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bhoomikauttam

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Posted: 13 February 2008 at 12:09am | IP Logged

Hi friends,

Happy Valentines day ....in advance...I want to be the first one to wish u see..LOL

Yes, I am gogin to post my new story.. but as I mentioned in the heading..it has a poetic touch... all my readers must have seen that in my stories  comes few poetic lines. (dont know thet can be called poetic? or not) so this time as my mood told me..why not write poem and make it a story..

Yes, u got it write... there will be poetic lines and that will take u through the story(hope this section allows thatlol)... poem will be tooo long... was thinking to make it in to parts..but the continuation will be lost.. so will probabl post it in one go...

Its Bhoomi's gifts to all my readers as Valentines day arrives soon..readers who have loved my effort and appreciated it too..I have many tiems wirtten poems and they have a story in them but this one is too long..as though to make it a short story format..

Its title Pyaar hai.. and yaa its not any different story but the same routine if u want to call it..still the poetic touch will be a different experience of reading the story...The leads r ...the Tumsey Milkey story in the end had two children Parul & Rocky... yes the story takes on them...lol..

Thanks to my wonderful friends for their encouragment.... Bini, Sara, San, Nida, Vandana, Golu, Jyothi, Rabia(suhanasafar), Himani and all the readers of my previous fanfics... really touched by ur lovely comments...Big smile

 



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WARNING TO THE READERS!!!

In order to save electriciity power... please inform the near ones that u r reading this poem online... If in case u fell asleep reading it half way they can atleast switch off the computer  Wink  LOL  LOL  LOL

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Posted: 13 February 2008 at 3:45am | IP Logged

 

PYAAR HAI

 

Ek parisi dikhti ladki ko dekho,

Khubsurati mey maat dejaye sabko,

 Naujawan iss Ladkey ko dekho,

Dildar aisa, dost banaleta pal mey sabko.

 

 

Pyaarisi , nazuk si ladki hai,

Albela saaf dilka ladka hai,

Naam Ladkey ka Rocky aur ladki ka Parul hai,

Inki Prem kahani suneko kya aap vyakul hai?

 

 

Aaj yeh Miley kinte saalon baad,

Bachpan ke din agaye inko yaad,

Parul ab bhi waisey hi sharmili thi,

Rocky ke mijaj mey abhi masti thi.

 

 

Papa ki yeh Ladli Parul Papa ki zindagi hai,

Parul se ab judi unki har khushi hai,

Maa ka dulara yeh Rocky Dilka sachha hai,

Maa hamesha maanti Rocky to ab bhi baccha hai.

 

 

College mey Miltey jo Rocky Parul hastey gatey,

Naa janey Kiss pal Inkey jud gaye naatey,

Ek dusrey ko kitney kareeb se jaan liya tha,

Saari kami aur khubiyon ke sath Apna liya tha.

 

 

Parul ko Rocky ki baatein hasati thi,

Rocky ko Parul ki nadani jachti thi,

Naadani mey tha Parul ka bholapan,

Rock ki baaton mey tha kitna Apnapan.

 

 

Aapas ke lagaav ka dono ehsaas kar rahey the,

Rishtey ki mithass ko mehsuus kar rahey the,

Aagayi jo jawani inpar dil mey laakho khwab the,

Samjh rahe the ekduje key liye kitne khaas the.

 

 

Ek din jo Rocky bike se giraa,

Parul ke seeney mey dard tha bhara,

Rocky pe haq samjhkey Parul chillati ussey phatkarti,

Rocky chupchaap sunta, ussey yeh daantpyaari lagti.

 

 

Parul ko jo koi rulaye,

Rocky ko yeh sahen nahi hopaye,

Koi jo Parul ko chedatey huee dikh jaye,

Uski shamat ussii pal aajaye.

 

 

Prem ki raah pey yeh dono nikal rahey the,

Dil mey bepanaah pyaar liye ab saath ek hogaye the,

Dil key jasbaat bataney ka achaa mauka ayaa,

Rocky ney tay kiya VALENTINE's DAY jo hai Ayaa.

 

 

 Valentines day ki woh subah dono miley,

Dono ke dil mey na janey kitne phool khiley,

Rocky ne sunder taufa detey huee kaha,

"My love is for U, My life is for u,

Forever in my heart I live for u, I love U"

Parul sharmayi aur phool letey hue kaha,

"My love is with u, My life is with u,

Forever in my heart I belong to u, I Love U"

 

 

Dono ne dil ki baatein kahin

aur galey lagkey ekduje ko apnaliya,

Manoo dononey iss

khusbsurat pal ko saannso mey samaa liya.

