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Posted: 24 February 2008 at 2:58pm | IP Logged
Yoo ... Aww sweet ranbir
Alab ke bache teri toooooooooo
Harry Or Ranbir pieces banake grill karke dog ko khelahai ge Angry bechara dog bhi mar jahai ga
Confused
good story cont soon
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Posted: 01 March 2008 at 5:33pm | IP Logged
Sorry i haven't updated.... life is really bz at the mo... tym flies and i dunno where it goes... but here is the next bit

Guys i know ayan is supposed to make an entry but he will in the next update... together with alab...so here is part 6

Recap
Kanya tell harry, ranbir, Natasha and riya her big secret
Harry wants to kill alab
Ranbir asks kanya to marry him and she faints

Kanya wakes up after a few seconds... and everyone starts fussing

H: tum teekh to ho

R: kanya doctor ko bulawun

N & R: kanya kya huwa?

K: guys guys mei teekh hun... ek bara shock laga is liye...

R: tum sure ho na... varna mei nurse ko bulawunga

K: mei teekh hun... pls aap sab chinta mat karo...

H: kanya mei kam se off lera ha hun....

K: Nahi harry koi zaroorat nahi Natasha aur riya hai na... vaise muje is hospital mei nahi rehna... pls harry yaha se muje le chalo

H: teekh hai mei doctor se baat karunga lekin tume mere saath mere apartment par rehna hoga

K: Harry pls kyun itna ziddi behave karahe ho... LOL hotel ke paise kye asman se barish ki tara parta hai?... mei ne itni menat se kaam kiya aur ye paise save kiye... mei hotel mei rahungi.

H: acha baba Confused ... tum waha rahogi... tumhari behen aur dost ke saath.

Kanya is released from the hospital and goes to the hotel. In her hotel room there are a bunch of red roses waiting for her with a card... Kanya opens the card:

Meri Jaan,
Aaj sham hamare saath dinner karogi
Tumhara aur sirf tumhara
Ranbir
Xxx

Kanya calls ranbir and sets a date for that night. She calls Natasha, riya and shanaya to come to her room.

They all gather there.

K: kya pehnugi... omg mere paas dresses bhi nahi hai
SH: to chalo shopping

K,N&R: KYA?

K: marvana chati ho... mera bhai hum sabki chutiya kardega...

SH: woh mere upar choro... harry ko mei samjawungi... teekh hai ab chalo

All four girls go shopping... Natasha and Riya are all for a gown... while shanaya and kanya want to see a sari... so in the end they toss a coin and shanaya and kanya win. They go in search of a sari. They find the sari kanya is looking for. http://www.ladleedirect.co.uk/products/476 they go back to the hotel and kanya goes to rest.

The phone rings...

K: hello

H: kaha thi tum... itna bar tume phone kiya....

K: mei shopping gayi thi... sori tume batana chahiye tha....

H: teekh hai... vaise suna hai ke aaj raat tum dinner ke liye jarahi hun

K: haan woh... i mean ranbir...

H: pata hai pata hai... joker hai laikin acha hai... LOL

K: thank you harry... ab sirf mom aur papa ko ye baat karni hai

H: woh mei karlunga... tum apne aap ko enjoy karo.

K: ok big bro... love u bye

H: love u too bye

Kanya then starts o get ready with the help of shanya, Natasha and riya. When she is ready she goes down to the lobby.

R: wow... kanya... tum kya muje heart attack dena chahti ho...

K: Confused kya... her smile drops...

R: kanya jaan tum itni khubsoorat lag rahi ho ke meri dil ki dharkan ruk gayi... very beautiful...

He takes her hand and takes her to the horse and carriage waiting for them.

K: Ranbir... ye sab...

R: sirf tumhare liye... aaj tume pamper karne wala hun... ab chaliye

They ride to the restaurant... kanya is so happy... she feels so special.

K: Ranbir tumne itna kiya.. kyun?

R: mei tumse pyar karta hun.. aur haan tumhare chehre
par muskurahat dekh na chahta hun...

Kanya holds ranbirs hand and lays her head on his shoulder. They ride the rest of the way like that.

When they reach the reastaurant kanya is surprised as the restaurant is an open roof restaurant. There are fairy lights and candles everywhere. The artificial waterfall is lit up with different coloured lights and the restaurant is decorated with many different types of flowers. Roses, tulips, orchids, passion flowers etc. In the middle is a table with a red rose arrangement and white candles. Kanya is shocked and happy she has tears in her eyes...

