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hey nice ff plz can u write the next part lol waiting and can't wait =)

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totaaly cool ff
Plzz continue y have u stopped
cant wait 4 the next part

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Than you all for your comments... and to all the silent readers... pls do leave your comments and a special thank you to sara who has teased us with a teaser... this one is for u sara... Big smile

Recap

Kanya's back from hospital

Ranbir and kanya go out for dinner

Ranbir proposes... and excepts kanya's child as his own

He receives a phone call

Part 7

They sit to eat and ranbir's mobile rings...

R: hello

H: hello ranbir tum log kaha ho?

R: Harry hum restaurant mei hai... ek khush khabar dena chahta hun...

H: aur mere paas ek bohot buri khabar.... ayan se mila aaj sham aur use pata chala woh shaytan alab bhi yaha hai... aur to aur woh kanya ko dund raha hai....

R: kya... hum abhi hotel aate hai....

Ranbir hangs up...

K: kya huwa...

R: harry tha... chalo hum hotel jarahe hai

K: lekin kyun?

R: kanya pls chalo...

K: nahi mei yaha se ni hilungi... tume batana hoga ....

R: teekh hai... haary ne ayan se mila aaj aur ayan yaha alab ke saath hai...

All the color drains from kanya's face...

K: kya....

Ranbir pulls kanya into his arms...

R: ha lekin tume kuch ni hoga mei aur harry hai... ab chaliye...

K: teekh hai...

Outside the restaurant a limo is waiting to take them back.

At the hotel....

H: kanya tum teekh to ho?

Kanya hugs her brother and crys

H: kanya pls maat ro... vaise bhi ranbir ne bataya ek khush khabar hai... apne bhaiya ko tumhare khushi mei shamil nahi karogi...

Kanya steps back all blushing now...

K: woh... harry... mei aur ranbir... i mean meine... mei ranbir ko shaadi ke liye haan kardi.

H: congrats... harry hugs kanya and then hugs ranbir... ab tume meri kanya ka khayal rakhna hoga... varna joker banadunga tuje...

R: mei kanya se pyaar karta hun aur mei use khabhi koi gham nahi dunga.

H: ok ok... sirf warn kar raha hun... acha mei jaraha hun... kaal hum ek plan sochenge... aur haan mei ayan ko kaal yaha lawunga teekh hai... tum logo ko pata hai
na kya karna hai...

R&K: haan harry bhaiya...

H: tum dono ko mei....

They all start laughing...

H: mei jao?

K: haan... bye love you...

H: love you too bye...

Harry leaves the room... ranbir also stands up...

K: tum bhi jarahe ho?

R: haan tume araam ki zaroorat hai...

K: pls maat jao... tum yaha so sakte ho... ranbir muje akela nahi rehna... agar alab agaya...

R: teekh hai mei yaha sojaunga

Kanya goes to change and then goes to sleep... ranbir goes to call Natasha when...

K: NAHI.... CHODO... PLS ALAB CHODO....... NOOOOOOOO

Ranbir runs back into the room

R: kanya utho... mei hun pls utho... tum ek bura sapna dekh rahi ho... utho.

K: Ranbir... kanya hugs him and crys

R: shhh baby mei hoon na... alab tume kabhi hurt nahi karega... he pulls back and looks at kanya... she's pale and he can't stand it... so he pulls her back into his arms... tume kabhi koi hurt ni karega... aur us alab ko jail me dalwakar sarne keliye chordunga.

K: Ranbir woh dangerous hai... pls

R: ok kanya ab tum sojao...

Kanya goes to sleep and ranbir sleeps on the sofa.

The next morning...

Kanya wakes up and watches ranbir...

R: Kya dekh rahi ho?

Kanya blushes

R: tum abhi bhi blush karti ho... wah... ye wohi to baat hai jo mei tumpe marta hun

K: ranbir mazak mat karo... aur vaise bhi subhe subhe itna handsome lagna gunnah hai... agar fashion police ne pakar liya toh teri kismet phootegi....

R:Kanya... tum bhi na subhe subhe itni meethi meethi baate karti ho ke mera dil kushi se mare pagal hochuka....

The phone rings to interrupt their comfortable banter... kanya picks it up

K: hello

H: tum hotel mei ho?

K: haan mei yahan hun...

H: mei aur ayan abhi bhi arahe hai....

She starts to shake...

K: ok bye

R: kya huwa?

K: harry aur ayan arahe hai

R: ok don't panic... mei apne room mei jaraha hun... jab woh dono aye to muje miscall karna... teekh hai.

K: lekin ranbir... muje dar lagta hai

R: harry hoga na aur me thori der bad ajaonga... teekh hai

K: ok

Ranbir leaves and harry & ayan come 10 mins later.
Kanya pretends not to recognise ayan.

H: kanya lagta hai kaal raat meine apna mobile yaha choda tha... shanaya to aaj meri vat lagayegi... uske texts ke jawab jo nahi diye...

K: Harry tum besharaam ho woh muje pata hai... lekin itna besharaam ke tum apne dost ki tariff bhi nahi ki...

H: sorry... Ayan ye Kanya hai... meri choti behen... aur Kanya ye ayan hai... ayan mere school ka dost hai...

K: oh haan... hi Ayan...

Ayan looks like he's seen a ghost...

A: hi kanya...

K: awo... meine abhi bhi room service order kiya hai... breakfast saath mei karenge...

The door bell rings...

K: lagta hai mera room service agaya... she opens the door... Ranbir tum...

