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FFTo love or not to love.pt20 pg 22 31/10 (Page 18)

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plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update it been ages since u update this ff so update now
KC294 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 15 September 2008 at 4:38pm | IP Logged
right first of all my humble apologies to all my readers out there....
i know you guys have been waiting....
i was just bz over the summer...
anyways here is the long awaited part 18 and i shall try to update regurarly...

Part 18
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Natasha was shocked... Kanya and KC were rolling on the floor laughing. Natasha quickly went to look for Sara so she could show her what she saw.  They bumped into each other half way and Natasha dragged Sara back to Kanya's room. There they saw the two girls sitting in the floor wiping their eyes. They had 100 watt smiles on their faces.

Sara: so what has got the both of you giggling so much that you have tears in your eyes.

Both KC and Kanya turned with shock on their faces.

Kanya: Natasha...

Natasha: i thought you two were mad at each other. Me and Sara have just had a go at Ranbir and Miq and you guys are laughing here.

KC: the thing is...

Sara: yeah please explain to us why you were laughing?

Kanya: after all the plotting we did KC and I decided to plot against the boys. So thats why we are laughing. Thier faces were a sight to see.

KC: that was so funny. For i minute i thought Miq was going to land his fist on Ranbir.

Sara: so you know that Miq is in love with you?

KC:WHAT... HE'S IN LOVE WITH ME... but he;s inlove with you Sara.

Sara:  yeah i mean...

Kanya: ofcourse he's in love with Sara...

KC: so why did u say that?

Sara: KC i meant something else... anyways we told the guys they are not allowed to come to the hospital.

KC: yeah tune kya kiya... Miq ki to chute hojayegi....

Kanya: aur mei Ranbir ko dekhe bina....

Natasha: its your own fault

Sara: now face ur punishment...

With that Sara and Natasha walk out grinning leaving behind Kanya and KC shocked.

As Friday dawns there is a panic among Sara and the birthday planning gang. They all meet up Java coffee house to finalise the last details of the party but since Ranbir is not allowed to see Kanya both of them miss the meeting.

Harry: Natasha kyun na hum Kanya aur Ranbir ki engagement party saath rakhle,

Natasha: agar Sara ko koi iteraaz nahi hai to yeah sure why not....

Ayan: aur hum uss alab ko bhi range haath pakar sakte hai.

Sara: alab?

Natasha: its a long story....

Natasha relates the story to sara and they work out how they are going to carry out their plan.

The gang spend the whole of Friday making sure all the details are carried out. Meanwhile Kanya is at KC's office having coffee with her.

Kanya: I miss Ranbir...

KC: Kanya... relax... i'm sure Natasha usse tume milne degi.

Kanya: i hope so.

As they are chatting they are suddenly interrupted by a knock on the door. KC opens the door and in come an oderly with a bouquet of white orchids.

Orderly: Dr KC these are for you.

KC takes the bouquet from him and places it on the coffee table.

Kanya: wow... its so beautiful. Who is it from?

KC: Pata nahi... there is no card.

Kanya: wow KC tumhara koi secret admirer hai

KC: kaun ho sakta hai.

Kanya: just enjoy the flowers girl...

KC: kitne khubsoorat hai

Kanya and KC enjoy looking at the flowers mean while Ayan has gone to meet up with Alab to tell him about the party.

Alab: kya... ye kab decide huwa? Mujhe laga ke woh dono alag hagaye

Ayan: haan alag huwe the lekin ab Kanya Ranbir ko trust karne lagi hai aur ye engagement phir se on hai

Alab: nahi... woh bacha mera hai... aur Kanya bhi meri hogi... jab sabko pata chalega ke Kanya mere bache ki maa bane wali hai sab usko chodenge. Muhahahahaha

Ayan: Party Serena Hotel mei hai kaal raat saat baje.

Alab: i'll def be there

As midnight approaches Miq pleads to Sara to allow him to go to the Hospital and Ranbir pleads with Natasha to allow him to see Kanya.

Natasha: ok Ranbir lekin agar usse rulaya to mujse bura koi nahi hoga

Ranbir: I love u adhi gharwali....

Natasha: ok ok... ab jaa varna who sojayegi

Sara also allows Miq to go to the hospital since she knows that KC is on the graveyard shift and that Miq plans to give her 24 presents 1 every hour. At 12 midnight he leaves a bouquet of red roses with a card saying Happy birthday

Meanwhile Ranbir goes to Harry's house to meet Kanya.

Harry: tum yaha... iss waqt?

Ranbir: kya Kanya jagrahi hai?

Harry: haan... andar awo... KANYA... KANYA...

Kanya: kyun chila rahe ho?

Harry: Ranbir tujse milne aya hai

Kanya: oh... hi Ranbir mei kitchen mei hun chalo tume coffee chahiye

Ranbir: sure...

Ranbir follows Kanya into the kitchen and his eyes fall on the burgundy orchids he sent her.

Ranbir: wow Kanya nice flowers

Kanya: yeah they are beautiful

Ranbir: kiske liye aur kisne bheja?

Kanya: ab ye mystery hai... flowers mere liye hai lekin card nahi aya... pata nahi kisne bheja hai... aur surprising baat ye hai ke KC ko bhi white orchids aaj kisne usse bheja

Ranbir: wow... what a coincidence?

Kanya looks suspiciously at ranbir...

Kanya: right spill i know u know something

Ranbir: (looking innocent) no i don't know anything

Kanya: Ranbir... i know u know... so spill who sent them?

Ranbir: Miq sent the white orchids to KC

Kanya: how sweet... i can't wait for their ghalat femi to disappear but then who sent me these?

Ranbir looks away....

Kanya: Ranbir....

Ranbir: meine bheja tume sorry kehne ke liye...

Meanwhile KC walks into her office to find a dozen red roses on her desk. She walks up to them and picks the card.

Happy Birthday it reads.

KC looks around to see if anyone is there but there isn't anyone....

As the hour passes and it gets nearer to one am KC gets a call in emergency....

okies here it is.... please comment 

Edited by KC294 - 15 September 2008 at 4:47pm

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spate22 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 15 September 2008 at 6:43pm | IP Logged
Awesome!!!  I'm sooo soooo happy that you updated!!!  Thank you so much.  I can't wait for the next part.  Please continue soon!!!Big smile
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Posted: 15 September 2008 at 8:31pm | IP Logged
KC baji u finally updated!!
anyways loved it
continue soon
patel12345 Groupbie

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Posted: 16 September 2008 at 5:03am | IP Logged
Brilliant update................................                                                                                                          Update sooooooooooooooooooooon
matwamango IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 16 September 2008 at 5:05am | IP Logged
Loved it. Can't wait for the next update.
sweet cherry IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 16 September 2008 at 6:58am | IP Logged
that was awesome
after ages u updated
continue soon

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