FF:RK ki family -IMP note pg 2

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Posted: 16 years ago
hi everyone-its me agen-shona
im back with another ff-its like the second season of my first one
i hope u will like this too
ok lets get to the FF

its based around a married ranya n their son n daughter

R:ranbir
K:kanya
A:ayaan-ranya's 4 year old son
J:janvi-ranya's 3 year old daughter

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kanya yawns as she wakes up,putting on her slippers she goes in the bathroom

a while later she comes out...water dripping from her hair and in a blue n red saree
she opens the curtains and then starts drying her hair

some of the hair falls on ranbir

he makes a funny face
then opens one eye

K:rannu ootho naa

R: oothne ki kimat

K:ek thapad

R:hai bhagwan kya biwi mili hai mujhe...subha oothne pe kuch nahin...

before he could finish the sentence kanya bent down n kissed him on the cheek

R:wow bhagwan kya biwi mujhe mili...har subha morning kiss

he gives a broad smile


after a while he also comes out of teh bathroom when he sees kanya infront of the dressing table

K:rannu aaj office nahin jana

R: aaj chooti...

K:kyun?

R:aaj....aaj...um.. aaj ki tarek nahin yaad kanya

K:hmm aaj um 11th may hai toh kya

R:aaj kitna khaas din hai...aaj...aaj...kanya woh aaj Happy wifes day hai

K:oh really

R:haan isliye aaj office mein chuti aur pura din apni wife ke saath...

he was getting closer when

Mallika walked in

M:oh so sorry

K:nahin mum app aye

M:woh tum logo ko dehr ho gayye na iss liye

R:mom apka beta itna sexy hai ki kanya...

K:ranbir!!

they laughed

they walked downsrairs to the breakfast table

ayaan n janvi were already there

J:papa app late ho gayye...so i win

A:papa har gaye papa har gaye

BD:jis ladke ko harna khabhi ata he nahin tha woh aaj khush hai harne par

R:BD bachon se harne mein maza ata hai...unki ki musqurrahat mujhe pura din khush rakti hai

M:sach humara ranbir kitna badal gaya hai

ranbir and his kids had a race of who get to the breakfast table first

BD:sach ayaan ke janne ki badh jis tarah sab kuch badhal gaya aur jis tarah kanya ne sab sambhal liye uska vakay koi javab nahin


the kids got ready to leave n so did ranbir

K:bye babies...ayaan apna khayal rakh na aur janvi apna lunch khalena

ranbir got to the car when

R:opps mein apni chabiyan bhool gaya...mein abhi aya

he goes back inside where kanya is waiting with them

he pulls her hand which has the keys towards him and gives her a hug n kiss

R:love u...bye...i promise jaaldi ah jaunga

on the other hand a car comes near the kids and a hand comes and swoops them in.

ranbir n kanya are still looking at each other unaware of what has just happen


Edited by **Shona** - 16 years ago

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Posted: 16 years ago
thats really cute..continue and who kidnapped the kids?? πŸ˜• Natasha? πŸ˜†
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Posted: 16 years ago
yay!! you are back with another fan fic!! i love your ffs.
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Posted: 16 years ago
ur back with another great ff
love ur ffs
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey welcome back with a great ff.
i just loved this ff..
it is so cute.
i cant wait to read more.
please do continue soon please
pretty please
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Posted: 16 years ago
ok heres next:
ranbir goes outside and finds the kids missing

R:ayaan, janvi kaha ho tum log....papa ko chedna band karo aur chalo

he finds a letter on his car
he reads it aloud

R:tumhe kya laga Ranbir Nanda....kanya ke saath tum puri zindagi shanti se guzar loge,...nahin...mein aise hoone nahin dunga....kanya par tumhara koi adhikar nahin....tumne usske sath dhoka kiya aur uski saaza tumhe mile gi....tumhe pal pal maarna hoga...tumhare bache mere paas hai

ranbir looks stunned....he turns back n sees kanya watering the flowers smiling away to herself

Ranbir gets in his car and thinks

R:mein kanya ko kuch nahin bata sakta...wih tuut jaye gi

he drives of to the police station thinking abt the past...has he ever cheated kanya...i have told her every lil thing in the last 5 years so what is this person saying

in the police station ranbir explains everything to the officer who assures him the kids will be found

all day ranbir thought abt where the kids cud be searching here and there even though he knew the kids will not be there he had to do all this

in the evening kamya called

R: hello

K:rannu bache kahan hai...sham ho gaye hai aur unka koi pata he nahi...tumhare he paas honge janti hoon par maa ka dil hai...zara une phone do

R:ah..woh...woh dono maria aunty ke saath khel rahe hai

K:ok abb jaldi se ayan aur janvi ko lihe kar aajo

R: haan...ok

K:i love u...bye

R:bye

K:u dont love me

R:kanya...yh kya mazak hai

K:kya hua tum parishaan kyun ho

R:kuch nahin mein abhi aya


kanya at home thinking that something is wrong n she tells malika abt the convo with rannu

Rannu arrives home...not knowing how to tell everyone

K: lo bache ah gaye

M:ranbir janvi aur ayan kahan hai

R:woh...woh

K:ranbir bache kahan hai!!

R:kanya...bache...koi bachon ko kidnapped kar ke...kar ke leh...leh gaye...

K:kya....(shes going mad)ranbir mere bache kahan hai...mujhe ayan aur janvi vhahiye abhi...mere bache

M:par kaise...tum kahan theh

R: mein...mein undar chabiyan leh ne ...leh ne aya tha(crying)police ko khabar kar diya hai

K:ranbir!!!!tum aisa kaise kar sakte ho...mujhe bache chahiya abhi...woh kaha hoge...kis hall mein..kana kaya hoga ya nahin...aur tum ...tumne mujhe batana zaruri nahin samja...kyun....

R:kanya

he goes over trying to calm her

R:kanya...relax mil jayen ge...mein kuch bhi kar ke une lehaunga

K:baas...kayal nahin rakh sakte toh vapas kaise laoge....mujhe kuch nahin chahiye...nere bache

R:ok ok pehle pani toh pehlo

K:jab tak bache nahin milte tab tak mein na kuch kaungi nah he kuch piyun gi

BD:chup kar...pehle si he itni patli hai...ranbir kuch bhi kar ke bachonko leh ao



shona
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Posted: 16 years ago
Thanks everyone for the compliments n reading it 😊
**Rekha** thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
wElComE bAcK ShONe WiTh Ff iT sik Do caRrY ON PlZ 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
really intersting...pleasee continuee πŸ˜›
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey shona..
that was really.. good.
aww poor kanya..
continue soon please