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hi guys my name is ria. this is my firsat ff. please tell me how u like it.
Aaliiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii ki bachi kahan mari ho……..!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" a guy was screaming on top of his lungs. We see a girl running up the stairs. "a rahi hon bhai…. Kya baat hai." "tumhe kitni baar kaha hai meri cheezon ko haath mat lagay karo." "I am sorry bhai" aliya came near to crying. "sorry does not make up for anything. don't dare touch my thing ever again." aaliya started crying. Guy looks at her angrily not melting with the tears. "angad apni behen se kis tarhan baat karte hain yeh kab seekho ge." "you stay out of it mom." angad shouted at her too and took his things and left. He had always been like that. Anger stayed on the tip of his nose. He had no respect for anyone. He would talk to his mom the same way he talked to his young sister. There was one thing he hated with a passion and that was women. Which included his mother and sister too. Angad always complained to god why he created such things as women. There was n particular reason for him hating women he just did. he had never loved any one in his life. Angad was arrogant because every one loved him. He did not feel the need to love anyone. He received love from every corner but never decided to return it. Aaliya naina and dilip are angads family they all are different from him.
Angad starts his Ferrari and drives off. He owned his own private security firm. Firm made up of five people. A computer expert. An accountent. PA and an ex militant and angad himself. All work together to save people. Working as a private investigators. Sometime the law. Sometime an outlaw. Angad is a perfectionist. Likes everything to be top, the best. He gets his weapons from pro for mission. Gets his weapons and equipments supplied from the world secret agency (sorry made it up could not think of anything.) no one knows about this agency accept from the these five people and some of the richest people in usa. He only likes to work with people who can provide him best of money. A middle class cannot afford to stay with angad as he is not affordable. The fee is too high for a middle class person.
Hw arrived at his work. He locks his car and opens the door of luxurious house. As soon as he enters a girl comes running. "hi boss" mishti came running. Andag gave her a disgusted look. In his eyes women can only do seducing, sex and betrayal. He took the file from mishti and entered his office. We then see a man entering. "hi angad kaise hi ajj." said josh. "theek tum kaise ho. Aur yeh kya musibat mere pale bhandhi hai." josh laughs. "acha hai na kaam ache se karo ge." angaqd face was still fix. "sorry lakin in baton ko choro. Naya case aya hai." "hmm fees de paye ge ke nahi." "angad please. Koi kaam bag hair fees ke bhi kar lena chahiye. But u don't worry party rich hai."
i know a very short a boring part nohting much to it. but hey first time what else can u expect
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