 

 

Parul ke Papa ko Rocky kabhi bhi pasand nahi tha,

Rocky ke papa kehtey Iss nalayak ko door rakhna sahi tha,

Dono baatein kartey kaisa yeh Rocky hero bantaa phirta hai,

Exams mey jabki yeh justpass nahi zero lakar hi rehta hai.

 

 

Saath Saath Jo chal rahey the Parul aur Rocky ek din,

Parul Key Papa ney dekh liya unhe usdin,

Parul ke kaanoo mey kuch Rocky keh raha tha,

Parul Sharmayee To Rockyney usey bahon mey kass raha tha.

 

 

Parul key Pita(JK) ney Rocky key Pita(Ashu) ko ghar bulaya,

Soch Soch kar Inn dono ka Dimaag chakraya,

Jk Apni beti ki har khushi ko Apnaye,

Magar kaise Pita ke roop mey Rocky ko apna damaad banaye,

 

 

Rocky Zimmedari leney layak nahi tha,

Jk Jaantey they Wah Aatma nirbhar nahi tha,

Ashu Jaantey the Beta pyaar to kar legaa,

Befikri iski rahi to farz kaise nibhayega.

 

 

Sacche Pyaar key ehsaas ko samjhtey dono,

Isliye Tay kiya Inka Ek imtihaan leney ko,

Parul ko Pucha, Ek din pyaar sey,

" Kya koi chahaney wala dil mey Basgaya hai?

Parul Boli, " Naaraz Na honaa Papa,

Rocky key Pyaar ko maine Dil sey Apnaliya hai."

 

 

Jk ne Apni sehmi hue beti ko galey lagaya,

Maa ney Mammta sey Maathey ko sehlaya,

Kaha " Pyaar to karti ho Pyaar ki gehrayee Ko samjho,

Hum Jo imtihaan rakhtey hain Us mey Jeet kar niklo.

Parul Ney pal mey Hammi Bhar di thi,

Khush hue jaanker badoko unkey pyaar ki kadar thi.

 

 

Rocky key Pita ney ussey Bulaya,

Uskey pyaar ko paney ke liye Ek imtihaan hai batlaya,

Rocky jaankar khush tha badoo ney nahi dhamkaya hai,

Kaha imtihaan kya cheez hai pyar ko zindagi jab banaya hai.

 

 

Badoo key beech Parul aur Rocky bethey the,

Imtihaan akhir kya hai? yehi soch rahe the,

Badoone kaha,"Imtihaan yeh hai

Ek saal tak dono,Apni khud ki kamaee pe rahogey,

Saath saath kaam uss ek saal mey nahi karogey,

Ek saal mey har mahiney 5000 Maa Baap ko dogey,

Naa depaye to Saal ke akhir mey heesaab kardedogey,

Iss ek saal tum dono apney pyaar ki numaish nahi karogey,

Paar karpaye jo ek saal ka yeh niyam to pyaar jeeta warna haraa yeh manlogey.

 

 

Parul aur Rocky Tayaar ho gaye,

Unhe lagaa ab to pyaarbhare sapne saakar hogaye,

Imtihaan chal diya.. Parul aur Rocky ab kuch karana chah rahe the,

Ek key baad ek Kaam ko khoj apney dam par jeeney jaa rahe the.

 

 

Parul baacho ko ghar jaa kar padhati,

Office mey jakar part time accounts suljhati,

Rocky ideas liye kaam nahi dhundpa raha tha,

Jidhar jaaoo udhar khali haath laut raha tha.

 

 

Rocky kuch mahinoo mey apni lachaari samjh raha tha,

Har ek paeee keliye doston ke agey hath phaila raha tha,

Parul ko samjh mey ayaa Rocky ne kitne mahino ghar 5000 nahi diye hain,

Rocky jaan gaya tha Imtihaan sey Badey unhe kya samjha rahein hain.

 

 

Parul Rocky ka dard phone par baantati,

Rocky ander sey tuutt raha tha woh yeh jaanati,

Rocky pehli baar jaansaka zindagi itni asaan nahi hai,

Bhagwan se gidgidaya'Parul ke beigair meri zindagi nahi hai'.

 

 

Parul ne kaha woh jeet jayengey wah usseu kuch paise lelega,

Rocky ne kaha niyati kuch bhi karey wah sahi rastey parhi chalega,

Parul sunkar kehney lagii tumse pyaar hai,

Tumne jo aaj kaha iss pyaar par aaj Fakr hai.

 

 

Saal khatm honey ko sirf paanch mahiney the baaki,

Parul ne har mahiney dediya tha kaffi,

Rocky battery baichney ka chota kaam karta,

Amdani bahot kam thi ghar kuch nahi deta.

