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Wow! that was awesome! cont soon! LOL Clap

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yeah.. it is really good. pl<<zz cont. soon....
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Posted: 06 September 2005 at 1:19am | IP Logged
Very nice tina Clap
COnt soon plssss
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Hey someone please write a LR & CJ fan fic Big smile
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Hey Tina it was very beautifulBig smile but where is ur next part?Confused Me waitingEmbarrassed

Edited by JK_5 - 06 September 2005 at 7:18pm
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wow, great idea for a pre-quel? do they do stuff like that in hindi serials (sequels, etc)??? LOL LOL LOL
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Originally posted by jasmin

wow, great idea for a pre-quel? do they do stuff like that in hindi serials (sequels, etc)??? LOL LOL LOL

I don't think soConfused but u can never be sure of anything with indian serialsOuch 

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jassi luked at da house again as she began walking twords the enterence, suddenly a man blocked da way

man: excuse me mam, who r u?

jassi: i am jassi, jasmeet walia

man: alrite, u may go

jassi waz stunned at da security around da house, she saw ten more on da house grounds with bloodhounds!!!

jassi slowly began walking twords the door, she still waz in awe of da house, jassi then came twords da porch, went up to da door and rang da bell
jassi waited impatiently outside for 5 min when someone opened da door

butler: hello mam, may i ask who u r?

jassi: i am jassi, jasmeet walia, im here to help armaan with a report

butler: so u r da rude, obnoxious gurl he haz been talking abt

jassi waz stunned to hear wut he said, armaan haz been telling everyone dat she waz an obnoxious and rude gurl, well thought jassi, she will have a "talk" with armaan . . . .

butler: Ms Walia, ppllz come in

jassi followed da butler into da living room

da room waz beautiful, it had white marble on da floor, and da room waz painted in a soft pink, with pink satin curtinz, da fire place had a beautiful carved design, and ontop of da fireplace waz a picture of armaan

jassi luked at da picture and a whole rage of anger came bak to her, but she had to admit, he did luk like a gentleman in da picture . . . .

suddenly a man walked behind jassi and patted her shoulder, jassi turned around, she waz surprised to see puru aka Mr Suri

jassi: MR SURI! what brings u here!?
jassi waz shocked

puru: well, i guess armaan didnt tell u, im armaanz father

jassi waz stunned, how cud mr. suri da prinicipal, be ARMAAN SURIz father, out of all ppl

puru: Mr sharma told me dat u will be helping armaan with hiz assignment and mark it, am i correct?

jassi barely uttered da words, yes, she still waz in shock

puru: jassi why dont u sit down,

jassi luked behind there and saw a leather couch, she sat down on it, puru sat on da leather coach infront of her

puru: jassi u must be hungrey, ill tell da cook to make u some pokore

jassi: no sir, its alrite

puru: no jassi, it will be my pleazure

jassi didnt want to insist, so she agreed

puru: rahul! tell micheal to make some pokore for jassi

rahul: yes sir

puru: so jassi!, i must ask u, how do u find armaan?

jassi waz stunned by da question, wut cud she say, shd she say dat hez a total insensiteve jerk, who only carez abt himself, or a foolish man, jassi cudnt utter a word

jassi: i ummmmmmmm . . . . i think dat hez . . . . ummmmmm . . . . hez? . . . . .hez

puru cut her off

puru: dat hez an insensitive jerk, who only carez abt himself, and a foolish man

jassi waz shocked Mr suri wud say sumthing like dat abt hiz sun, and most of all he thought da same thing as she did

puru: dont wrry jassi, i kno my son very well, he iz not a perfect boy, i can say dat, but i must tell u sumthing, he iz a sweet boy,

jassi laughed inside herself when she heard da wordz sweet boy

puru: he feelz dat he needs to have a tough exterior outside, so he wont get hurt again . . . . .

jassi: sir, i dont understand

puru: da thing iz jassi, when armaan waz a little boy, ppl wud teaze him, beacuse he didnt have many, friends as ppl wud say he waz a "loner" and anger grew inside of him, which began to change him, but wut really changed him waz da friends he made, like raj, i kno raj iz a nice young man, but like armaan he too iz coruppted with negaitvity dat it changed him, and now armaan iz who he iz

jassi felt sorry for armaan, but jassi still thought dat armaan iz a man now and he iz old enough to kno wut kind of decions to make, and wut kind of friendz to make

suddenly someone came in, it waz mallika, she waz wearin a purple suit, with bright yellow and orange flowerz Dead

mallika: (sweetly) hello uncle
mallika luked at jassi

mallika: Wut IZ SHE DOIN HERE!!!!!

