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Hi guys
i've wrote a script/FF
its called Vishwaas and is based on relationships
Preview of Vishvaas 2 posted below
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The characters
Dharam Dharam is the son only son to king and queen of Aryanagar. He is a handsome and obedient prince who is shy. Dharam falls in love with the princess of Avail. Dharam is very attached to Veer, he also sees Veer as his love guru some times 😆
Veer Veer is the only child to Niviriti-Maharaj Aryavardhan's sister. He is very close to his cousin and best friend Dharam. Veer is goodlooking, brave and very naughty. He falls in love with a dakoo girl called Shera and changes her forever.
Sia Sia is also the only child to her parents, the monarchs of Avail. She is very beautiful and is awaiting her pronce charming who will come in the form of Rajkumar Dharam.
Shera/Vishva She was a dakoo until she met Veer who changed her forever but it was a twist of fate which changed her from Shera to Vishva...from a dakoo to a princess
Aryavardhan He is the king of Aryanagar. He loves his son very much. He wants to get Dharam married to his best friend Samar Singh's daughter Saanvi
Nivriti She is a widowed lady who is living with her brothers back in Aryanagar. She gave birth to a dead baby which was exchanged with a newly born by her nurse and she is unknown to that fact.
Saanvi Saanvi is the beautiful princess of Sumaiya. She falls in love with Veer beleiving him to be Dharam. She dies in Veer's arms as the story progresses in the process of saving Veer.She is like an ideal person who is very lovable.
Samar Singh He is the king of Sumaiya. His wife has dies and has a daughter called Sanvi. He is aryavardhan's best friend and is very fond of Veer
Jaivardhan he is the antagonist of the story. He was elder to Aryavardhan yet he wasnt crowned king which made him jealous and he built hatred for aryavardhan and dharam and is willing to go to any means to get the throne
Agni he is the son to jaivardhan. He does not think for himself and is a puppet who dances to his fathers tunes. He later falls in love with Vishva
other charecters who arent so important:
Sanchi- Vishva's maid in waiting
Veer's dadaji- king of Rajgardh want Veer to look after his kingdom
Maharani Sunaina- Dharam's mother and queen of aryanagar
Maharaj Natraj-king of Avail and Sia's dad
Maharani Prateeksha-Sia's mother and queen of avail
Harsh-Sia's first suitor
Prabhali- Sanvi's maid and care taker
Shikha-Shera's friend
Tasha-Shera's enemy
''' '''' '
The story:
Niviriti gives birth to a dead child who is replced by a new born by her nurse who dies without revealing this secret so nobody knows this. Veer's biological mum feels she gave birth to a dead child and mourns over it yet continues living life.
Dharam n Veer grow up together and they attend the Maha Shivratri mela every year.
When tehy were going this time round they are attacked by a monkey crew(ppl who act like monkeys) who were hired by Jaivardhan to finish Dharam off. Also this time round Dharam Veer meet a Rajkumari called Sia who accidentally fell into Dharam's arms while picking out mangos from a mango tree. Dharam falls in love with her immediately but she is annoyed at him for no apparent reason and so captivates him and Veer. This is where monkey crew come and attack Dharam and Veer.
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updates can be found on pages 1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,13,14,15,17,1 8,19,21,22,23,25,26,28, 29,32,34.36,39,42,45,47,49,51,55,56,60,62,66,69,72,75,79,81, 85
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The monkey ppl attack dharam,veer and sia.
