir starts walking towards the car park...

Aankhon Hi Aakhon Se Dekha Hai Chukar Tumko
Resham Se Bhi Zada Naram Ho Tum
Boondo Ke Jaise Tum Is Dil Pe Barsi Ho Tum
Hoto Pe Aayi Jo Pyaas Ho Tum
Seene Se Lage Aur Tu Bhi Kahe
Akele Guzara Kiya Jayena
Tanha Ab Na Raha Jaye Tanha
Tanha Ab Na Jiya Jaye Tanha
Tanha Ab Na Raha Jaye Tanha
Tanha Ab Na Jiya Jaye Tanha

Ranbir gets to the car and see's his face... he wipes his tears... just as he's about to enter the car he hears the squeal of car breaks and a thud... he turns and see's that someone has been hit.... being a first aider he rushes to the scene of the accident and finds....

R: KANYA....

Ranbir rushes to where Kanya is lying... there is blood everywhere.... ranbir picks her up and takes her to his car and puts her in the back seat.... he drives to the hospital like a lunatic.... and carry's her in

R: DOCTOR... KOI HAI... HELP....

The nurse rushes and they put her on a stretcher and wheel her to the examination room.... Ranbir calls his mom and Harry... just then the doctor comes out....

D: We have to operate on her... I'm sorry but due to the injuries to her abdomen... we couldn't save the child... we are operating to remove the placenta...

Ranbir stands there shocked....

Ok guys tell me what you think.... pls pls do comment.... i would really appreciate it... thnx



Edited by KC294 - 17 March 2008 at 12:16pm

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Posted: 17 March 2008 at 12:22pm | IP Logged
OMG Cry poor
kanya.. and ranbir.. the loss of a child is quite traumatic.. i hope ranbir helps
her through it.. it was great i love mallika she is the best.. it was awesome

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Posted: 17 March 2008 at 12:27pm | IP Logged
omg tht was so touching....do cont soon! Embarrassed

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Posted: 17 March 2008 at 12:49pm | IP Logged
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!
so cute....both od them!
plz cont soon!
i dont think i like ranbir's father Confused

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