 

 

Ek din Parul ko bukhaar ayaa,

Viral flu hai Doc ne batayaa,

Ab Parul ki bhi amdani kam hogayi,

Wah phir bhi raat din mehnat karti gayi.

 

 

Dekh ussey Rocky bhi josh mey ayaa,

Sainkado dealers ke pass jaa jaa kar contacts banaya,

19 ghantoo kaam karnelagaa aur khud ko majboot banaya.

Parul aur Rocky mann se majboot bangaye,

Shareer thak jata lekin wah Ekgarchit hogaye.

 

 

Kuch teen mahino mey Rocky sales executive bhi bangaya,

Eke k paii jodd bank mey daal saal ka hisaab jamgaya,

Saal ke akhri din mey Dono kaam kar ghar ko lautey,

Badey bethey the aur hisaab unkey samney rakhey.

 

 

Dono jeet gaye the magar akadd nahi unhoney dikhayi,

Badoo ke pair chukaar ,abbhi chotey hain yeh baat jatlayi,

Parul Rocky ko dekh garv se muskurayi,

Rocky ne dekha aur tumhi prerna ho baat batayi.

 

 

Jeet ne pucha kaho kaisa gaya yeh Ek saal,

Rocky haskar bola,"Mehnat kar ubhari hai asli khaal."

Ashu ney ussey galey lagaya aur rakha sarpar hath,

Maa ne dubla hogaya keh kar pyaar se phera hath.

 

 

Parul ney kaha Is ek saalney pyaar ka har ek rang dikhlaya,

Jaisa aapne kaha tha Pyaar ki gehrayee ko samjhaya,

Jeet ney apni ladli beti ko galey lagaya,

Maa ne pyaar se chum kar uski jeet ko sarhaya.

 

 

Badoo ney kaha" Hum sirf sapney ko hakikat sey parakh rahey the,

Humney Bhi prem vivah kiya hai pyaar ko majboot banaa rahey the.

 

 

Rocky ney kaha," Sacch mey Aapney mujhe zindagi ka Aaiena dikhlaya hai,

Pyaar hai magar Pyaar sey juddee zimmedari ka ehsaas karaya hai.

 

 

Badoo ney Inkey sacchey pyaar ko khushi khushi apnaya,

Rocky aur Parul ney khushi ke asoosey badoo ka ashirwad paya.

Ek saal mey dono par kitna kuch bitaa hai,

Rocky aur Parul ka Pyaar akhir mey jeeta hai.

Ekaant mey Rocky ney Parul ko pyaarse chumaa,

Parul khushi se ussey lipti dono ka dil jhuma.

 

 

Pyaar ki jeet pyaar ki sachaayii mey hai,

Pyaar ki reet jasbaaton ki gehrayi mey hai,

Pyaar marne marney ka naam nahi Jeeney ka rukh hai,

Jahan Pyaar ka nivass ho wahi paayaa jaata Sukh hai...

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Edited by bhoomikauttam - 13 February 2008 at 4:23am

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Posted: 13 February 2008 at 11:01pm | IP Logged
bhoomi this was just awesome, lovely , wonderful. running out of adjectives .....

The poem it tooooo goooood. Clap

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Posted: 13 February 2008 at 11:17pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by golu_1677

bhoomi this was just awesome, lovely , wonderful. running out of adjectives .....

The poem it tooooo goooood. Clap

 

Awww Golu i felt so touched by ur words of praise.Embarrassed.felt it surely had something which made u feel nice n happy... and a big hug ur way as ur response surely encouraged me... and felt the experiment of poetry  in story  worked... Big smile.....Wrote it just few days back and yup ur response on this one  is the first to come..so is special for me..... Hug 

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Posted: 14 February 2008 at 2:53am | IP Logged
hey bhoomi a lovely poem written by u just loved every word every emotion was well described amazing poem and an amazind story thanks 4 the wonderful gift a big and a warm jappi 4 u and wish u a very happy valentines dayHug

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Posted: 14 February 2008 at 3:03am | IP Logged

Originally posted by jyothi_cool

hey bhoomi a lovely poem written by u just loved every word every emotion was well described amazing poem and an amazind story thanks 4 the wonderful gift a big and a warm jappi 4 u and wish u a very happy valentines dayHug

Hi Jyothi dear, hope u r doign well and hope u continue like that... Am glad u liked this one... so it was na over dose my poems...LOL..It makes me happy that u liked it dear... and u felt each emotions in those little lines came up.. i tried my best... thanks for ur wishes...and yup A happy valentiens day to u too...hope true loves always surround u and make u stronger each day.Big smile

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Posted: 14 February 2008 at 10:33am | IP Logged
Simply awesome Clap...it was so beautifully put forth...hats off dear...just amazing...as i've always said u're simply the best.. Thumbs Up

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