Dharam n veer pull of some great stunts and beat up the monkey crew
one of them is going for sia
Sia: aahhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!
dharam comes in between and gives the guys a punch
Dharam:dharam ke rehte hue sia ko koi haath bhi nahin laga sakta
dharam n veer continue to fight,they are standing back to back
Veer: tumne toh abhi se ishq ladhana shuru kar dia...tumhari sia ke chakar mein mujhe bhool toh nahin jao ge
Dharam:ji app kaun hai?
both laugh
Dharam:dharam ke liye veer ki dosti se badh kar kuch nahin
they finish off monkey crew who finally think its rite to run away
Dharam has a cut on his hand which he is just examine when sia comes up n takes a cloth from her dupatta n clears up all the blood
Veer clears his throat loudly and leaves
Dharam: veer rooko toh...
dharam smiles
He looks at sia
Dharam: app rehne dijiye...meh teek hoon
Sia:itni narazgi
Dharam: ji
Sia: ap humme apna mante he nahin...mana ki hummne ghalti ki apko pehchan ne mein par phir bhi ap humme maaf kar ke dost toh bana he sakte hai
Dharam(in an undertone):apko mein kabse apna bana chuka hoon
Sia: apne kuch kaha
Dharam: nahin...mein toh..woh mujhe aur veer ko raat guzarne ke liye jaga mileh gi
Sia: haan haan kyun nahin...hum abhi apni dasi se keh kar kuch intazam kar te hai...
sia turns to go but trips over the carpet and fslls
Sia: bachao!!
Dharam catches her
Dharam:agaya
Sia:ji
Dharam: apko bachane...phirse
they have an eyelock
they finally leave one another
Dharam: mein abhi veer ko baata kar aya...ki humare rehne ka intazam ho gaye
but he doesnt move
Sia:umm...app...app...jaanwale umm te
dharam smiles n walks out
outside Veer is talking to himself
yawning loudly
Veer:najane baat kahan tak ponchi hogi...kahi woh sherni dharam ka shikaar...
before he cud finish dharam interupted
Dharam: veer humare rehne ka imtazam hogaya
Veer: woh choodo...tumhari aur uss sherni ki baat kaha taak poonchi
Dharam: aise koi baat nahin
Veer: accha toh andar kya ho raha tha aur woh kya tha...dharam ke rehte hue sia ko koi haath nahin laga sakta
Dharam: woh toh...mein...
Veer: arre mere sheer agar woh sherni hai toh tum kahan kuch kaam ho...pyar kar te ho toh bol doh
Dharam:tut...nahin nahin...ab chalo
both boys walk off
Sia: dasi unn dono ladko ke liye rehne ka intazam karo
Dasi: par rajkumari ji ko jagahi nahin
Sia: hum jo kehte hai woh karo...abb jao
Dasi: ji
Sia comes up to dharam n veer
Veer: rajkumari ji...kya kuch khane ko mile ga...woh aaj subha si kuch nahin mila
Sia:ji apko tambu mein kuch mile ga
Veer:shukriya
veer exits
dharam remains gazing at sia
Sia: baaton baaton mein uska naam poochna toh bhool hi gaye jisne mujhe bhachaya...
Dharam: humara naam dharam hai
Sia:humara naam
Dharam: sia hai...jaante hai
Sia: kya mein pooch sakti hoon kaise
Dharam: appki dasi apko jab pukar rahi ti tab humne suna tha
theres a pause
Dharam:si
Sia: rajkumar dharam...hum apse kuch kehna chahte hai
Dharam: ji kahiye
Sia: shukriya...app ne humme aaj bachaya...aaj do bar...girne si...humme aacha laga...
Dharam: mujhe bhi
Sia: ji
Dharam: kuch nahi
Dasi comes in
Dasi:rajkumari apke araam ka
Sia: ah rahe hai...tum jao
Dharam: umm mein chalta hoon
dharam begins to leave n sia too exits while dharam turns back n looks at her
to be continued...
hope u liked it
Shona
Preview of Vishvaas 2:
Nivi is shocked when she figures Veer is not her biological son and trys to hide this from the whole world but this is revealed to someone else also who wants to tell the whole world. With this of course there is romance between the newly weds Dharam and Sia and Veer and Vishva and also the struggle of Dharam and Veer as they rule kingdoms tangled in a web of misunderstandings but theres somebody out there determined to clear all the misunderstandings...will they manage and will friendship and love be able to survive all troubles? all these questions will be answered in Vishvaas 2!!
