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FFTo love or not to love.pt20 pg 22 31/10 (Page 7)

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ok guys bohot intezar karwaliya.... this will prolly be a short one....

Recap
Kanya breaks up with ranbir
Riya writes a mysterious letter to kanya

part 9

Kanya calls Riya and tells riya to come down. riya comes and see's that kanya has been crying.

Ri: kanya kya huwa?

K: Riya woh woh Cry Cry Cry mei aur ranbir... hum shadi nahi kar sakte...

Kanya pours out the whole story to Riya and riya gives her a hug. Kanya cries and then after crying she pulls away and wipes her tears.

K: tume kuch kehna tha muje...

Ri: nahi... woh kya hai... shanaya aur harry...

K: oh haan sorry...

Ri: koi baat nahi... ab tum sojao...

K: lekin....

Ri: lekin vekin kuch nahi... tume aur chotu ko araam chahiye... ab jao sojao...

K: ok madam... mei jarahi hun...

kanya goes to sleep and riya sleeps on the couch.
the next morning kanya wakes up and goes to the park for a walk. she sits on the bench and there she starts to remember ranbir. she starts to cry Cry Cry Cry A couple who has come for thier morning wak stop and come an sit on either side of kanya

Woman: kya huwa beta?

Kanya looks startled...

K: kuch nahi...

Man: toh tum kyu roh rahi ho?

K: woh uncle...

Woman: batao beta... kya huwa

Kanya pours the whole story to these two strangers...

Man: Kya... aur tum ye expect karti ho ke woh ladka ka parivaar ye bache ko except kare...

Woman: Krish chup... bechari itni thokre kha chuki hai... zara daya karo is par...

Man: kya woh tumhari bahu banti...

Woman: haan kyun nahi... bechari ki galti kya thi... ke woh uske dost ke ghar jara hi thi... ya phir ye ladka jisne uska rape kiya usse na lafz samaj nahi ata...

Man: uske daman me daag lag chuka...

Woman: aur aap ki beti hoti toh?

Man: usse jala kar mar deta...

Kanya gets distressed and can't stand it

K:STOP... PLS JUS STOP IT... meine ye kahani isliye nahi batayi ke aapke ke beech mei galat femi peda huwe... uncle agar aapki beti hoti toh aap us ladke to doond kar mardete... kyunki aap ki beti masoom hoti... aur sawal bahu bane ka... muje koi shok nahi... aunty thank you for understanding... aap jaisi maa har beti ko mile....

Kanya walks away and goes back to the hotel...

coming up

K: aap...

Woman: Haan mei... Mei hun malika ranbir ki maa

pls comment i know its short... inshallah i plan to do a longer one soon thanx to all those who comment... pls i would realllly appreciate it if u commented....

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great update..im eagerly awaiting the next longer part! lol..plzz plzz continue soon Smile
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hehehe i loved it what can i say yaar its short but its awesome lovely and that man is soooo meaaan.....=[
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really nice
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cant wait pls continue
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hey
gr8 part..
cont.sooon
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I would just like to say a very big thank you to all the readers... you are what makes the ff writers want to continue... without your comments and encouragement we wouldn't be writing. So thank you. Here is the long update i promised you.... enjoy and pls comment.... i think its long... Wink

Recap
Kanya tells riya that her and ranbir are over
Kanya meets a strange couple at the park

Part 10

Ranbir is at home waiting for his parents to come home from their morning walk. He is sitting in the lounge when they enter arguing

M: aap bhi na... kyun us ladki ki dil tora... pehle se pareshan thi woh

Kr: meine... job hi kiya hai usne kiya hai... woh to is society mei ek untouchable hai...

M: Angry KRISH... uski kya galti hai... usne kya kiya?... woh toh masoom thi... ek ladki jiski izzat lootgayi... kya us ladke kya koi kasoor nahi... usne toh galti nahi balke gunna kiya hai...

Kr: us ladki ne koi mazak ya shararat ki hogi... aur ab woh iski saza bhugat rahi hai... aur kyun na buge... aur woh dusra ladka... woh ye saza kyun bhuge us ladki ke saath...

Ranbir who has listened to the whole argument instantly knows that they are talking about kanya and is disgusted with his fathers attitude.

R: Kyunki woh use pyar karte hai. Aap mere Kanya ki baat kar rahe ho. Mei use bohot pyar karta hun aur use hi shaadi karunga.

Kr: Nahi... woh is ghar ki bahu kabhi nahi banegi... ye mera akhri faisla hai

M: agar ye aap ka faisla hai to mei bhi dekhti hun kanya is ghar ki bahu kaise nahi banti... Ranbir beta hum Kanya se milne jayenge

Shanaya who has been listening to the whole conversation comes in

Sh: Nahi malika chachi... aap kanya ko is ghar ki bahu nahi banasakte... chachu teekh keh rahe hai... woh is ghar ki layik nahi hai... uski izzat to lootgayi ab hamara parivaar ka naam bhi miti mei milana chahti hai... woh Alab se shaadi kyun nahi karleti... woh ye bache ka baap hai... aur woh is sher mei hai...

R: Angry BAS... SHANAYA AB AGAR TUMNE KANYA KE BARE ME AUR KUCH BOLA TO MEI BHUL JAWUNGA KE TUM MERI BEHEN HO... agar aapko apni izzat ki pari hai to teekh hai... mei is ghar aur is parivar ko chorne ke liya tayar hun... Kanya mera pyar hai meri zindagi hai... aur ye dukh muje mardalega... agar kanya roti hai to dil mera toot ta hai... jab koi use dukh deta hai to dard muje hota hai.... meine barso pehle hamare parivaar ka paisa tukhradiya aur naukri dundhi... ab mei is parivaar ka naam tukhra raha hun aur kanya ke saath apna ghar basalunga... aur shanaya tum... tum to aurat ke naam pe a kanlang ho... ek aurat ka dard nahi samaj payi... agar harry ko pata chala ke tu ye sab kar rahi hai to use dukh hoga... tum to ek rishta bhi nahi nibha sakti aur chali patni , bahu aur bhabhi bane... chaliye mom... kanya se milne

Ranbir and malika leave a shocked shanaya and krishnakant and go to the hotel.... there they meet
Natasha and Riya. Ranbir asks them where kanya is and riya says she went back to the park because she's really upset and sad...

Ri: muje to ye daar hai ke woh depressed na hojaye...

R: nahi mei ye nahi hone dunga... Ranbir ab Kanya ki zindagi saware ga... aur use itni khushiya dunga... agar udasi mei meine uska dil tora hai to pyar mei uske dil ko aise jorunga ki saare zakhme barjayenge aur use kabhi koi dukh nahi hoga.... chaliye mom... bye guys

Malika and Ranbir leave and go to the park. Malika tells Ranbir that they should search for kanya separately as it'll be easier... Ranbir goes left and malika goes right... Both look for kanya and...

M: Kanya beta...

K: Aap...

M: haan mei Malika... Ranbir ki maa....

Kanya is shocked...

Ok guys stay tuned for the next part tomoro... pls do read my other ff Radio Rankan... i'll be updating that soon as well....

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