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Posted: 20 February 2008 at 9:37am | IP Logged
the much awaited part 4 is here....

Recap:
Ranbir take natasha to the airport...
Harry and Kanya have an all out war at the airport...
Kanya faints and is in hospital
Ranbir know kanya is preganant but
whose child is it?

Part 4

K: Kya... tum ye kya keh rahe ho... mein pregnant nahi hun... tume koi galatfemi huwi hai...
R: Kanya tum to abhi hosh mai ayi ho.... hum sab yaha the jub doctor ne kaha ke bacha teekh hai... kya woh doctor jhoot bolega?
K: oh Shocked woh kya hai... mei... sorry ranbir tume ye baat nahi bata sakti... mere liye ye namumkin hai... pls muje force mat karna...
R: mei sab saach janta hun... woh chiti jo tumne Natasha ke liye chora tha...mere paas hai...
Kanya looks scared... kanya is wondering why ranbir has that letter... she is trying to remember what was in that letter...

Pyari Natasha...
Mei ghar wapas jaa rahi hun... jub se Alab walla incident huwa mei control mei nahi hun...daar ke maare pagal ho jawungi... muje maaf kardena... tumse aur harry se bohot pyar karti hun... lekin ab yeh musibat meri hai aur mei decide karungi kya karna hai...
Tumhari pyari behen
Kanya

kanya is afraid ranbir knows everything...
K: natasha ne kya bataya tumhe...
R: Usne ye bataya ke Alab ke saath kya huwa... dekho kanya... ab me tumhare saath hun... lekin tumne itni baari baath natasha aur riya se kyun chupayi?
K: kya baatati woh log...pehle to itna bara shock aur agar Natasha ya riya ko pata chalta toh woh dono apne aap ko maaf nahi karte...
R: Lekin kyu... woh baat muje samaj mei nahi aarahi hai... saab jaante huwe bhi ye baat chupayi tumne... kaise aur kyun...
K: dekho ranbir.. tume baata kar kya karungi..woh dono ko pata lagaya hai... beeti baate ko doh ra kar kya faida?
R: Angry DAMMIT KANYA... PYAR KARTU HUN TUJSE... AGAR PYAR NAHI KARTA TOH KYA MEI YAHA HOTA... TUMHARA INTEZAAR KARTA... KYUN CHUP RAHI HO... he calms down... mei janna chata hun... pls kanya tell me...
K: Shocked kya... tum abhi bhi mujse pyar karte ho... lekin woh din tum sheena ke saath the... aur phir...

Ranbir walks to the window before starting to speak...
R: kanya woh sirf ek plan tha... tume mujse dhur rakne ke liye... jub muje pata chala ke tum aur tumhari family videsh jarahe ho toh mera dil hi tut gaya... phir maine socha ke agar me tumhare feelings ke saath khelunga toh tum apne aap mujse dhur hojayegi aur phir mei teme hamesha ke liye bhool jawunga... lekin kya huwa ... tume itna pyaar kar behta ke zindagi jaisi teher gayi..ek din hazar saal jaise the... aur jab pata chala ke tum yaha aarahi ho apne college ke saath to maine request ki ke me tumhare tour guide banjawun....

Kanya is silent... taking everything in... with tears in her eyes she tries to get up to go to ranbir... but ranbir turns around
R: Kanya pls araam karo... tum hari halat mei ye sab nahi chalega... tume abhi hosh mei aya hai... aur mei bhi na... ye baate lekar bhet gaya... sori kaal baat karenge...
K: Ranbir pls aise maat kaho... agar tum jaante ke mei tumse kitna pyaar karti hun shaayid tum chonk jate... lekin tum teekh kehra hai hon ye waqt is baate ke liye nahi hai... mei vada karti hun ke tume sub kuch bata doongi... kaal i promise... ab tum mere saath raho... me sona chahti hun... lekin daar lagta hai... tum yaha bheto gen a?
R: ofcourse mei yaha hun... Ranbir hugs kanya and kisses her on the forhead... then holds her hand while she falls asleep... (thinking) Pata lagana hoga ke ye alab kaun hai... aur woh kaha chupa hai...

Ok guys thats it

Coming up...
Harry and Ranbir find out the truth...
Ayaan makes an entry...

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aww soo cute that there back together now! but whos alab? plzz conitnue?

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interesting....
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awesome.. glad they're back together now and the misunderstanding is cleared up.... can't wait to read more who is alab????? loved it. =]

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Ok part 5 is here

Recap
Kanya is in hospital
Ranbir admits he still loves her
Kanya tells ranbir she loves him too
Kanya promises to tell ranbir the truth

In the morning kanya wakes up to find ranbir holding her hand and his head on her bed.... kanya thinks: woh muje kitna pyaar karta hai... agar mei use saachai batayi kya tabhi woh muje pyaar karega... kya karu... batana parega... vada jo kiya hai...

R: itna subhe subhe kya sooch rahi ho?

K: kuch nahi... tum yaha soye sari raat... itne uncomfortable position mei soya mere liye?

R: tere liye to kante pe bhi solunga?

K: Ranbir (with tears in her eyes) kyun itna pyar karte ho mujse?

R: woh kya hai na... jub tumhare bare me sochta hun to duniya haseen lagti hai aur vaise bhi tum itni khoobsoorat ho ander se aur bahar se bhi... Embarrassed

Kanya throws herself into Ranbirs arms and starts crying... Cry

R: are kanya ye kya hai? Yum ro rahi ho... tume pata hai ke jub tum roti ho to mera dil tut ta hai tumhare ankhon mei ansun nahi dekh sakta...