i've wrote a script/FF
its called Vishwaas and is based on relationships
Preview of Vishvaas 2 posted below
'' '
The characters
Dharam Dharam is the son only son to king and queen of Aryanagar. He is a handsome and obedient prince who is shy. Dharam falls in love with the princess of Avail. Dharam is very attached to Veer, he also sees Veer as his love guru some times 😆
Veer Veer is the only child to Niviriti-Maharaj Aryavardhan's sister. He is very close to his cousin and best friend Dharam. Veer is goodlooking, brave and very naughty. He falls in love with a dakoo girl called Shera and changes her forever.
Sia Sia is also the only child to her parents, the monarchs of Avail. She is very beautiful and is awaiting her pronce charming who will come in the form of Rajkumar Dharam.
Shera/Vishva She was a dakoo until she met Veer who changed her forever but it was a twist of fate which changed her from Shera to Vishva...from a dakoo to a princess
Aryavardhan He is the king of Aryanagar. He loves his son very much. He wants to get Dharam married to his best friend Samar Singh's daughter Saanvi
Nivriti She is a widowed lady who is living with her brothers back in Aryanagar. She gave birth to a dead baby which was exchanged with a newly born by her nurse and she is unknown to that fact.
Saanvi Saanvi is the beautiful princess of Sumaiya. She falls in love with Veer beleiving him to be Dharam. She dies in Veer's arms as the story progresses in the process of saving Veer.She is like an ideal person who is very lovable.
Samar Singh He is the king of Sumaiya. His wife has dies and has a daughter called Sanvi. He is aryavardhan's best friend and is very fond of Veer
Jaivardhan he is the antagonist of the story. He was elder to Aryavardhan yet he wasnt crowned king which made him jealous and he built hatred for aryavardhan and dharam and is willing to go to any means to get the throne
Agni he is the son to jaivardhan. He does not think for himself and is a puppet who dances to his fathers tunes. He later falls in love with Vishva
other charecters who arent so important:
Sanchi- Vishva's maid in waiting
Veer's dadaji- king of Rajgardh want Veer to look after his kingdom
Maharani Sunaina- Dharam's mother and queen of aryanagar
Maharaj Natraj-king of Avail and Sia's dad
Maharani Prateeksha-Sia's mother and queen of avail
Harsh-Sia's first suitor
Prabhali- Sanvi's maid and care taker
Shikha-Shera's friend
Tasha-Shera's enemy
''' '''' '
The story:
Niviriti gives birth to a dead child who is replced by a new born by her nurse who dies without revealing this secret so nobody knows this. Veer's biological mum feels she gave birth to a dead child and mourns over it yet continues living life.
Dharam n Veer grow up together and they attend the Maha Shivratri mela every year.
When tehy were going this time round they are attacked by a monkey crew(ppl who act like monkeys) who were hired by Jaivardhan to finish Dharam off. Also this time round Dharam Veer meet a Rajkumari called Sia who accidentally fell into Dharam's arms while picking out mangos from a mango tree. Dharam falls in love with her immediately but she is annoyed at him for no apparent reason and so captivates him and Veer. This is where monkey crew come and attack Dharam and Veer.
updates can be found on pages 1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,13,14,15,17,1 8,19,21,22,23,25,26,28, 29,32,34.36,39,42,45,47,49,51,55,56,60,62,66,69,72,75,79,81, 85
The monkey ppl attack dharam,veer and sia.
