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Originally posted by punjabi.princes

aww great scene..plzz update soon Embarrassed

thank you... i will update tomorrow...inshallah...

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Originally posted by sejal719

that was so good plz update soon =)

thank you... i will update tomorrow... btw now go bug sara to update

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Thank you everyone who has read my ff and commented. thanks to all the silent readers. sara this ones for u... ab tumhari bari. Also check out my new ff radio rankan... and leave ur comments.

i forgot to mention that shanaya is ranbir's cousin... sorry

Ok   guys here is part 8...

Recap

Ayan comes to the hotel

Riya is in love with someone

Update 8

K: OMG HARRY HAI NA.... BOLO RIYA...

Ri: woh... kanya... i mean....

K: kyu ni bataya...

Ri: wo tum hara bhai hai... aur uski mangni hogayi hai

K: toh kya huwa... muje malum hai tum kis dor se guzar rahi ho.

Ri: thnx kanya for understanding

K: sun tonite we'll have a movie marathon... lots of popcorn... chocolate and shahrukh khan movies... jaise hum uk mei karte hai... teekh hai

Ri: lekin ... ranbir...

K: mei use sambhalungi... aur is waqt tum mere liye important ho... teekh hai to aaj raat sirf mei aur tum... aur haan sharukh khan

They both giggle...

Ri: thanx babe... tume nahi pata mei kaise feel karti hun...

K: dost ho meri to tumhare bare mei bhi sochna chahiye... vaise bhi kitni baar tumne muje cheer up kiya... aaj meri bari... ab chale khane... bohot bhuk lagi hai...

Ri: chaliye...

They both go back to the room to eat....

At lunch ranbir and kanya go out for lunch....

K: ran janu... aaj raat mei riya ke saath rahungi... i mean we are having a movie marathon... an only girls one

R: ye kya... tum dono ... bohot dull... aur mei kya karunga?

K: ranbir pls riya ek problem mei hai... aur mei use cheer up karna chahti hun... pls samja karo na...

R: teekh hai... ab tum ye chips kharahi ho ya phir mei khau?

K: hum share karsakte hai... aur ek aur favour chahiye?

R: tumhare hukum saar ankhon par

K: ranbir tu bhi... mere saath video store jaoge?

R: ofcourse jawunga... ab tum khalo phir hum jayenge...

K: thank you ranbir....

R: phir se shuru hogayi... muje tumhare saath waqt bitana acha lagta hai...

K: muje bhi Embarrassed (she blushes)

R: ab to mujko heart attack hoga... ye tumhara blush mera dil ka kya haal karti hai ye sirf mei janta hun....

K: ranbir....

They both start laughing....

In the evening ranbir and kanya are in kanya's room and ranbir is waiting for riya to come so that he can leave. Kanya is already in her pj's

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There is knock on the door...

K: lagta hai riya hai... mei jaati hun

Kanya opens the door...

K: Shanaya bhabhi aap...

Sh: Kya ranbir yaha hai....

K: haan bhabhi woh yaha hai... RANBIR

R: kya huwa... oh hi shanaya...

Sh: muje tumse baat karni hai... akele mei...

R: jo kehna hai kanya ki saamne kaho... hamare beech
koi secrets nahi hai...

K: tum dono mere kamre mei baat karsakte ho... vaise muje riya ko phone karna hai...

Ranbir and Shanya go into the bedroom and kanya calls riya but there is no answer. In the bedroom...

Sh: ranbir ye sab kya hai... Harry ne bataya ke tum aur kanya shaadi kar rahe ho

R: haan... mei kanya se pyaar karta hun

Sh: lekin... tume pata hai hamara parivaar ye bacha ko kabhi except nahi karenge... aur tum kanya ki wajese parivaar se bedakhal bhi hosakte ho

R: muje pata hai... lekin mei kanya se shaadi karunga

Sh: teekh hai... ye galti karni hai to tu kar ab mei sab ko batadungi ke tum kanya se shaadi kar rahe ho...

R: TUMHARI PROBLEM KYA HAI... TUM HARRY SE SHAADI KAR RAHI HO... AUR USKI HI BEHEN SE ITNA JUDAI

Sh: chilao mat... kanya is not pure... uske daman mei ek daag achuka hai... aur mei ye bardash nahi karsakti... faisla tumhara hai...

R: mera faisla hochuka...

Sh: teekh hai... tume jo karna tha tum karchuke... ab dekho mei kya karti hun

Shanaya walks out of the room and out of the door without saying anything to kanya. Ranbir comes out of the bedroom looking worried... as he comes out there is a knock on the door... kanya opens it... its the bellhop

BH: Maam this is for u

K: thank you

Kanya takes the envelope and closes the door she drops the envelope on the sofa and goes to ranbir who is standing near the window. From behind she puts her arms around him and her cheek on his back.

K: kya hai ranbir... tum itne pareshan kyun ho?

R: kuch nahi... woh...

K: abhi abhi tumne kaha ke hamare beech koi secrets nahi hai aur ab tum baate chupa rahe ho

Ranbir turns around and takes kanya into his arms. Her cheek is on his chest and she can hear his heart bit.

R: tum janti ho ke mei tumse kitna pyaar karta hun

K: haan mei janti hun...

Ranbir tells kanya about the argument... as kanya listens to ranbir she feels hurt and pulls away from ranbir. Ranbir holds her hand but she pulls it away...

K: shayid is mangni ko torna teekh hai... mei nahi chahti ke tum apne family se dur hojawo.

R: mei apne mom aur dad ke saath baat karunga... woh log samjenge

K: aur agar nahi samje to

R: samajna hoga

K: agar nahi samje... kya tum meri waje se apne family ko chordoge... aur phir kitne waqt ke bad tum muje resent karoge... woh tume pyar karte hai

R: aur mei tumse

K: janti hun... lekin mei apne aap se kabhi nazar mila pawungi jo tumne tumhari family ko meri waje se
chordiya...

R: kanya... pls

K: nahi ranbir... lagta hai meri zindagi mei khushiya kam aur gham zyada... pls tum jao yaha se... aur mei sabse baat karlungi...

R: Kanya pls meri baat suno

K: ranbir pls... jao yaha se...

Ranbir doesn't want to leave but he leaves... with a sad expression and tears in his eyes...
Kanya stares out of the window with tears in her eyes... when she heres the door shut she slides to the ground and sobs her heart out... outside the door ranbir can hear kanya crying and with each hearth wrenching sob his heart is shattering into a million pieces.... He walks away trying to think of a plan... he calls someone and asks them to meet him in the hotel lobby.

After awhile kanya stops sobbing and remembers the envelope on the sofa... she gets up and opens it...

Kanya...

please jab Shanaya chali jaye muje phone karna

urs Riya
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coming up

will kanya and ranbir get back together?

what is the reason behind riya's letter?

all this in the next update... i'm goin to wait for atleast 10 comments before i continue...

 



Edited by KC294 - 09 March 2008 at 5:51pm

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oh nice Wink

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Posted: 09 March 2008 at 6:15pm | IP Logged
wow.. that was very heart-wrenching but i liked it i guess this is you getting
back at me for all the suspense i put you throught.. i loved it now i can't
wait to read the next part... i hope they get back together can't wait to read
more Big smile

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great update...plzz continue soon Smile

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please continue

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#5 Big smile


itssss aweesome nd soundss rele guddddd
continueeee soon Embarrassed

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