jassi luked at mallika very cooly

puru: jassi waz invited here, to help armaan with a report

mallika: Uncle do u kno who she iz? shez da one who embarressed armaan infront of da skool, uncle she slapped him!

jassi luked at puru in shock, she knew puru wud think armaan waz rite and she waz wrong, no one wud believe why she did it

puru luked at jassi and smiled, then said: mallika, i kno wut jassi did, a student already told me and they also said armaan waz hurting a boy, i cant remember hiz name, and jassi slapped him to stop him from hurting dat boy

jassi waz shocked and surprised boy puruz wordz, she smiled

mallika luked at puru in anger, anguish, and shock

mallika: but . . .

puru: mallika end of disscussion

suddenly rahul came in with sum pokore and handed them out to all three of them
jassi began eating herz as mallika luked at jassi cruely, puru just watched on
they all finished and were not talking to eachother, each remained silent

suddenly, 2 women came in, one had frizzy curly hair light brown, and waz wearin a pink halter top dat said "hot and sexy" with a jean skirt, and black flip flopz
the other lady waz wearin a pink sari, with silver design and a blouse with sliver on it and a silver set to match, her hair waz tied in a bun, she waz definatly older than the other

the young gurl with da curly hair: hi dad! mallika baby ur here!

she goez to mallika who kissez her and gives her a hug

da lady with da sari: hello mallika sweetie (gives mallika a hug) hi dear(speaking to puru)

puru: jassi, i wud like to introduce u to my family, this is my wife illa,(pointing to da lady with da sari) and this is my daughter anjali aka angel (pointing to da gurl with da curly hair

angel luked at jassi, who waz wearin a light blue salwar kameez, with a light blue dupatta, she had light makeup on, hair tied in a ponytail,and waz wearin small glasses
angel then whispered sumthing in mallikaz ear and both mallika and angel began to laugh histerically

jassi felt totally embaressed, she felt like running from da spot, but even more, she felt like teaching them a lesson, but decided to remaian quiet

illa took a luk at jassi and gave her a disgusted luk and said: puru, why iz she here?!

jassi luked twords puru

puru: illa iz dat any way to treat guests, jassi iz here to help armaan on a project as instructed by hiz english teacher Mr sharma, and accepted by me

illa: puru, cudnt u get sumone better! Mallika can help armaan!

mallika smiled and luked anziously at puru

puru: NO! jassi haz been especially assigned to this task, and she will be da one to complete it

illa luked angerily at puru, but mostly jassi

angel: dad, i dont kno why, u brought j . . .ja. . . jjj, well who ever here, armaan iz a smart boy, he can do this on hiz own

puru got very angrey now and scremed: AMGEL! DONT EVER QUESTION MY MOTIVES AND TREAT JASSI WITH RESPECT

angel luked horrified at her fatherz words, as did mallika, illa waz shocked and inside herslef blamed jassi
jassi luked at puru sadly

jassi: sir, its alrite, its really not a fighting matter, well anywayz i shd begin helping armaan, where iz armaan anyway

puru: hez out, but will be bk later, why dont u go upstairz and wait for him

illa: i think she can wait her

angel: momz rite

puru: no she can wait in armaanz room and dats final

everyone became quiet
then rahul came in

puru: rahul can u show jassi to armaanz room?

rahul: certainly sir, jassi mam follow me

jassi got up and took one last look at each of da women in da room, who snarled at her, and then jassi followed rahul, but b4 she got up on da staircase dat lead to armaanz room she cud here someone saying sumthing

mallika: puru uncle, dat trench iz a piece of trash, i dont kno y u allowed her in

illa: mallikaz rite

angel nodded her head and said: yes mallikaz absoulutly rite

jassi sadly listened

rahul luked bak at jassi to see if she waz following him: jassi mam, r u coming

jassi woke up from her trance and said: hmm . . . oh YEs!

jassi followed rahul up da stairz, down da hallway to a door, where rahul stopped

rahul opened da door and said: jassi mam, this iz armaanz room, jassi went in, as rahul left for downstairz


u guyz im written da next part now, i thought of posting dis part first

hope u enjoy!!!!!!1

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