Dharam n veer pull of some great stunts and beat up the monkey crew
one of them is going for sia
Sia: aahhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!
dharam comes in between and gives the guys a punch
Dharam:dharam ke rehte hue sia ko koi haath bhi nahin laga sakta
dharam n veer continue to fight,they are standing back to back
Veer: tumne toh abhi se ishq ladhana shuru kar dia...tumhari sia ke chakar mein mujhe bhool toh nahin jao ge
Dharam:ji app kaun hai?
both laugh
Dharam:dharam ke liye veer ki dosti se badh kar kuch nahin
they finish off monkey crew who finally think its rite to run away
Dharam has a cut on his hand which he is just examine when sia comes up n takes a cloth from her dupatta n clears up all the blood
Veer clears his throat loudly and leaves
Dharam: veer rooko toh...
dharam smiles
He looks at sia
Dharam: app rehne dijiye...meh teek hoon
Sia:itni narazgi
Dharam: ji
Sia: ap humme apna mante he nahin...mana ki hummne ghalti ki apko pehchan ne mein par phir bhi ap humme maaf kar ke dost toh bana he sakte hai
Dharam(in an undertone):apko mein kabse apna bana chuka hoon
Sia: apne kuch kaha
Dharam: nahin...mein toh..woh mujhe aur veer ko raat guzarne ke liye jaga mileh gi
Sia: haan haan kyun nahin...hum abhi apni dasi se keh kar kuch intazam kar te hai...
sia turns to go but trips over the carpet and fslls
Sia: bachao!!
Dharam catches her
Dharam:agaya
Sia:ji
Dharam: apko bachane...phirse
they have an eyelock
they finally leave one another
Dharam: mein abhi veer ko baata kar aya...ki humare rehne ka intazam ho gaye
but he doesnt move
Sia:umm...app...app...jaanwale umm te
dharam smiles n walks out
outside Veer is talking to himself
yawning loudly
Veer:najane baat kahan tak ponchi hogi...kahi woh sherni dharam ka shikaar...
before he cud finish dharam interupted
Dharam: veer humare rehne ka imtazam hogaya
Veer: woh choodo...tumhari aur uss sherni ki baat kaha taak poonchi
Dharam: aise koi baat nahin
Veer: accha toh andar kya ho raha tha aur woh kya tha...dharam ke rehte hue sia ko koi haath nahin laga sakta
Dharam: woh toh...mein...
Veer: arre mere sheer agar woh sherni hai toh tum kahan kuch kaam ho...pyar kar te ho toh bol doh
Dharam:tut...nahin nahin...ab chalo
both boys walk off
Sia: dasi unn dono ladko ke liye rehne ka intazam karo
Dasi: par rajkumari ji ko jagahi nahin
Sia: hum jo kehte hai woh karo...abb jao
Dasi: ji
Sia comes up to dharam n veer
Veer: rajkumari ji...kya kuch khane ko mile ga...woh aaj subha si kuch nahin mila
Sia:ji apko tambu mein kuch mile ga
Veer:shukriya
veer exits
dharam remains gazing at sia
Sia: baaton baaton mein uska naam poochna toh bhool hi gaye jisne mujhe bhachaya...
Dharam: humara naam dharam hai
Sia:humara naam
Dharam: sia hai...jaante hai
Sia: kya mein pooch sakti hoon kaise
Dharam: appki dasi apko jab pukar rahi ti tab humne suna tha
theres a pause
Dharam:si
Sia: rajkumar dharam...hum apse kuch kehna chahte hai
Dharam: ji kahiye
Sia: shukriya...app ne humme aaj bachaya...aaj do bar...girne si...humme aacha laga...
Dharam: mujhe bhi
Sia: ji
Dharam: kuch nahi
Dasi comes in
Dasi:rajkumari apke araam ka
Sia: ah rahe hai...tum jao
Dharam: umm mein chalta hoon
dharam begins to leave n sia too exits while dharam turns back n looks at her
to be continued...
hope u liked it
Shona
Preview of Vishvaas 2:
Nivi is shocked when she figures Veer is not her biological son and trys to hide this from the whole world but this is revealed to someone else also who wants to tell the whole world. With this of course there is romance between the newly weds Dharam and Sia and Veer and Vishva and also the struggle of Dharam and Veer as they rule kingdoms tangled in a web of misunderstandings but theres somebody out there determined to clear all the misunderstandings...will they manage and will friendship and love be able to survive all troubles? all these questions will be answered in Vishvaas 2!!
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