R: kehte hai ke chocolate khakar neend ati hai... lekin yaha to opposite hora ha hai... meri neend hi urjati hai...

K: kyun

R: kyunki jab mei chocolates khata hun to teri yaad ati hai... chocolate to hai meethi... par tum to chocolate se bhi zyada meethi ho... isliye meri needh urjati hai

K: aw ranbir....

He hugs kanya and whispers in her ear

R: lagta hai jaise bhoot dekhliya... ab dekho kitna uncomfortable mei use feel karwata hun... introduce karwao na...

They both step back and go to the lounge...

K: ran darling ye ayan hai... harry ka school ka dost... ayan ye hai mera pyaar ranbir aur woh mera mangetar bhi hai...

Ayan turns even paler...

R: are agar tum harry ka dost ho to tum hamare engagement party mei zaroor ana....

H: party... kis kushi mei?

R: Harry mei tume phone hi karne wala tha par acha hai tum yaha ho... tumhari behen ne muje haan kardi... shaadi ke liye... hamari shaadi hone wali hai...

H: congrats kanya... tum itni bari hogayi... come here...

Harry hugs kanya and whispers...

H: ayan dar gaya... lagta hai woh hamari jaal mei phaschuka....

They let go of each other...

H: party ki arrangements mei karunga... yani mei aur shanaya... aur party hogi is hotel mei....

A: harry muje ab chalna chahiye... meri behen aur bhatiji mera intezaar kar rahe honge...

R: tum sab ana party mein teekh hai

A: thanks hum sub ayenge

Ayan leaves the hotel. in kanya's room

H: bewakuf kahin ka... jaal bhichayi aur phas gaya....

K: tumne ye to nahi bataya ke wo apni behen aur bhatiji ke saath aya hai

H: muje bhi aaj pata chala...

R: ab party ki tayari tum karoge right harry....

H: salla hun uska matalab ye nahi ke tum muje orders doge aur mei ek naukar ki tarha hazir hojawunga... vaise pehla kaam ye hai ke Natasha aur riya ko agha karna... phir party ki tayari

K: mei jati hun un dono ko bulana.... btw room service order karlena kyunki muje bohot bhuk lagi hai.

Kanya goes up to kanya and riya's room as they are sharing a room

N: kyun itne subhe subhe uthaya... I hope it's something important?

K: Haan important hai... pehle riya bathroom se nikle phir batati hun....

Riya comes out....

N: riya kaal raat kaha thi... itna mazaa aya... tume miss kiya yaar

Ri: woh... mein takh gayi thi... chodo ye sab... kanya tumne kyu uthaya hame?

K: ayan aur alab Nairobi me hai. Mei, harry aur ranbir ne ek plan banay hai jo already motion mei hai. Pehle ek khush khabar dena chahti hun.... mei aur ranbir shaadi karahe hai.

Natasha and Riya jump up and hug kanya tight...

N: congrats...

Ri: yaay... muje pata tha...

K: ok ok muje maarna chahte ho?

N: oh sorry...

Both riya and Natasha go and sit down. Kanya explains the plan to them.

N: toh ab hum kya karsakte hai?

K: pehle chalo mere room mei breakfast karne... aur waha details ko final karenge... ab chale

Ri & N: Haan chalo

They go to kanya's room and before they get there kanya tells Natasha to go ahead....

K: muje Riya se baat karni hai...

N: teekh hai... muje to bhuk lagi hai... aur vaise bhi ranbir ko abhi tease karna hai

K: ok tum jao... lekin itna bhi tease bhi maat karna ke woh bhagjaye

Kanya and riya go to the end of the corridor and sit on the sofa's there.

K: riya tume kya huwa hai... tum itni chup chap... aur takhan... tum to bari party animal ho to yaha kyun hotel mei behti ho

Ri: woh... kuch nahi...

K: pls batao na? Tum meri sabse achi dost ho... aur mei manti hun ke meri problems ne muje fursat hi ni di dosti nibhane ke liye... lekin pls muje batao na... kya hai?

Ri: woh mei ek ladka ko pyar karti hun... lekin uski mangni ho chuki hai... aur woh ranbir nahi hai... isliye mei parties mei nahi jaati... jab woh waha apne mangetar ke saath hota hai to muje bohot dard hota hai...

K: teekh hai lekin jab hum... yaani ke mei, ranbir, nats, harry aur bhabhi jate hai baha to tub tum nahi ati... OMG... RIYA TUM HARRY SE PYAAR KARTI HO.

Coming up....

Who does riya love? Harry ya koi aur...

Kanya and riya have a girls night in

Riya finds out something interesting...


Pls pls leave ur comments.... i would really appreciate it


Edited by KC294 - 07 March 2008 at 4:34pm

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OMG i loved it fatemah baji that is an awesome update... me thinks riya likes
harry and thank you that was for me such a long update I LOVE YOU... thank
you sooo much i'll update mine in the next twenty to half an hour.... Clap
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aww great scene..plzz update soon Embarrassed

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that was so good plz update soon =)

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Posted: 07 March 2008 at 4:42pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by dilkeroshni

OMG i loved it fatemah baji that is an awesome update... me thinks riya likes
harry and thank you that was for me such a long update I LOVE YOU... thank
you sooo much i'll update mine in the next twenty to half an hour.... Clap
Clap

ab dosti kiya hai to nibhana to parega... ur welcome... i'll update tomorrow... I LOVE YOU TOO

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