K: ranbir... ye sab

R: shh jus enjoy..

They walk to the table and ranbir pulls out a chair for kanya. Ae bekhabar (Zeher) is playing in the background. Kanya can't believe that ranbir has gone to all this trouble. A waiter brings a bouquet of red roses(i love you) , ivy(wedded love, fidelity), baby's breath (happiness) and lily of the valley (sweetness and return of happiness). In the middle of the bouquet is a jewellery box....

K: Ranbir ye kya hai?

R: Kholo na..

Kanya picks the box and opens it. Inside is a diamond ring in a platinum setting. Kanya has tears in her eyes... ranbir gets up and walks to kanya... he gets down on one knee...

R: Kanya kya tum mujese shadi karogi?

K: haan mei tumse shaadi karungi... lekin baro ki ashirwad se... oh Ranbir i love you...

Ranbir makes kanya where the ring and stands up with her and hugs her. He kisses her forhead... then her eyes... then her cheeks and lastly their lips meet... ranbir feels he has come home and as the kiss deepens kanya tenses up...

R: kya huwa?

K: kuch nahi... she turns away from ranbir and is silently crying Cry ...

R: kanya meri taraf dekho...

Kanya turns and ranbir see's the tears in her eyes. He hugs hers and lets her cry. After kanya has cried he pulls away and wipes her tears away.

R: kya huwa kanya?

K: woh kya hai... jab bhi mei hamare rishte ke bare mei soch ti hun to muje daar lagta hai.

R: kyun?

K: when i think about our physical relationship... i feel dirty... mei apne aap ko ek used shirt ki tara mehsus karti hun... muje daar lagta hai... sori ranbir... lekin tume mere saath sabr se kaam lena hoga...

R: meri jaan mei sari zindagi intezar kar sakta hun... aur mei us din ka intezar karunga jab tum muj par bharosa karongi... tume mafi mangne ki koi zaroorat nahi... ab chalo khana khaye... varna hamara chota raja shikayat karega...

K: aur agar choti rajkumari huwi toh?

R: toh mei bohot khush hoga... kyunki woh bilkul uski maa jaisi hogi... wohi muskurahat... wohi ghusa... wohi ankhen... aur wohi pyaar...

K: thank you ranbir... tumne is bache ko accept karliya... thank u...

R: Kya kaha... thank u boli... sharam nahi ati... kya huwa agar mei is bache ka biological baap nahi hun... i will love him/her like my own... mei use already pyaar karne laga hun... kyunki woh tumhara hisa hai no thanks needed.... ok

K: smiling teekh hai ranbir... vaise jub tum ghusa karte ho to bohot handsome lagte ho...

R: kanya...

They go to the table to have their dinner when ranbirs mobile rings....

Coming up....

Who is on the other side of the phone call

Ayan makes an entry

Its party time...

Pls comment

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Posted: 01 March 2008 at 5:34pm | IP Logged
mee first yaaay... loll i have been waiting for this for a while and my wait
was worth while.. that was so heart touching.. ranbir is such a sweetheart..
and i loved harry's line joker hai par acha hai.. I LOVED IT... thank you soo
much and i hope nothing happens to their relationship.. =]



Edited by dilkeroshni - 01 March 2008 at 5:45pm
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Posted: 01 March 2008 at 5:51pm | IP Logged
aww it was rele cuteee Embarrassed Embarrassed
i dnt kno if i read this b4
but whos the babys daddy? Confused Confused
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Posted: 01 March 2008 at 5:55pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by miss5stars

aww it was rele cuteee Embarrassed Embarrassed
i dnt kno if i read this b4
but whos the babys daddy? Confused Confused

thnx... the baby's dad is alab... the villian who raped kanya

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Posted: 01 March 2008 at 5:59pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by dilkeroshni

mee first yaaay... loll i have been waiting for this for a while and my wait
was worth while.. that was so heart touching.. ranbir is such a sweetheart..
and i loved harry's line joker hai par acha hai.. I LOVED IT... thank you soo
much and i hope nothing happens to their relationship.. =]

thank you...Smile thnx for the pics they helped with the proposal...

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Posted: 02 March 2008 at 6:38am | IP Logged
hey
gr8 parts
cont.sooon
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Posted: 02 March 2008 at 6:44am | IP Logged
hey that was an awesome updaet..the whole romantic dinner setting was soo good and descriptive..plzz continue soon

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