K: jab mei tume sachayi batawungi toh shatad tum muje itna pyar nahi karoge... shayid mei tume achi bhi na lagoo

Harry enters the room before ranbir can say anything.... kanya and ranbir jump apart

H: ye kya ho raha hai?

K: Kuch nahi... woh

H: phir se tume rulaya... (turns to ranbir) Angry kyun meri behen ko nahi chor sakta ...

K: harry pls... chordo ranbir ko... woh mere saath sari raat tha... pls Harry... anyway tumhara hi intezar kar rahi thi

H: kyun?

K: tumse kuch kehna hai... ek lambi kahani hai

H: tehro... is insan se ko kaho yaha se jaye
Natasha and Riya enter the room...

N: thero harry... ranbir ko pura haq hai ye saach jana... akhir woh kanya se pyar karta hai... ab hum sub yahan hai... i think kanya should explain....

Ri: Ha Kanya ye batao tumne humse kyun jhoot bola... kya hum tumhare madad nahi karte?

K: tum sab pehle bheto phir me shuru karungi.
They all seat on the sofa's except ranbir who sits on the bed.... kanya gets up and goes to the window...

K: ye kahani us din ki hai jub me ne ye realise kiya ke meri zindagi aduri hai ranbir ke bina... uske janam din 2 week ke bad tha toh men ek card kharida aur socha ke mei use ye card beju... us din mei college se sidha post office gayi...natasha ko phone kardiya tha ke mei late hojawungi... usne kaha teekh hai... jub mene post office poncha to post office band ho chuki thi tub mene riya ko phone kiya. Meine socha ke waha ja kar mei mera dil halka karti. (Kanya stops there and takes in a deep breath... Ranbir stands up but she tell him to sit back down and continues with the story)

Ok guys sori next part is in English cos i can't see to put it together in hindi...

K: on my way to riya's house alab and his friends surrounded me....

R: ye alab kaun hai?

K: he's the bad boy of our college... he thinks he's inlove with me but he's a playboy... i hate him... anyways he and his friends surrounded me... i tried to get away but they were too many... Harry shayad tume dhukh hoga ye sunkar ke tumhara woh dost Ayan bhi shamil tha....

H: kya... kanya are u sure?

K: ha harry ayan waha tha... anyways back to the story... alab and his friends took me to a run down warehouse... aur waha... waha... (Kanya starts to shake and Natasha gets up and goes to her)

N: mei batati hun... kanya was raped by Alab... His friends stood there and watched... that includes ayan then alab beat kanya up so badly that if the old man living next to the ware house didn't hear kanya would have died.... i knew that something was wrong... and when i called kanya's phone she didn't answer.... so i called riya and riya told me she was worried as well because kanya should have been at her house by then....

Ri: thats when we both started to look for her and kept calling her phone... when the old man found her he picked her phone and we went straight to the warehouse.... (Riya starts to cry while saying) if u had seen kanya you would have died that day... they had beaten her up so badly... there was so much blood.... we took Kanya straight to the hospital...

K: (Crying) by the time we got there i had regained consciousness... the doctor wanted me to call the police and file a report... but i couldn't because alab would have gone after Natasha... and i didn't want him to hurt her the way he hurt me.... so i told the doctor that i didn't know who it was and i didn't remember anything... he also told me that i could be pregnant so i told him to call me as soon as he knew and not to tell anyone.... i stayed at the hospital that day... maa and papa were not in town for 2 weeks so by the time they came back all my bruise had disappeared....

H: Angry that Censored   i'm goin to kill him.... and ayan i thought he was my friend... he is dead too

R: Angry Harry we have to find alab.... aisa sabak sikhaenge ke woh....

K: nahi tum dono aisa kuch nahi karenge... pls mei tum dono ko kho nahi sakti... pls... Cry (she starts to cry and slides to the floor)

Both ranbir and harry rush up to kanya... who is still crying... harry hugs his little sister and crys with her... he lets her go and turns to ranbir

H: Kya abhi bhi tum hamari kanya se pyar karte ho?

R: ha karta hun... meri khushi uski aur uska gham mera... (he kneels down to where Kanya and harry are sitting) kanya kya tum mujse shadi karogi?
Kanya Faints....

Coming up...
Kanya is released from the hospital
Ayan comes to the hotel
Alab is in town....

Ok guys thats it.... pls pls comment... thnx

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Posted: 24 February 2008 at 10:42am | IP Logged
meee first.. yaaaaay.. wow.. that made me so saad.. Cry but i loved it... it brought them even more closer together.. can't wait to read more... and i hope they beat up alab.. and ayan Angry Angry .. aisa sabak mile keh woh kabhi kisi aur larki ki taraf bhi na dekhey... excellent Clap

KC294

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Posted: 24 February 2008 at 10:43am | IP Logged

Originally posted by dilkeroshni

meee first.. yaaaaay.. wow.. that made me so saad.. Cry but i loved it... it brought them even more closer together.. can't wait to read more... and i hope they beat up alab.. and ayan Angry Angry .. aisa sabak mile keh woh kabhi kisi aur larki ki taraf bhi na dekhey... excellent Clap

thnx.... lets see if alab and ayan are beaten up

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Posted: 24 February 2008 at 11:57am | IP Logged
aww that was really sad but im glad Ranbir is with her...i hope they find that Alab and Ayan and kick their ass! lol...plzzz continue soon! im eagerly waiting!

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