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its been ages since u updated
plz update soon

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Ok guys this is an extremely short update... but i have been really bz... so pls bear with me... thnx...

This is dedicated to my four lovely sisters and all my devoted readers.

Part 19

KC: what is it?

Nurse: we have a gunshot... young male... maybe 17 or 18... drive by shooting

KC: how long?

Nurse: ETA 3 mins   

KC: then lets get the theatre ready...

Just as KC is shouting instructions the ambulance arrives with the victim...

KC: james stats please...

James: he's lost alot of blood... the bullet is still lodged in this stomach.... he's arrested once already

KC: Nurse warn the blood bank that we need blood asap and to meet us up there right people lets get him up there... someone page Miq....

KC and her team take the patient to the theatre and she gets ready for surgery. Miq arrives and she fills him up on the details and they enter the theatre.

3 hours later....

KC: time of death... 3:58 am. 29th April 2008

KC went to the lockers and removed the surgery clothes. Miq comes to do the same.

Miq: Do you need me to come with you?

KC: if you want...

Miq grabs KC's hand and brings her to face him...

Miq: Do you need me?

KC looks up at him...

KC: yeah...

They both walk to the waiting room to the boys Parents.

KC: Mr and Mrs Lane I'm really sorry but we lost him. The bullet punctured his right lung and it was filling up with blood.

A scream is heard in the waiting room. Mrs Lane breaks down and Mr Lane hugs her. KC and Miq leave them to grieve in private. KC and Miq walk back in silence back to the nurses station. Miq stops to check in on his patients while KC walks back to her office and closes the door. Leaning in the door she lets go of the tears that she had been trying to hold back. It was the first time she had lost a patient in surgery.

Back at kanya's House.

Kanya: [tears in her eyes] really... tumne mere liye bheja...

Ranbir: ab rone wali baat kya hai? Mei tumse oyaar karta hun and that day the way i behaved was inexcusable. Par socho tum aur miq kitna enjoy kar rahe the aur KC ki halat kya hogi. Anyways woh choro hum hamari baat karenge.

Kanya: [looks suspiciously at Ranbir] Hamari bate...

Ranbir: Haan Kanya Saturday ko KC ki party mei hamari engagement announce hogi.

Kanya: [shocked] Kya? When was this decided?

Ranbir: today... we really need to catch Alab.

Kanya: but... but... I don't think i can cope...

Ranbir: we are all with you. Kanya i am with you. I'll keep you safe. [he walks to her and pulls her into his arms.]

Kanya: [Lays her head on Ranbir's chest listening to his steady heart beat] I love you Ranbir

Ranbir: [tears in his eyes] you are finally home where you belong. I love you too.

They stand in the kitchen in each others arms.

Kanya: maybe we should wish KC Happy birthday

Ranbir: yeah let me call her. [ he gets his mobile fone and dials her number]

Pls comment... and i shall try and update soon



Edited by KC294 - 21 October 2008 at 6:27pm

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Posted: 21 October 2008 at 6:25pm | IP Logged
my spot.. wow its brilliant.
I loved it even though its soo short..
There is so many things packed in this update.
I cant wait to see the next part and KC's reaction.
It was a very emotion filling update baji.. I could feel the pain of KC, Miq and mr and mrs. lane.

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Edited by dilkeroshni - 21 October 2008 at 6:31pm

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Posted: 21 October 2008 at 7:10pm | IP Logged
Wow!! Awesome update!! A very emotional update!! CryI was missing this FF so thanks for updating!!! I hope Alab is punished for what he did soon!!  A sweet moment for both couples!!Embarrassed I wish it was longer but maybe next time!!Wink Thanks!!Big smile
 
 
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Posted: 22 October 2008 at 8:40am | IP Logged
great update
continue soon

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Posted: 22 October 2008 at 3:47pm | IP Logged
hmm baji whtas this so short
even thou its short its brill!
kc aww poor dear i wuld love to give her a hug..oo i cant wait for her surprise party
rankan parts were sweet!
pls continue sooon!

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Posted: 22 October 2008 at 3:50pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by dilkeroshni

my spot.. wow its brilliant.
I loved it even though its soo short..
There is so many things packed in this update.
I cant wait to see the next part and KC's reaction.
It was a very emotion filling update baji.. I could feel the pain of KC, Miq and mr and mrs. lane.

AwesomeSmileThumbs Up


Agree,
It was sad, Now I can see how hard it would be for doctors.
Although a short update it was brilliant!ClapClap


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Posted: 22 October 2008 at 6:33pm | IP Logged
i just read de whole thing nd i must say "AWESOME!! Baji u write so well....all ur ffs are so emotional and awesome.....I love Timeless Passion too!!! Please update soon...yaar!
 
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